Apni Keh Du

by Roja on April 20, 2009, 05:17:38 PM
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Apni keh du jag ki sun lu, in baaton ka chav akarta hai,
Jo sun nahi sakte baat sachchi, unhe mera swabaav akarta hai..

Jo aaya hai so jayega jag se, aksar log kehte hai,
Atal satya mrityu-jeevan per maut ka prabhav akarta hai..

Beganon ki kya baat kahu mai, apne bhi dete ghav yahan
Apnon ka diya ber nahi sakta kabhi, vo ghaav akarta hai..

Katne ko lekar meri lage hai peeche mere apne
In apnon ka sapnon mein bhi yeh lagaav akarta hai..

Apni raah chalta hai paani, pyas bhujane dharti ki
Per rah ke pattar dekhiye, unhe yeh bhaav akarta hai..

Manzil ki oor badte kadmon ko, rokti hai rukavate kitni
Hoti hai aahate kitni, zindagi per maut ka daav akarta hai..

Maa pehli guru bacchon ki, uske bina kab jeevan savarta hai,
Sab kuch hai ghar mein "Roja" per Maa ka abhaav akarta hai

 




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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2009, 05:26:44 PM »
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waah rooja jee..
kaabil-e-tareef hai aapki lines........
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2009, 05:37:30 PM »
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Apni keh du jag ki sun lu, in baaton ka chav akarta hai,
Jo sun nahi sakte baat sachchi, unhe mera swabaav akarta hai..

Jo aaya hai so jayega jag se, aksar log kehte hai,
Atal satya mrityu-jeevan per maut ka prabhav akarta hai..

Beganon ki kya baat kahu mai, apne bhi dete ghav yahan
Apnon ka diya ber nahi sakta kabhi, vo ghaav akarta hai..

Katne ko lekar meri lage hai peeche mere apne
In apnon ka sapnon mein bhi yeh lagaav akarta hai..

Apni raah chalta hai paani, pyas bhujane dharti ki
Per rah ke pattar dekhiye, unhe yeh bhaav akarta hai..

Manzil ki oor badte kadmon ko, rokti hai rukavate kitni
Hoti hai aahate kitni, zindagi per maut ka daav akarta hai..

Maa pehli guru bacchon ki, uske bina kab jeevan savarta hai,
Sab kuch hai ghar mein "Roja" per Maa ka abhaav akarta hai

 






Excellent Applause Applause Applause

Khaas kar last sher ne do dil ko jaise nichorh liya !!
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2009, 05:15:48 AM »
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Apni keh du jag ki sun lu, in baaton ka chav akarta hai,
Jo sun nahi sakte baat sachchi, unhe mera swabaav akarta hai..

Jo aaya hai so jayega jag se, aksar log kehte hai,
Atal satya mrityu-jeevan per maut ka prabhav akarta hai..

Beganon ki kya baat kahu mai, apne bhi dete ghav yahan
Apnon ka diya ber nahi sakta kabhi, vo ghaav akarta hai..

Katne ko lekar meri lage hai peeche mere apne
In apnon ka sapnon mein bhi yeh lagaav akarta hai..

Apni raah chalta hai paani, pyas bhujane dharti ki
Per rah ke pattar dekhiye, unhe yeh bhaav akarta hai..

Manzil ki oor badte kadmon ko, rokti hai rukavate kitni
Hoti hai aahate kitni, zindagi per maut ka daav akarta hai..

Maa pehli guru bacchon ki, uske bina kab jeevan savarta hai,
Sab kuch hai ghar mein "Roja" per Maa ka abhaav akarta hai





MAA MAA HOTI.....ISS DUNIYAA MAIN KHUDAA KAA SABSEY BADA GIFT....

 ROJA ...AAPNEY TO JAZBAATI KAR DIYAA.... BAHAUT ACHCHA KALAAM HAI

K_A
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2009, 06:01:05 AM »
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Superb Roja!.. Simply superb Dear!
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salma786
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2009, 06:12:22 AM »
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Apni keh du jag ki sun lu, in baaton ka chav akarta hai,
Jo sun nahi sakte baat sachchi, unhe mera swabaav akarta hai..

Jo aaya hai so jayega jag se, aksar log kehte hai,
Atal satya mrityu-jeevan per maut ka prabhav akarta hai..

Beganon ki kya baat kahu mai, apne bhi dete ghav yahan
Apnon ka diya ber nahi sakta kabhi, vo ghaav akarta hai..

Katne ko lekar meri lage hai peeche mere apne
In apnon ka sapnon mein bhi yeh lagaav akarta hai..

Apni raah chalta hai paani, pyas bhujane dharti ki
Per rah ke pattar dekhiye, unhe yeh bhaav akarta hai..

Manzil ki oor badte kadmon ko, rokti hai rukavate kitni
Hoti hai aahate kitni, zindagi per maut ka daav akarta hai..

Maa pehli guru bacchon ki, uske bina kab jeevan savarta hai,
Sab kuch hai ghar mein "Roja" per Maa ka abhaav akarta hai

 





Bahoot hi khoob Roja sis!
Bahoot hi ache dhang se apne zindegi ki sachaai ko bayaan kiya Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2009, 02:19:42 AM »
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waah rooja jee..
kaabil-e-tareef hai aapki lines........

Thanks Pandit ji  Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2009, 02:26:04 AM »
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Excellent Applause Applause Applause

Khaas kar last sher ne do dil ko jaise nichorh liya !!

Thanks for yr valuable comment dear Talat  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2009, 02:29:33 AM »
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MAA MAA HOTI.....ISS DUNIYAA MAIN KHUDAA KAA SABSEY BADA GIFT....

 ROJA ...AAPNEY TO JAZBAATI KAR DIYAA.... BAHAUT ACHCHA KALAAM HAI

K_A

Bahut bahut shukriya Khamosh ji. Haan sahi kaha Maa is dunia mein khuda ka diya sabse bada gift hi hai.Magar Wo Bi Mere Pass Nahi Hai  crybaby2
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2009, 02:32:05 AM »
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Superb Roja!.. Simply superb Dear!

Thanks dear Sophi  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2009, 02:34:23 AM »
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Bahoot hi khoob Roja sis!
Bahoot hi ache dhang se apne zindegi ki sachaai ko bayaan kiya Applause Applause Applause

Thanks for reading dear Salma
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2009, 02:41:02 AM »
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Thanks Pandit ji  Usual Smile

u welcome roja jee..
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