asar...................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on May 30, 2014, 06:24:12 PM

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khamosh_aawaaz

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   kirdaar kii tarah afsaane mein rahaa!
   mohabbat ke taraane mein rahaa !!

   ho naa sakii tashaffii ta-umr mujhe!
   her shaye ko aazmaane mein rahaa!

   ho kar jaandaar bhii ladkhadata rahaa!
   ek bejaan, dekho thhikaane mein rahaa!

   purchum baahaadurii ka lahraataa huaa!
   dard-e-ghum muskuraane mein rahaa!

   asar kitna roshni mein, andheraa jaane!
   chiraag bus khud ko jalaane mein rahaa!

   ilm-e-naakhudaa se salaamat hai ab tak!
   dariya to kashtii dobaane mein rahaa !

   tabiyat khaar sii liye hue khamosh!
   khushboo chaar-soo philaane mein rahaa!!


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2014, 07:30:06 PM »

bahut khub khamoshji....

Applause


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2014, 11:51:58 PM »

asar kitna roshni mein, andheraa jaane!
chiraag bus khud ko jalaane mein rahaa!

Bahut khoob lajawaab. ..


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2014, 03:39:41 AM »

K A jee aadaab ...!

Waah janab waah Mashaa Allaah kia kahne ... behad khoob aur
Umdaa khayaalaat ko kalam baNd kiya hai janab ... behad
khoob sabhi sher waqai khoob rahe is khoob kalaam par humari
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN gar gustaqui na ho toH aik baat kaheNge janab ...
"Nishaane " meiN kahna na munaseeb sa laga; hume aapki kalaam
Ke andaaz e bayaaN ke hisab se ...
Waise toH har cheez nishaane pe rahti hai nishaane meiN nahi...

Likhate rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2014, 04:25:31 AM »

Wah Kyaa Baat Hai. Applause

Surindar.N Applause


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2014, 11:48:59 AM »

वाह....वाह......वाह.....

हर एक मिसरा एक से बढ़कर एक.....

खास तौर से ये दिल को छू गये.....

asar kitna roshni mein, andheraa jaane!
chiraag bus khud ko jalaane mein rahaa!

ilm-e-naakhudaa se salaamat hai ab tak!
dariya to kashtii dobaane mein rahaa !

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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2014, 11:49:32 AM »

bohut khub likha hai aapne


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Re: asar...................(K_A)

«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2014, 01:14:59 PM »

Waahhhhh !! KA sahab !!!! Bahaut bahaut bahaut khoob !!! Khoobsurat gehree fiqr !!! Aur maqta to bas kya kehne !!! Zabardast ghazal par dheron daad !!!