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sarfira
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baat ugalwane ki aukat rakh
baat manwane ki aukat rakh
jo kar sako poori fir
sapne sajone ki aukat rakh
wo aur the jo kar gaye namak-halaali
tu bas rasm nibhane ki aukaat rakh
bachanparasti ki na baate kar
ik waade pe tik jaane ki aukaat rakh
chhodd bhi ab chaand sitaaroN ki chahat
do junn rotee ki aukaat rakh
bhee me khone ki ye mayusi kyun
tu pehchan banane ki aukaat rakh
!!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2013, 12:00:11 PM » |
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baat ugalwane ki aukat rakh
baat manwane ki aukat rakh
jo kar sako poori fir
sapne sajone ki aukat rakh
wo aur the jo kar gaye namak-halaali
tu bas rasm nibhane ki aukaat rakh
bachanparasti ki na baate kar
ik waade pe tik jaane ki aukaat rakh
chhodd bhi ab chaand sitaaroN ki chahat
do junn rotee ki aukaat rakh
bhee me khone ki ye mayusi kyun
tu pehchan banane ki aukaat rakh
!!!
!!
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ahaaa.. very different from others... i liked it..... (shayad) mai is kavita k liye sabhashi dene ka aukaat rakhti hu :  ....  Really i liked it |
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«Reply #3 on: February 04, 2013, 01:19:15 PM » |
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waah waah aur waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 01:28:51 PM » |
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bohat khoob bohat khoob,......bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 03:03:47 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2013, 03:27:47 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2013, 04:32:58 PM » |
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wah re! teekhe tevar Sarfira ke utha bhi! to khud ko Giraa ke ! thanx aal |
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2013, 05:16:17 PM » |
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bahut khoob sarfira ji , dheron daad....
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2013, 05:55:24 PM » |
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chhodd bhi ab chaand sitaaroN ki chahat
do junn rotee ki aukaat rakh
bheed me khone ki ye mayusi kyun
tu pehchan banane ki aukaat rakh
Salaam aapke jazbe ko
khoob ..bahut khoob likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #12 on: February 07, 2013, 01:02:41 AM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: February 07, 2013, 03:25:41 AM » |
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ahaaa.. very different from others... i liked it..... (shayad) mai is kavita k liye sabhashi dene ka aukaat rakhti hu : .... Really i liked it thanx ji shayd mai bhi shabaasi lene ka aukaat rakhta hoon |
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«Reply #14 on: February 07, 2013, 03:31:12 AM » |
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Parwaaz bro---- aap kuch jada tareef kr gye jiski mai aukat nhi rakhta bas dimagi pareshani ko halke shabdo me dhala tha-- ar aap to shayr hi keh gye mujhe aap ka sukriya hausla afjaii ka khus rahie |
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