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by kaushikbhawna008 on August 12, 2008, 05:30:11 AM
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Kaali ghata late hain baadal
Tip tip paani barsaatein hain baadal

Tapti hui  pyaasi dharti ki
Pyaas bhujaatein hai ye baadal

Sune khet aur khaliyano mei
Rangat sajatein hai ye baadal

Har ek k jeevan mei
Ek nayi umang jagate hain ye baadal

Jo saal bhar tadapta hai mor paani ko
Uski pyaas bhujate hain ye baadal

Is baar aisa saawan laaye baadal
Mere mann ki pyaasa bhujayein baadal

Bhichada tha jis saawan mei wo mujhse
Wo fir laut aaye aisa saawan fir laayei baadal








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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2008, 05:38:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause
kya baat hai bhawna ji





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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2008, 05:40:49 AM »
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NICE CREATION,
KAUSHIK....
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2008, 05:43:33 AM »
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Fir badi Muddat k baad aap k kalaam ko padhaa..
waah..Badhiya si Nazm Ko aapne Tarteeb Diya Hai bhawna ji...
Har Lafz Har Sher K aas paas Jaise Baarish k Katre Gire Baadal Se...
aur aakhir me fir wohi Ishaaratan dard waali baat


ki...Bhichada tha jis saawan mei wo mujhse
     Wo fir laut aaye aisa saawan fir laayei baadal


bahot khoob Hammesha Ki Tarha Ji Bhawana.

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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2008, 11:12:43 AM »
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shukriya shally and muhammmed ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2008, 11:20:55 AM »
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bahoot achcha likha bhawna ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2008, 12:16:02 PM »
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Very Nice Work Bhawna..  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2008, 05:38:49 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2008, 05:42:53 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhawnaji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2008, 05:48:10 AM »
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