aurat.....(sheba)

by Sheba on September 08, 2009, 10:24:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 17, 2010, 12:54:36 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: January 28, 2010, 05:44:47 PM »
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Quote from: Versatile Shayar on January 14, 2010, 09:09:03 AM
Nice One Sheba Ji

thank u versatile
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«Reply #17 on: January 28, 2010, 05:45:20 PM »
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Quote from: kameeney on January 17, 2010, 12:54:36 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #18 on: January 28, 2010, 05:47:43 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on September 08, 2009, 10:24:30 AM
         Bakhoobi tum mujhe pehchan sakte ho,
         gar khudgarzi ka chashma utaar sako..!

         Qaynat mein main hi akeli nahin aaj,
         gar tum meri gali kabhi aa sako..!

         main badnaseeb nahin, lachar nahin,abla nahin,
         gar tum aurat ko uska darja dila sako..!

         maa bhi hoon,behan bhi hoon, beti bhi hoon main,
         gar tum in rishtoan ko kabhi nibha sako...!

         Ai zamana teri kamyaabi ka raaz hai mujh mein,
         gar tum aurat ko sahi se jaan sako...!

         

Wonderful creation Sheba  Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: January 28, 2010, 06:13:41 PM »
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Bahoot Hi Badhiya Likha Shebaji  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: January 29, 2010, 07:39:44 PM »
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Quote from: malli on January 28, 2010, 05:47:43 PM
Wonderful creation Sheba  Applause Applause

THANX MALLI
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«Reply #21 on: January 29, 2010, 07:40:19 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on January 28, 2010, 06:13:41 PM
Bahoot Hi Badhiya Likha Shebaji  Applause Applause Applause

THANK U PANK JI
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«Reply #22 on: February 10, 2010, 11:00:09 AM »
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Bohat achi kawish thi....
One think, i want to say if u don't mind.... ashaar ke wazan me thora unch nich thi.... pehly aur aakhri shair me khaas ker.
But its my own opinion.... baki bohat achy khiyalat ka izhar kia, all is well said.
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AURAT KO KABHI HEECH KEHNA NA KHUDA RA
AURAT KABHI HAWWA, KABHI MERIYAM, KABHI ZAHRA
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«Reply #23 on: February 11, 2010, 10:04:28 AM »
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Quote from: ibnay_khalid on February 10, 2010, 11:00:09 AM
Bohat achi kawish thi....
One think, i want to say if u don't mind.... ashaar ke wazan me thora unch nich thi.... pehly aur aakhri shair me khaas ker.
But its my own opinion.... baki bohat achy khiyalat ka izhar kia, all is well said.
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AURAT KO KABHI HEECH KEHNA NA KHUDA RA
AURAT KABHI HAWWA, KABHI MERIYAM, KABHI ZAHRA

bahut khoob khalid sahab....main to abhi likhna sikh rahi hoon buss aap jaisey danishwaron ki doa chahiye...Insha Allah aageye koshish karoongi
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«Reply #24 on: February 11, 2010, 10:10:49 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Ek Aurat Kya Hai Aur Uski Kya Paribhaasa Hai  iski Sahi pehchaan Di Apane...

Hat's Off To this Contribution Of your's Sheba..  Hats off to you!
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«Reply #25 on: February 11, 2010, 10:21:50 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot khoob Sheba ji Applause
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«Reply #26 on: February 11, 2010, 04:02:39 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 11, 2010, 10:10:49 AM
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

Ek Aurat Kya Hai Aur Uski Kya Paribhaasa Hai  iski Sahi pehchaan Di Apane...

Hat's Off To this Contribution Of your's Sheba..  Hats off to you!

thank u khawaish ji
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«Reply #27 on: February 11, 2010, 04:03:20 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 11, 2010, 10:21:50 AM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot khoob Sheba ji Applause

thanks sophi ji
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«Reply #28 on: April 05, 2010, 01:37:49 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #29 on: April 05, 2010, 08:10:26 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on April 05, 2010, 01:37:49 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u
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