::- ashq bhare ::-

by sarvan on April 02, 2012, 05:18:39 PM
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ashq bhare muskaano par
maiyat jahan ki roti hai
lamba ooncha qadd uska par
ghutan saanso ki hoti hai :/
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2012, 05:36:14 PM »
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ashq bhare muskaano par
maiyat jahan ki roti hai
lamba ooncha qadd uska par
ghutan saanso ki hoti hai :/

bhai dekho bura mat manna aapne jo ye sayri likhi h ye samjh nhi par rahi h.
Wese last line achchi h.
Thori kosis or kare agli bar esse achcha likh payege.
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2012, 03:53:14 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2012, 06:59:09 AM »
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bhai dekho bura mat manna aapne jo ye sayri likhi h ye samjh nhi par rahi h.
Wese last line achchi h.
Thori kosis or kare agli bar esse achcha likh payege.
janaab itna muskil bhi nahi hai--
wese sikhaiega aap to seekh bhi jaenge kabhi na kabhi hum bhi
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