Bacho Se Kabhi Unka Bachpana Naa Cheeno "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 22, 2010, 03:39:45 PM
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Main 2 din pehle kisi safar par jaa raha tha,
Mere Paas wale seat mein ek Masoom Sa Bacha Baitha tha,
maine uske haath mein kuch comic Books Dekhi,
Usme Se Ek Book Spiderman ki Thi,Maine Uss Bache se Masti mein Pucha yeh Kaun Hai,
Uss Bache ne Mujhe Hairaangi ki Nazar se Dekha Aur kaha,

"He is Spiderman,world's Best Super Hero..He can Save The World
(yeh Uss Bache Ke Genuine Word's The)

Mujhe Yeh Baat sunkar Hassi Si Aa Gayi,ke Bache Vakaai kitne Masoom hote hai..
bas issi khayal ko zehan mein rakhte hue Aur kuch aaj ke halaat,
bacho par Padhai Ka Pressure,Kahin Naa Khain Kuch Zimmedariyon Ka Presure
Bas kuch Baatein Jo Bacho Ke Zindagi Ke Ird-Gird Firti ho..




Janam Se Bhoj Paa Gaye Bache
Nadaani ke Umar Mein Budha Gaye Bache

Umar Thi Loriyan Suunkar Sone Ki!!!
T.V Ki Dhund mein Ghoomra Gaye Bache..

Ab Desh Ke Veeron ki Khata Kaun Sunaaye!!!
Cartoon Ki Hastiyon Ko Hero Bana Gaye Bache..

School Ka Bag Patharo se Bhara Ho Jaise!!!
Choti Si Umar mein Zimmedariyan Paa Gaye Bache..

Har Koi Chaahta Mera Laal,Meri Pari Class mein Top Kare
Bhaag-Daud Ki Duniya mein,
Kuch Khwaabo ko Pura Karne Ke Kaam Aa gaye Bache

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Bacho se
kabhi Unka Bechapana Naa Cheeno!!!!!
Yeh Padhkar Ab Muskura Gaye Bache..

                ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 03:53:18 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2010, 03:54:53 PM »
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Anuji,Yeh 4 Phool Kehte Kya Hai, Woh bhi Bata Dijiye..

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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 03:56:53 PM »
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intezar kijiye...aapke khyalon me jab hamare khyal milte hain to kuch alag hi banta hai ye aap bhi jante hain humbhi...bas usi ka intezar hai....hume...
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2010, 03:59:13 PM »
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intezar kijiye...aapke khyalon me jab hamare khyal milte hain to kuch alag hi banta hai ye aap bhi jante hain humbhi...bas usi ka intezar hai....hume...

Aapke Khaayalo Ke to hum Kaayal Hai Par Filhaal Humare Khayaal Kaise Lage Aapko, yeh Bata Dijiye.. tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2010, 04:47:51 PM »
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behad umda.....................shayad jitna masoom wo bachcha tha utni hi masoomiyat aur sachchai aapki kavita me jhalkti hai....jitni tareef karun kam hogi.
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2010, 10:33:26 PM »
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Badi masoom nazm..
Dost dil choo gayi..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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«Reply #7 on: October 23, 2010, 01:39:43 PM »
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behad umda.....................shayad jitna masoom wo bachcha tha utni hi masoomiyat aur sachchai aapki kavita me jhalkti hai....jitni tareef karun kam hogi.

Sanjeev Bro...Tehhhhhhhhh dillllll Se Shukriya Bhai

sanjeev bhai, jo uss waqt mehsoos kiya tha,likh gaya..Yeh Uss masoom bache Ki Badaulat Hi hai..Aapne Apna waqt diya..Thankyou Soooooooooooo much!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2010, 08:07:01 AM »
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chhote bachho ke hatho ko chand sitare chhune do,
char kitabe pad kar ye bhi hum jaise ho jajenge.
                 kisi bde shayar ne likha hai.aapne bdi sehajta se us bholepan ko apni shayari me jeevant kar diya.
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2010, 10:21:37 AM »
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intezar kijiye...aapke khyalon me jab hamare khyal milte hain to kuch alag hi banta hai ye aap bhi jante hain humbhi...bas usi ka intezar hai....hume...

Anuji, Abhi tak Aapka khayal nahi Aaya Yahan par..Hum Abhi intezaar Kar rahe Hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2010, 11:11:42 AM »
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aha aha aha..kya bat hai bahut badhiya hazaroon daad....apke liye
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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2010, 11:51:58 AM »
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SAHI KAHA HAI AAPNE     KHWAISH JI..... LEKIN..


AAJ KE BACHHE NAHI HAI PEHELE JAISE KACHHE
UMRA SE DO KADAM AAGE RAHENA CHAHTE AAJ KE BACHHE.....
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Badi masoom nazm..
Dost dil choo gayi..
bahaut bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
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bhai Rahim, Teh Dil Se Shukriya... icon_flower icon_flower
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