Apnee Aabroo bachane ka farz apna hai, Sarkaar ka Nahin..bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on September 03, 2012, 05:45:05 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2012, 05:19:44 PM »
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shukriya bansi jee
Mumbai ho ya London
baccha ke rone ki avaaj- ek hoti hai
maa ka dulaar- ek sa hota hai
aasmaan, chaan suraj---sab ek hote hai
paani ke bahne ki aavaaj--ek hoti hai
koi hikarat se dkehta hai-- andaaz ek hota hai

matlab sab natural..aur yahi naturality..aapki shayri men hai..
aap dil se likhte hai..
technicality men jaayen...to shabdon ko, ehsaaso ko, aksar qurbaan karna padta hai..becoz of writing limitations.
Doesn't mean..aap hamesha aise hi likhe jaisa likhte hai..
take your time but...improve..and i know..u can do it.
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«Reply #16 on: September 03, 2012, 05:31:36 PM »
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KHUDA NE HI CHAHA HAI KI MAIN LIKH RAHA HOON
SAB KA SAATH HAI TO MUMKIN AHI AUR ACHHA LIKHOON 

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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2012, 12:44:31 AM »
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bahut khoob bansi ji
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«Reply #18 on: September 04, 2012, 12:55:00 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi khubsurat racchna ek dum samaj par sahi vaar.......... khud ko apni jimemdari ka achha ehsas karvaya aapne bansi ji...rachna se aapke khubsurat aur umda vichar saaf jhalak rahe hai par aapki bayani bhi meri tarah thoda kamjor hai.....phir bhi is rachna ke liye aapko hazarao salaam aur mubarakbaad

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«Reply #19 on: September 04, 2012, 05:00:28 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 04, 2012, 12:44:31 AM
bahut khoob bansi ji
nandbandhu ji shukriya
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«Reply #20 on: September 04, 2012, 05:02:09 AM »
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Quote from: soudagar on September 04, 2012, 12:55:00 AM
wah wah wah bahut hi khubsurat racchna ek dum samaj par sahi vaar.......... khud ko apni jimemdari ka achha ehsas karvaya aapne bansi ji...rachna se aapke khubsurat aur umda vichar saaf jhalak rahe hai par aapki bayani bhi meri tarah thoda kamjor hai.....phir bhi is rachna ke liye aapko hazarao salaam aur mubarakbaad

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saudagar ji abhut bahut shukriya adaa karta hoon. aap sab hausila afzahi karte hain to kuchh likh paata hoon. Thanks
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«Reply #21 on: September 07, 2012, 04:58:11 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2012, 04:12:30 PM
Bansi aap poori tarah se kaamyaab rahe hai apni baat kahne me..
aapke khayaalo ko daad dete hai.
bahut khoob..likhte rahiye

mukesh ji shukriya.
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«Reply #22 on: September 07, 2012, 05:05:18 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on September 03, 2012, 02:25:13 PM
Bahut Bahut Khub Bansi Ji Applause

Shad o aabaad rahiye

Shihab
shihab ji bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #23 on: September 07, 2012, 05:09:30 PM »
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Quote from: Yasirinam on September 03, 2012, 03:46:17 PM
Zamane ko bedar karne me shayaro ki hamesha alag jagah rahi hai,
Hum apna kaam karte rahenge aur har wo tariqa istemaal karnge jo sbke bhale me kaam aye,

God bless you

yasirinam ji aapki duaen ke liye shukriya
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