Baarish e ashq hai abhee maddham.........Mamta Bajpai

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Tanhaa tanhaa naa tu safar karnaa
apnee yaadoN ko humsafar karnaa

kabse taktee haiN raastaa teraa
soonee ankhiyoN me tu basar karnaa

dard beintahaa jo dene lage
aise qissoN ko darguzar karnaa

ik teraa dil hee aasaraa hai meraa
deke thokar na dar-ba-dar karnaa

baarish e ashq hai abhee maddham
phir kabhee khud ko tar-ba-tar karnaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2011, 02:12:15 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Mamta jee..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2011, 03:53:11 PM »
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Jee Rahim jee! aap kee pasand sar aankhoN par magar baaqee kalaam bhee aap kee tawajjo kee raah me hai....behad shukriyaa...
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2011, 04:37:05 PM »
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Mamta ji bahut khoobsoorat likha hai.
daad kubool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2011, 05:37:43 PM »
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aasha nahi hai kisi ki yaado ke saath jindgi ko basar karna
isse jyada aasaan to hai khud ba khud khudkusi hai karna

Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 10, 2011, 01:54:11 PM
Tanhaa tanhaa naa tu safar karnaa
apnee yaadoN ko humsafar karnaa

kabse taktee haiN raastaa teraa
soonee ankhiyoN me tu basar karnaa

dard beintahaa jo dene lage
aise qissoN ko darguzar karnaa

ik teraa dil hee aasaraa hai meraa
deke thokar na dar-ba-dar karnaa

baarish e ashq hai abhee maddham
phir kabhee khud ko tar-ba-tar karnaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2011, 06:49:11 PM »
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Bahut..khoob..

Ek aur achchhee ghazal..Mamta Ji

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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2011, 03:56:50 AM »
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wah wah... bahut khub mamtaji... kamaal liha hai aapne... bahut khub....

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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2011, 09:31:36 AM »
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Shukriyaa suresh!
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2011, 09:37:11 AM »
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Shukriyaa Satish jee! yun hee saath nibhaate rahiye.......
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2011, 09:41:47 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriyaa Manju jee!
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2011, 01:03:44 AM »
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hmmm bilkul theek farmaayaa aap ne Manoj jee!
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2011, 03:29:35 AM »
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Wow bahut baddiya Mamta ji,great creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2011, 04:36:41 AM »
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Shukriyaa Madhu jee
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