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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2010, 02:07:04 PM »

bahot khoob sk ji...


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2010, 02:13:21 PM »

dil chhu gaya aapka geet vb ji....

ise gungunane me bada maza aaraha hai...

its tooo good


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 02:27:37 PM »

areeee sach me bht pyari gazal h....yahan post karungi jald hi.....


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 03:48:22 PM »

Badi oodaasi se bhari....mayusi me lipti achhi nahi bahut achhi kavita hai aapki....VB ji..... Applause

Quote from: vb on August 10, 2010, 02:04:31 PM

Aye udaas mann, meray saath chal
Kahin door, chaltay hain sheher say
Kahin door, aatish-e-ishq say
Kahin door, yaad k zeher say
Aye udaas mann...

Jahan koi teray siva na ho
Jahan koi meray siva na ho
Na kisi k naam k ashk hon
Koi lab pay harf-e-dua na ho
aye udaas mann...

Jahaan khaamshi si ho chaar soo
Na he shaam ho, na hawa chalay
Na sharaab, raat, na karwaten
na charaagh saa ye badan jalay
aye udaas mann...

magar us ki yaad k lams ko
tu bhula sakay ga bata mujhay?
ye jo baar-e-ranjish-e-hijr hay
tu utha sakay ga bata mujhay?
Aye udaas mann...

aye udaas mann usay bhool ja
usay kuch nahi, tu jiyay maray
hain teray naseeb main ashk tu
bhala kya wo teri nazar karay

aye udaas mann, usay bhool jaa
aye udaas mann, meray saath chal
kahin door aatish-e-ishq say
kahin door yaad k zeher say
kahin door chaltay hain sheher say
Aye udaas mann.......


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2010, 12:44:37 AM »

bahut bahut khoob Vb ji... bahut khoobsurti se likha hai apne... mazaa aa gaya padh ke...!!!


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 04:26:57 AM »

khoob likha aapne, shikway, sawal, jawab nazam ke roop main achi rachna ka roop hay


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 12:31:58 PM »

Wah wah Vb ji hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,great work.excellent icon_salut


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2010, 02:03:06 PM »

As I stay speechless, beautifully written ...koi udaas ho tu wah wah hamse hogi nahi

Udaasi bhari nazam parh ke kuch consoling lines yaad aayeen, thought to share with you...

Aa chal ke tujhay, ham le ke chalein
ik aise gagan ke talay
jahan gham bhi na hon, aansoo bhi na hon
bas bahar ka khumaar palay

Suraj ki pehali kiran se, aashaa kaa savera jaage
chandaa kii kiran se dhul kar, ghanaghor andhera bhaage
kabhi dhoop khilay kabhi chhaanv milay
lambii sii Dagar na khalay
jahan gam bhi na ho, aansoo bhi na ho
bas bahaar hii bahaar palay
ik aise gagan ke talay...

Jahan door nazar daud aae, aazaad gagan laharaae
jahan rang birangay panchhi, aashaa kaa sandesaa laayen
sapano me pali hansati ho kali
jahan shaam suhaani dhalay
jahan gam bhi na ho, aansoo bhi na ho
ik aise gagan ke talay

Sapano Ke aise jahan mein wahan sirf tumhara jahan ho
tum jaa ke wahan kho jao shikva na koyi gilla ho
kahin bhair na ho, koyi ghair na ho
sab milke chaltay chaltay

jahan gam bhi na ho aansoo bhi na ho
bas bahar ka khumaar palay...
ik aise gagan ke talay...


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2010, 06:31:30 PM »

Kya Baat hai Janab ........ Aisi jagaah to shayad hi kahiN ho per aapki nazm padhte samay hi aisi jagaah ban gayi thi..... Bahut umdaa likha hai aapne agar aapki nazm khatam nahi hoi to hum bhi us jagaah hote jahaan aap apne mann ko le jana chah rahe the.......

Very touch and expression are too good.....

Keep writting......
May GOD bless You..


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Re: Aye udaas mann (by vb)

«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2010, 10:27:08 AM »

Quote from: vb on August 10, 2010, 02:04:31 PM


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