Apne Anjaam Ko Dekhega To(Riyaz)

by riyaz106 on April 18, 2010, 02:58:10 PM
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GHAZAL
Apne anjaam ko dekhega to dar jayega
Rait ka ghar na bana pal mein bikhar jayega
Thokrein khake tu mohtaat bana le Khud ko
    Mohtaat = Precautious
Thokron se jo sabaq lega sanwar jayega            
Raat lambi hai magar subha bhi aayegi zaroor
Gham ka darya bhi ye ek roz utar jayega
Jo hasad karta hai apna hi bura karta hai
         Hasad = Jealousness
Apni hi aag mein jal jal ke wo mar jayega
'Ashna' kufr hai mayoos khuda se hona
             Kufr  = Deny or doubt in power of Allah
Hoke mayoos khuda se tu kidhar jayega


Riyaz Ashna





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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2010, 03:00:47 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2010, 03:12:07 PM »
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Waah marvelous creation riyaz ji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2010, 03:20:21 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Superb
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2010, 03:48:25 PM »
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Bohat Achche Riyaz Bhai,.
Mashallah
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«Reply #5 on: April 18, 2010, 05:33:31 PM »
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       Bahut khoob bahut achha likha hai riyaz ji.  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2010, 06:04:53 PM »
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Bahot bahot shukriya Khwaish ji, ghazal pasand karne ke liye. Khush rahiye. 
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Bhai..

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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2010, 06:20:29 PM »
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bahut khoob Riyaz ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2010, 06:35:19 PM »
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Wakei bahaut acha likha hai...Akhri line toh bas choo gayi Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 18, 2010, 08:39:26 PM »
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GHAZAL
Apne anjaam ko dekhega to dar jayega
Rait ka ghar na bana pal mein bikhar jayega
Thokrein khake tu mohtaat bana le Khud ko
    Mohtaat = Precautious
Thokron se jo sabaq lega sanwar jayega            
Raat lambi hai magar subha bhi aayegi zaroor
Gham ka darya bhi ye ek roz utar jayega
Jo hasad karta hai apna hi bura karta hai
         Hasad = Jealousness
Apni hi aag mein jal jal ke wo mar jayega
'Ashna' kufr hai mayoos khuda se hona
             Kufr  = Deny or doubt in power of Allah
Hoke mayoos khuda se tu kidhar jayega


Riyaz Ashna
Waah !! Waah !! Riyaz Sahab Ghazal ka ek ek lafz dilo-dimagh ke har taar ko bakhubi sahlata aur jhakjhorta hua seedhe zehan mein utar gaya.Behad Khoobsurat jadeed  aur purkashish Peshkash jiski tareef mai alfazon se nahin kar sakta..
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2010, 09:19:23 PM »
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 :clapping:Excellent!!!lajawab!!!sarvottam!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 18, 2010, 09:31:48 PM »
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bahoot hi umda ,riyaz sahab ,bahoot khoob lajawaab kardiya aapne.


Raat lambi hai magar subha bhi aayegi zaroor
Gham ka darya bhi ye ek roz utar jayega
Jo hasad karta hai apna hi bura karta hai
apni hi aag mein jal jal ke wo mar jayega
'Ashna' kufr hai mayoos khuda se hona  
Hoke mayoos khuda se tu kidhar jayega







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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2010, 12:55:07 AM »
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Bahot shukria BBL Ji ke aapne ghazal ko pasand kiya.
Waah marvelous creation riyaz ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2010, 02:02:54 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai         Riyaz106 ji....

Jo dusroon ko dekh jalega
zindagi khud ki jalayenga
agar yun hi khuda ki takat par shak karenga
toh tu khud Apne Anjaam Ko Dekhenga.......
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2010, 02:10:58 AM »
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Sorry Riyaz bhai bahut abhi aapke poem mein nazar padi.bahut khoob,sachai aur khoobsurat poem pesh kiya aapne.Nazar ji and Cara ji aap dono e bhi kamaal ke likha.excellent work.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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