aurat.....(sheba)

by Sheba on September 08, 2009, 10:24:30 AM
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         Bakhoobi tum mujhe pehchan sakte ho,
         gar khudgarzi ka chashma utaar sako..!

         Qaynat mein main hi akeli nahin aaj,
         gar tum meri gali kabhi aa sako..!

         main badnaseeb nahin, lachar nahin,abla nahin,
         gar tum aurat ko uska darja dila sako..!

         maa bhi hoon,behan bhi hoon, beti bhi hoon main,
         gar tum in rishtoan ko kabhi nibha sako...!

         Ai zamana teri kamyaabi ka raaz hai mujh mein,
         gar tum aurat ko sahi se jaan sako...!

        
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2009, 12:19:27 PM »
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nice line good work
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«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2010, 08:37:15 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2010, 08:39:38 PM »
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Quote from: Shayaries_King on September 08, 2009, 12:19:27 PM
nice line good work

thank u
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«Reply #4 on: January 10, 2010, 08:40:08 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 10, 2010, 08:37:15 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 10, 2010, 08:43:38 PM »
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  NICE CREATION,..SHEBA JI
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«Reply #6 on: January 10, 2010, 10:19:29 PM »
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Wow Sheba ji,excellent creation,bahut khoob. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2010, 12:28:27 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on September 08, 2009, 10:24:30 AM


         Bakhoobi tum mujhe pahchan sakte ho,
         gar khudgarzi ka chashma utaar sako..!

         Qaynat main main hi akili nahin aaj,
         gar tum meri gali kabhi aa sako..!

         main badnaseeb nahin, lachar nahin,abla nahin,
         gar tum aurat ko uska darja dila sako..!

         maa bhi hoon,behan bhi hoon, beti bhi hoon main,
         gar tum inn rishton ko kabhi nibha sako...!

         Ai zamana teri kamyaabi ka raaz hai mujh main,
         gar tum aurat ko sahi se jaan sako...!

         

Wah wah kya baat hai bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.last 4 lines to bahut bahut accha laga padkar Sheba jee
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2010, 09:02:06 PM »
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Quote from: shab on January 10, 2010, 08:43:38 PM
  NICE CREATION,..SHEBA JI

shukriya shab ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 11, 2010, 09:03:06 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on January 10, 2010, 09:19:15 PM
Bahut Hi Umda Likha Hai Aapne Sheba Ji
Mafi Chahta Hun Deri De Parhne K Liye.

Dil Se Nikli Da'd Hazir Hai Ji...!

thank u shihab ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 11, 2010, 09:04:36 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on January 10, 2010, 10:19:29 PM
Wow Sheba ji,excellent creation,bahut khoob. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u madhu ji
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«Reply #11 on: January 11, 2010, 09:05:23 PM »
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Quote from: Sonia01 on January 11, 2010, 12:28:27 AM
Wah wah kya baat hai bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.last 4 lines to bahut bahut accha laga padkar Sheba jee

thank u sonia ji
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2010, 01:00:37 AM »
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Wah Sheba ji kamaal ki creation hai aapki.
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«Reply #13 on: January 14, 2010, 08:12:50 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on January 12, 2010, 01:00:37 AM
Wah Sheba ji kamaal ki creation hai aapki.

thank you riyaz sahab
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«Reply #14 on: January 14, 2010, 09:09:03 AM »
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Nice One Sheba Ji
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