BAATEN.....MAMTA BAJPAI

by mamta bajpai on July 20, 2010, 02:44:16 PM
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN

YE BAARISH KAA MOUSAM HANSEE DILRUBAA HAI
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN

YE DIN RAAT RANJ O ALAM KE FASAANE
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN

YE PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM HAI
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN

HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN

NASHEMAN JO UJADAA KOI GHAM NAHEE HAI
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN

BAHUT BADH CHUKI DOORIYAAN DO DILON KI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
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«Reply #1 on: July 20, 2010, 03:10:23 PM »
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Wah wah Mamta-di bahoot khoobsurat positive energy se bhari hui sunder rachna....ye hui na baat... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aayaa barsaaton main bheegne ka mausam
Sakhee Hasne-naachne-gaane ka mausam

Saawan k jhoole pade hain sakhee aajaaonaa
Sang-sang mere tum b jhonkhe khaa jaaonaa



BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN

YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN

YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN

PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN

HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN

UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN

BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2010, 03:12:32 PM »
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Aapki Nazm Me Lafzon Ka chunaav Humesha Bahut Lajawab Hota hai Mamta Ji.. is Baar Bhi Aisa hi Hai.. Bahut Hi Pyaari Rachna hai.. aur Bahut Hi Sanjidgi se Aapne Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon Me Utaara hai.. Daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause


Bahut Ache Koyal sis.. Aapne Bhi Bahut Hi Khoooob Likha hai.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 03:34:36 PM »
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN

YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN

YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN

PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN

HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN

UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN

BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN

Bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne mamta ji......tahe dil se daad....khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2010, 05:17:18 PM »
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 Applause Applause HUMESHA KI TARAH EK SADHI HUI RACHNA..DAD KABOOL FARMAYEN
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«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 05:52:01 PM »
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Wah..wah... Khub kaha

barish mein tere sang bheeg jaane ka mann karta hai,
koyal ki thrah tere sang gaane ko dil karta hai,
kya hua jo aaj hum saath nahi,
teri jism chod teri rooh mein bas jaane ka dil karta hai.
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«Reply #6 on: July 20, 2010, 09:31:32 PM »
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wah bahot khoob mamta saheba ...yeh sher to khoob raha
bahot hochoki darmiyaan dil ki doori......wah
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2010, 01:26:18 AM »
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN

YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN

YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN

PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN

HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN

UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN

BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN


DIN MEI CHAND DIKHATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE
DIL TO BAHUT LUBHATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE

TANHAI MEI YAAD AATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE
MEHFILE DIL SAJATI HAI TUMHARI BAATE

TERI BAATO KE BAARE MEI AB AUR KYA KAHU
TUJSE JYADA PYARI HAI TUMHARI BAATE
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«Reply #8 on: July 21, 2010, 06:02:09 AM »
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BAHUT HO CHUKI DIL JALANE KI BAATEN
KARO AB SANAM DIL LAGANE KI BAATEN

YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA
KARO BHEEGANE AUR BHIGANE KI BAATEN

YE CHAARON PAHAR RANJ-O-FIQRA KA AALAM
KARO KUCH TO HANSNE HANSANE KI BAATEN

PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM
KARO AB TO JALWA DIKHANE KI BAATEN

HANSEE KAHKAHON KI WO MAHFIL SAJA DO
NAHI AUR RONE RULANE KI BAATEN

UJADA NASHEMAN TO KYA GHUM KAREN?
KARO AB SITARON ME BASNE KI BAATEN

BAHUT HO CHUKI DARMIYA DIL KI DOORI
KARO AB TO MILNE MILANE KI BAATEN

bahut khoob mamta ji

KUCH IS TARAH SE BARAS E ABRE RAHMAT
MERE MAHBOOB KO DARR KE LIPAT JANE KI ADAT HAI
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«Reply #9 on: July 21, 2010, 01:15:26 PM »
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Bahot achhi ghaza likhi hai Mamta ji. Parhkar achha laga. Ghazal mein sheriyat dikhaai deti hai. Andaaz aur mazaameen bhi achhe hain. Behr ke hawale se kuchh suggestion dena chahta hun, shayad aapko theek lagen:

YE BAARISH KA MOUSAM HASEEN DILRUBA HAI
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YE DIN RAAT RANJ-O-ALAM KE FASAANE
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YE PARDE PE PARDA SITAM PE SITAM HAI
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NASHEMAN JO UJDA KOI GHAM NAHI HAI
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BAHUT BADH CHUKI DURIYAN DO DILON KI

Shukriya..
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«Reply #10 on: July 21, 2010, 01:44:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Mamta ji.. behad khoobsurat rachna hai aapki ye...!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2010, 01:58:23 PM »
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buhat khoob..
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 03:19:51 PM »
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waah kya baat h mamta saheba bahut hi umda likha h apne
 ho rahi baarish ka sida asar dikh raha h apki gazal par .waah likhte rahiyee uar abhi jaise hass rahi h waise hi haste rahiye
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2010, 08:13:10 AM »
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SHUKRIYA KOYAL! LAGTA HAI TUMNE APNI POSITIVE ENERGY HUMME TRANSFER KAR DI HAI.......BAS USI KA KAMAAL HAI.......
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«Reply #14 on: July 24, 2010, 08:17:10 AM »
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SHUKRIYA ROHIT JI!JAB FIZAON ME MOUSAM-E-BARISH KE NAGHME GOONJ RAHE HON TO BHALA HUM KAISE ACHOOTE RAH SAKTE HAIN?AAP NE MERA QALAAM PASAND FARMAYA BEHAD SHUKRIYA............AAP BHI JAHAN RAHEN KHUSH RAHEN.....KHUSHIYAN BAANTEN.........
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