Aye raat! gavaahi do gi na? (by vb)

by vb on November 21, 2013, 11:16:22 PM
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Ye taareeki……
Ye khunk hava…………
Khaamosh kharay in pairoN ki har daal say lipta sanaata
Aur door ufaq k maathay par
Aasaar………….
PareshaaN maazi k…

Ye chaand…..?
Anjaam say Ghafil kirnoN ka ik khel zameeN ki zulfoN say
Aur zard, unaabi patoN ki …..
Aavaaz men yaadeN maazi ki.

Aye raat!...
Gavaahi do gi na?
Main tum men, tanha dooba tha…….!
Aye raat!!!!!.
Gavaahi do gi na?


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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2013, 11:19:21 PM »
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Beautiful, bahut hi khoob vb jee, yuN hi likhte rahiye aur bazm ko chaar chaaNd lagaate rahiye.
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2013, 11:20:15 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2013, 11:26:06 PM »
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bahut bahut hee khoobsoorat ehsaas VB ji dheron daad
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Wah, wah, wah. happy9
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2013, 01:30:53 PM »
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aap sub ka buhat shukriya... k waqt diya aur taareefi kalemaat chhoray....
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«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2013, 08:29:57 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut hi pyaare ehsaas VB ji... dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2013, 10:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 22, 2013, 08:29:57 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut hi pyaare ehsaas VB ji... dheron daaaaaaaaad...

aqsh jee! shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2013, 10:38:41 PM »
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very nice
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