Arman Baqi Hai............Kash

by Sanjeev kash on July 26, 2011, 08:03:23 AM
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Doob rahi hai saanse magar ye arman baqi hai
Kisi shaks ke aane ka abhi imkan Baqi hai

Muddat ho gayi hai bichry hue usse lakin
Dil mein ajj tak  uska nishan Baqi hai

Bhuat Tuta hoo..n mohabbat mein jiski
dil mein ussi ka abi armaan Baqi hai

Kinaroo pe  hi rahkna abhi  tu kistiya apni
Bikhri hui lehroo..n mein abhi toffan Baqi hai

Jee to karta hai mehfil mein kuch gungunaoo magar
Mujh mein abhi mera wafa-e imaan baqi hai

Mat kar abhi ikathe dil ke tukdoo..n ko e kash
Suna hai abhi uske kuch aarmaan baqi hai



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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2011, 08:27:49 AM »
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Wah bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash Kash ji.great work. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2011, 08:29:59 AM »
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kamaal ka post hai kah ji--
bht khub ji Usual Smile

kho gaya hai wajood apna lekin
mit ti hui maddham si ik pehchaan baqi hai !!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2011, 08:38:58 AM »
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Doob rahi hai saanse magar ye arman baqi hai
Kisi shaks ke aane ka abhi imkan Baqi hai

Muddat ho gayi hai bichry hue usse lakin
Dil mein ajj tak  uska nishan Baqi hai

Bhuat Tuta hoo..n mohabbat mein jiski
dil mein ussi ka abi armaan Baqi hai

Mat kar abhi ikathe dil ke tukdoo..n ko e kash
Suna hai abhi uske kuch aarmaan baqi hai

Kinaroo pe  hi rahkna abhi  tu kistiya apni
Bikhri hui lehroo..n mein abhi toffan Baqi hai


Jee to karta hai mehfil mein kuch gungunaoo magar
Mujh mein abhi mera wafa-e imaan baqi hai


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


bahut hi khoob kash ji
. 4th sher maqta hai jisme aapne apna takhallus'kash' istemal kiya hai. ghazal ki motabiq use aakhri sher hona chahiye. isliye guzarish hai use aakhi mein shift kar dein .
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2011, 08:50:36 AM »
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Doob rahi hai saanse magar ye arman baqi hai
Kisi shaks ke aane ka abhi imkan Baqi hai

Muddat ho gayi hai bichry hue usse lakin
Dil mein ajj tak  uska nishan Baqi hai

Bhuat Tuta hoo..n mohabbat mein jiski
dil mein ussi ka abi armaan Baqi hai

Mat kar abhi ikathe dil ke tukdoo..n ko e kash
Suna hai abhi uske kuch aarmaan baqi hai

Kinaroo pe  hi rahkna abhi  tu kistiya apni
Bikhri hui lehroo..n mein abhi toffan Baqi hai


Jee to karta hai mehfil mein kuch gungunaoo magar
Mujh mein abhi mera wafa-e imaan baqi hai


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2011, 09:00:45 AM »
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Wah bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash Kash ji.great work. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

Thanx. Maduwesh ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2011, 09:02:22 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile



Thanx. Qalb Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2011, 09:03:35 AM »
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kamaal ka post hai kah ji--
bht khub ji Usual Smile

kho gaya hai wajood apna lekin
mit ti hui maddham si ik pehchaan baqi hai !!!!!

Bhuat Bhuat Shukriya Sarfira Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2011, 09:03:52 AM »
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Thanx. Qaib Ji

  qalb---QALB- (HEART) Embarrased Embarrased
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2011, 09:07:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


bahut hi khoob kash ji
. 4th sher maqta hai jisme aapne apna takhallus'kash' istemal kiya hai. ghazal ki motabiq use aakhri sher hona chahiye. isliye guzarish hai use aakhi mein shift kar dein .

Sheba Ji
App Ka Bhuat Bhuat Shukriya  Ji Aap ne Aapna Samay Humari Ghazal ko diya Aur Jaise app ne kaha tha Maine modify Kar diya hai.Bus App isi tarah mujhe salah ,mashvara dette rahye,, saath rahye..
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2011, 09:10:08 AM »
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Sheba Ji
App Ka Bhuat Bhuat Shukriya  Ji Aap ne Aapna Samay Humari Ghazal ko diya Aur Jaise app ne kaha tha Maine modify Kar diya hai.Bus App isi tarah mujhe salah ,mashvara dette rahye,, saath rahye..


BAHUT KHOOB KHUSH RAHIYE AUR LIKHTE RAHIYE. AUR HUMEIN BHI SALAAH DETE RAHIYE. AAP ACHA LIKTE HO
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2011, 09:13:42 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB KHUSH RAHIYE AUR LIKHTE RAHIYE. AUR HUMEIN BHI SALAAH DETE RAHIYE. AAP ACHA LIKTE HO
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Shukriya Sheba Ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2011, 09:35:34 AM »
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bahut hi khoob kash ji
. 4th sher maqta hai jisme aapne apna takhallus'kash' istemal kiya hai. ghazal ki motabiq use aakhri sher hona chahiye. isliye guzarish hai use aakhi mein shift kar dein .

bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Kash Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2011, 10:02:35 AM »
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Doob rahi hai saanse magar ye arman baqi hai
Kisi shaks ke aane ka abhi imkan Baqi hai

Muddat ho gayi hai bichry hue usse lakin
Dil mein ajj tak  uska nishan Baqi hai

Bhuat Tuta hoo..n mohabbat mein jiski
dil mein ussi ka abi armaan Baqi hai

Kinaroo pe  hi rahkna abhi  tu kistiya apni
Bikhri hui lehroo..n mein abhi toffan Baqi hai

Jee to karta hai mehfil mein kuch gungunaoo magar
Mujh mein abhi mera wafa-e imaan baqi hai

Mat kar abhi ikathe dil ke tukdoo..n ko e kash
Suna hai abhi uske kuch aarmaan baqi hai

bahut hi khub likha hai ... just love it



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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2011, 10:06:11 AM »
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bahut bahut Khoob Sanjeev Kash Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bhuat BHuat Shukriya Khwaish Ji Humara Likha App ko pasand aaya Humare liye Bhuat Badi Baat hai

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