baat ek..................sheba

by Sheba on February 05, 2013, 08:30:27 AM
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                      hijr   ki   raat   ye   nikle   ke   wo dum nikle!
                      dafn   iss   dil   se  kahaan   phir   ghum nikle!


                      kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.
                      jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!


                      zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.
                      ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!


                      doobti   hui   kashti  ko kya  nakhuda  ka  sahara.
                      aaghosh-e-qaza se dekha   aksar   hi   kam   nikle!



                      rahta  nahin   nasha   sharaab  ka  hamesha  saaqi!
                      chhalak kar paimaane se sheba phir kyon hum nikle!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2013, 09:09:19 AM »
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                      hijr   ki   raat   ye   nikle   ke   wo dum nikle!
                      dafn   iss   dil   se  kahaan   phir   ghum nikle!


                      kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.
                      jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!


                      zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.
                      ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!


                      doobti   hui   kashti  ko kya  nakhuda  ka  sahara.
                      aaghosh-e-qaza se dekha   aksar   hi   kam   nikle!



                      rahta  nahin   nasha   sharaab  ka  hamesha  saaqi!
                      chhalak kar paimaane se sheba phir kyon hum nikle!!


kya baat hai sheeba jee umda ghazal kahi hai, daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2013, 10:34:55 AM »
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                      hijr   ki   raat   ye   nikle   ke   wo dum nikle!
                      dafn   iss   dil   se  kahaan   phir   ghum nikle!


                      kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.
                      jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!


                      zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.
                      ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!


                      doobti   hui   kashti  ko kya  nakhuda  ka  sahara.
                      aaghosh-e-qaza se dekha   aksar   hi   kam   nikle!



                      rahta  nahin   nasha   sharaab  ka  hamesha  saaqi!
                      chhalak kar paimaane se sheba phir kyon hum nikle!!



Lajawaab Sheba Ji..

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob!!!!!

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Mujhe Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 Ashaar Bahut Pasand Aaye...

kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.                       
jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!                       

zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.                       
ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!

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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2013, 11:03:51 AM »
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bahut khoob sheba jee
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2013, 11:36:53 AM »
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masha allah... kya ghazal likhi hai... bahut khoob.....
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«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2013, 12:13:07 PM »
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lajawab lajawab lajawab behad umda gazal sheba ji.........dherodaad aur mubrakbad Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2013, 01:01:53 PM »
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kitne baras baad aapko padhkar bht acha laga Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2013, 01:42:23 PM »
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bahut pyari ghazal hai, sheba ji. khas
taur  se akhri  2 sher  lajawaab hain.
bahut bahut mubarakbad aur daad.
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2013, 01:46:04 PM »
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Ek behatreen aur khoobsurat Ghazal par meri taraf se mubarakbaad..
Likhti rahiye..
Khaas taur se ye ashaar..dil ko bhaye mere..
kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.
jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!

zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.
ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!

doobti   hui   kashti  ko kya  nakhuda  ka  sahara.
aaghosh-e-qaza se dekha   aksar   hi   kam   nikle!
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2013, 02:17:12 PM »
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Baad meiN aate haiN...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2013, 03:56:39 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2013, 05:09:29 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 06, 2013, 04:20:55 AM »
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Marhabaa marhabaa ek rau qubool kariyegaa
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«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2013, 12:27:19 PM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Jee dobaara haazri lagaane hum phir aa gaye... Usual Smile
Darasal waqt ki kami hai aajkal, isliye just nazar daali thi aur
aur reply nahi de paaye the... Usual Smile


Waise waqai achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne, aik se badhkar aik ahsaas
O khayaal aur behad gehre ashaar rahe... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaaroN par hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile






                      hijr   ki   raat   ye   nikle   ke   wo dum nikle!
                      dafn   iss   dil   se  kahaan   phir   ghum nikle!

WaaaH jee kia kahne, behad umdaa aur gehra matla kaha hai...
kitni bhi baar padheN, toH bus khoob aur khoob laga... Usual Smile


                      kiya   bidaa   num   aakho.n   ne   unhein  hamse.
                      jhuka  kar  nazar  hamaari  gali  se  sanam nikle!

Hmmm kia kahne waaH sher behad khoob kaha hai aapne... aur shayrana bhi.. daad daad daad.. Usual Smile

                      zindagi   khalwat   mein  kabhi  muskuraye   aise.
                      ujaale   ka   jaise   andhere   se   qadam  nikle!

Kia kahne jee lagta hai kafi gehraai se soNch ne lagi hai aap
aajkal... Usual Smile bahut khoob achcha sher hai daad...


                      doobti   hui   kashti  ko kya  nakhuda  ka  sahara.
                      aaghosh-e-qaza se dekha   aksar   hi   kam   nikle!


WaaH waaH waaH kiaa baat hai behad khoob behad umda sher hai daad daad daad..

                      rahta  nahin   nasha   sharaab  ka  hamesha  saaqi!
                      chhalak kar paimaane se sheba phir kyon hum nikle!!



Aray aapke nikalne se hi sharaab ka nashaa nahi rahta hai...
agar aap paimaane meiN qaid ho jaaye toH nashaa hi nashaa raheNga har saaqii par...  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


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«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2013, 07:24:27 PM »
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kya baat hai sheeba jee umda ghazal kahi hai, daad qubool kareN


shukria aarish........!
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