Arthi

by Meena on January 19, 2005, 04:06:51 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 10, 2005, 04:40:54 PM »
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wah!!! kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #31 on: February 10, 2005, 05:51:51 PM »
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wah!!! kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob!!

meena ji, kya kamaal likhti hain aap lol glasses2
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«Reply #32 on: February 11, 2005, 03:45:46 PM »
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thanx heart! and pooja!

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«Reply #33 on: May 05, 2005, 12:23:38 PM »
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Aaj woh pyar ke geet gunguna nahin rahi hai,
"Papa, "papa" kehe kar mujhe bula nahin rahi hai,
Hojaye koi chamatkat isslyie chilla raha hoon uska nam mai,
Par mujhe dekh kar bhi uski koi awaz aa nahin rahi hai!

Kabhi chup nahin baithti thi meri nani si gudiya,
Par aaj kyu woh apni baaton se mera dil luba nahin rahi hai?

Shehenayi ki jagha matam ki khamoshi thi,
Charon taraf logo ke rone ki awaze thi,
Dekhe te kitne rangeen sapne apni ladli ke liye,
Par doli uski aaj safed kapdo se odhi hui thi,
Ansoon behete gaye, log chalte gaye,
Aur saath me ek masoom ki arthi bhi ja rahi thi!


such a deep and sad poem meena,very very touchy sad5

Dekhe te kitne rangeen sapne apni ladli ke liye,
Par doli uski aaj safed kapdo se odhi hui thi,

very good lines :cry:
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«Reply #34 on: May 05, 2005, 12:28:29 PM »
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awww nidhi thanx a lot kuddiye!!! kafi purani post doond kar reply ki tumne  :D  thank u thank u!
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«Reply #35 on: May 05, 2005, 08:47:24 PM »
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nidhi tumneyt u aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi
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«Reply #36 on: May 06, 2005, 09:16:25 AM »
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nidhi tumneyt you aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi


likha to maine tha  Shocked
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«Reply #37 on: May 06, 2005, 09:19:26 AM »
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nidhi tumneyt you aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi


likha to maine tha  Shocked
lolzzzzzzz tongue3 meri hi to sis ho Winking :lol:
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«Reply #38 on: May 06, 2005, 09:20:21 AM »
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nidhi tumneyt you aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi


likha to maine tha  Shocked
lolzzzzzzz tongue3 meri hi to sis ho Winking :lol:


acha aisa hai? Shocked  to no prob phir thik hai  :lol:
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«Reply #39 on: May 06, 2005, 09:21:48 AM »
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nidhi tumneyt you aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi


likha to maine tha  Shocked
lolzzzzzzz tongue3 meri hi to sis ho Winking :lol:


acha aisa hai? Shocked  to no prob phir thik hai  :lol:
glasses2
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«Reply #40 on: May 24, 2005, 10:57:31 PM »
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nidhi tumneyt you aaj rula diya  ladli ki doli pe


Tere pyar mein mar bhi jahoon tho afsoos na hoga
Afsoos jub hoga agar tu mera sath na daygi


likha to maine tha  Shocked
lolzzzzzzz tongue3 meri hi to sis ho Winking :lol:


acha aisa hai? Shocked  to no prob phir thik hai  :lol:
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oye meri bhi tu Meena sister ho na aap.......................
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«Reply #41 on: May 25, 2005, 03:14:36 PM »
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well apne mujhe sis kahah ai naveed to zaroor hoon!!!!!!!!  :D jis nam se pukaroge us nam se hazir!!

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«Reply #42 on: May 26, 2005, 02:35:51 AM »
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Haan achi bachi hai tu meena sister

Pathar agar tha unka dil
To mera kaanch ka na banaya hota
Unhain pighalna nahi aaya to
Mujhe sambhalna hi sikhaya hota
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«Reply #43 on: May 26, 2005, 11:59:07 AM »
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Aaj woh pyar ke geet gunguna nahin rahi hai,
"Papa, "papa" kehe kar mujhe bula nahin rahi hai,
Hojaye koi chamatkat isslyie chilla raha hoon uska nam mai,
Par mujhe dekh kar bhi uski koi awaz aa nahin rahi hai!

Kabhi chup nahin baithti thi meri nani si gudiya,
Par aaj kyu woh apni baaton se mera dil luba nahin rahi hai?

Shehenayi ki jagha matam ki khamoshi thi,
Charon taraf logo ke rone ki awaze thi,
Dekhe te kitne rangeen sapne apni ladli ke liye,
Par doli uski aaj safed kapdo se odhi hui thi,
Ansoon behete gaye, log chalte gaye,
Aur saath me ek masoom ki arthi bhi ja rahi thi!



Beautifully written...Meena Beti!Doukh aur dard ka saagar bhar diya toumne iss kavita main...!

Keep sharing your creations

Thanks

Amanush Chachu...
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«Reply #44 on: May 26, 2005, 12:01:34 PM »
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Aaj woh pyar ke geet gunguna nahin rahi hai,
"Papa, "papa" kehe kar mujhe bula nahin rahi hai,
Hojaye koi chamatkat isslyie chilla raha hoon uska nam mai,
Par mujhe dekh kar bhi uski koi awaz aa nahin rahi hai!

Kabhi chup nahin baithti thi meri nani si gudiya,
Par aaj kyu woh apni baaton se mera dil luba nahin rahi hai?

Shehenayi ki jagha matam ki khamoshi thi,
Charon taraf logo ke rone ki awaze thi,
Dekhe te kitne rangeen sapne apni ladli ke liye,
Par doli uski aaj safed kapdo se odhi hui thi,
Ansoon behete gaye, log chalte gaye,
Aur saath me ek masoom ki arthi bhi ja rahi thi!



Beautifully written...Meena Beti!Doukh aur dard ka saagar bhar diya toumne iss kavita main...!

Keep sharing your creations

Thanks

Amanush Chachu...


thank u chachu!!!! bas ek koshish thi.

 :D
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