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by klaskar on September 15, 2010, 09:35:01 AM
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ye safar hai zindagi ka,
kuch log mil jaate hain,
kuch bichhar jaate hain,
kuch unme aise hote hain,
bas yaad banke reh jaate hain,

saath unka saath nahi hota,
par har pal wo saath hote hain,
apne har khayaal me wo,
har pal samaaye hote hain,

aate hain khwaabon me,
haqeeqat me milte nahi,
na milke bhi wo log kabhi,
jaane kyun khaas hote hain,

haan kuch log aise hote hain,
kehne ko paraaye hote hain,
mile nahi ho chahe kabhi bhi unse,
par apne liye wo bahut apne hote hain,

haan kuch aise apne hote hain,
jo dil ke bahut kareeb hote hain,
chaho bhi agar bhulana unhe tum,
yaad banke khwaabon me aate hain,

safar me zindagi ke yahaan,
kuch log aise hote hain,
apne na hokar bhi wo yahaan,
apno jaise hi hote hain...


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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 09:40:55 AM »
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wah klaskar ji baho bahot umda likha he.....
mindblowing n awesome creation.....
sachi bataiyega yaha par kiske liye likha he na aapne..... Giggle Winking



 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause


kisi ke pass aane me waqt lagta he,
kisi ko apna bana ne me waqt lagta he,
jab manga hamne aap ko khuda se,
usne kaha ANMOL chiz pane me waqt lagta he......
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 10:42:04 AM »
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wah kapil wah bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower
likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 10:45:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob kapilji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 01:08:26 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Devangi ji... ji yahaan to kai log aise hain is family me Yoindia ke ki jiske liye ye poem sahi baith_ti hai... aise kisi particula person k baare me soch ke nahi likha hai maine... ek general sa poem likha hai sabke baare me soch ke... nothing special about one single person... Usual Smile

aur aapne bahut pyaari lines likhi hain bahut bhut pyaari... achcha laga padhke...!!!

wah klaskar ji baho bahot umda likha he.....
mindblowing n awesome creation.....
sachi bataiyega yaha par kiske liye likha he na aapne..... Giggle Winking



 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause


kisi ke pass aane me waqt lagta he,
kisi ko apna bana ne me waqt lagta he,
jab manga hamne aap ko khuda se,
usne kaha ANMOL chiz pane me waqt lagta he......

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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 01:11:06 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Suresh ji....!!!

wah kapil wah bahut khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower
likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 01:11:36 PM »
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Shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

Bahut Khoob kapilji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 06:49:13 PM »
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Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Achche ahsaas o khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne.....
HaaN aise bhi log hote hai jinhe hum nahi jante
par humare behad khass hote hai.... Yeh rishte dil se dil ke hote hai.....

Aik achchi peshkash per dil se daad janab... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 07:19:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz ji...!!!

Klaskar Jee aadaab!

Achche ahsaas o khayaal pesh kiye hai aapne.....
HaaN aise bhi log hote hai jinhe hum nahi jante
par humare behad khass hote hai.... Yeh rishte dil se dil ke hote hai.....

Aik achchi peshkash per dil se daad janab... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         


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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 08:56:57 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Kapil Dost..!
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 09:23:02 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahim bhai...!!!

Bahaut bahaut khoob Kapil Dost..!
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2010, 01:12:42 PM »
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   Sach kaha Kapil ji aapne. n bahut achhe khayal pesh kiy hai.Yun hi likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 16, 2010, 05:04:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji...!!!


   Sach kaha Kapil ji aapne. n bahut achhe khayal pesh kiy hai.Yun hi likhte rahein. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: September 16, 2010, 05:14:04 PM »
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mastam mast post kapil ji......bht mithe mithe se rishte bataye hain aapne...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kuch maine bhi mehsus kiya.....

Aate jate raaston me kai bar yun hota hai
Kai chehre nazar k aage se yunhi guzar jate hain

Lekin kai bar koi ek chehra na jane kyun
Dhundhla sa halka sa Yaad hume reh jata hai

Aur kabhi koi ek shakhs na jana na pehchana fir bhi
Apni baton se ya yadon se Dil me ghar kar jata hai

Kuch rishte yun ban jate hain jo dur hote hain bht
Par na jane kyun wo rishtey dil k pas bht aa jate hain

Ye dosti ka rishta bhi kuch aisa hi to hota hai
Ye net ki duniya me to aksar aise hi dost ban jate hain

Sirf naam se ek avatar se log dil me bas jate hain
Sirf baton baton me hi wo dil gehre utar jate hain

Ajnabee banker aate hain aur apno se zyada apne ho jate hain
Ye wo rishte hote hain jo duur rehkar nibhaye jate hain..
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«Reply #14 on: September 16, 2010, 05:33:02 PM »
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Realy nice poem Kapil...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ye safar hai zindagi ka,
kuch log mil jaate hain,
kuch bichhar jaate hain,
kuch unme aise hote hain,
bas yaad banke reh jaate hain,

saath unka saath nahi hota,
par har pal wo saath hote hain,
apne har khayaal me wo,
har pal samaaye hote hain,

aate hain khwaabon me,
haqeeqat me milte nahi,
na milke bhi wo log kabhi,
jaane kyun khaas hote hain,

haan kuch log aise hote hain,
kehne ko paraaye hote hain,
mile nahi ho chahe kabhi bhi unse,
par apne liye wo bahut apne hote hain,

haan kuch aise apne hote hain,
jo dil ke bahut kareeb hote hain,
chaho bhi agar bhulana unhe tum,
yaad banke khwaabon me aate hain,

safar me zindagi ke yahaan,
kuch log aise hote hain,
apne na hokar bhi wo yahaan,
apno jaise hi hote hain...


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