kabhi palken uthana kabhi palken jhukana,
uspe unki kali jhulfon ka lahrana,
ye mat puchho wo kis kadar kahar dhati rahi,
bus mai tadapta raha aur wo tadpati rahi...
Kia satanza kaha hai janab.... Qatel hai daad bahut umdaa... kafi achcha likha hai.. bahut khoob socha kabhi nazren mile to sahi,
kah dunga dil ki sari baaten ankahi,
magar na nazren mili na baaten hui,
bus bechaini me meri wo raaten gai,
Hmmm Janab aapki bayaani bahut achchi hai... yeH stanza bhi khoob raha... ahsaas o khayaal bhi achchi raheN daad kya tha unka irada khuda hi jaane,
mujhe to bus wo satati rahi,
ye mat puchho wo kis kadar kahar dhati rahi,
bus mai tadapta raha aur wo tadpati rahi...
Haan jee yeH to waqai Khuda Jane ke woh kia chahte hai...... 
par aapne achcha kaha hai daad.. 
ye mulakat thi ya sirf ittefak tha,
mai jise samjha tha uthta dhuan
wo to bus ek bujhi rakh thi,
khuda kare ki firse aag lage uske dil me,
aur aa jae mujhse milne meri is mahfil me,
Haan jee aameen...... shayad humare aameen se woh aa jayeN milne aapse.... Humara aameen humare liye to kabhi kaam nahi aaya... aapke hi aa jayeN... :D
thoda aur bhi khubi se kaha ja sakta tha yeH stanza, kuch gadbad kar di hai aapne is meiN... unhe andhere se thi mohabbat aur ujale se thi nafrat,
shayad isliye wo mohabbat-e-chirag mera bujhati rahi,
ye mat puchho wo kis kadar kahar dhati rahi,
bus mai tadapta raha aur wo tadpati rahi...
Waah Janab waah kia baat kahi hai shayad .... aisa hi ho
Dil ko samjhane ke liye to zaruri hai koi bharam rahe
Kuch bhi na rahe to chaleNga bus aik do sanam rahe :D agar meri kavita aapko achhi lage to mujhe jaroor batayen,,,
aapka apna "vinit shankar"
on eTI community..
