----- /// Bachpan ka pyaar /// -----

by klaskar on September 05, 2010, 06:45:50 AM
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Kabhi kabhi humein hamaare bachpan ke din bahut yaad aate hain. Koi aisa dost raha ho bachpan me jiske saath har waqt khelte the, ghumte the, school me saath jaate the. Chhuttiyon ke din bhi usi ke saath. Jiske hone k kaaran school jaana bahut achcha lagta tha. Ek aise hi dost ke baare me soch ke kuch likha....]


mujhe aaj bhi wo bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,
kitaab ke panno me kisi ka chehra nazar aata hai,

wo maasum si muskaan, wo aakhon ka chamakta paani,
aaj bhi un aankhon ka jhilmilaana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata hai,

haan mujhe mere saathi ka chehra nazar aata hai,
aaj bhi mujhe mere bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,

gudde gudiyon ka khel, wo unka khel me vyah rachana,
saari ke tukdon se unke kapde banana yaad aata hai,

wo khilaune bachpan ke, wo kahaani bachpan ke,
un khilauno se khel ke din bitaana yaad aata hai,

khaake thokar agar main girta, uska aake mujhe uthaana,
mere aansuon pe uska tadapna mujhe aaj bhi yaad aata hai,

wo maasum sa chehra, wo aankhon se behta paani,
uske rooth jaane pe mera wo manaana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata haii...



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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2010, 08:21:12 AM »
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 tearyeyed tearyeyed Meri ankhein aisi hi hogayi hai apki yeh kavita parr kar dost..bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai..mujhe emotional kardia..ehsaas aur jazbaat beh rahe hai apki iss kavita main..bahaut bahaut khoob..
Apki yeh kavita parr kar yeh soch raha tha kay itni khubsoorat kavita se kitna zada khubsoorat woh shaks hoga jiski yaad main likhi gayi..!
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2010, 06:26:03 PM »
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nice one
Quote from: klaskar on September 05, 2010, 06:45:50 AM
Kabhi kabhi humein hamaare bachpan ke din bahut yaad aate hain. Koi aisa dost raha ho bachpan me jiske saath har waqt khelte the, ghumte the, school me saath jaate the. Chhuttiyon ke din bhi usi ke saath. Jiske hone k kaaran school jaana bahut achcha lagta tha. Ek aise hi dost ke baare me soch ke kuch likha....]


mujhe aaj bhi wo bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,
kitaab ke panno me kisi ka chehra nazar aata hai,

wo maasum si muskaan, wo aakhon ka chamakta paani,
aaj bhi un aankhon ka jhilmilaana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata hai,

haan mujhe mere saathi ka chehra nazar aata hai,
aaj bhi mujhe mere bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,

gudde gudiyon ka khel, wo unka khel me vyah rachana,
saari ke tukdon se unke kapde banana yaad aata hai,

wo khilaune bachpan ke, wo kahaani bachpan ke,
un khilauno se khel ke din bitaana yaad aata hai,

khaake thokar agar main girta, uska aake mujhe uthaana,
mere aansuon pe uska tadapna mujhe aaj bhi yaad aata hai,

wo maasum sa chehra, wo aankhon se behta paani,
uske rooth jaane pe mera wo manaana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata haii...



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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2010, 07:00:37 PM »
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sad11 sad11 sad11

miss u re......
bht jyadaa

thnx kapil....kuch purani yaadein fir se roshan hogai dimag k kaarkahne me...
na jane kya kya ruup lengi ab....

thnx for this lovely poem......
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2010, 09:27:40 PM »
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klaskar saheb ek umda khakaa khinchaa hai aap ne bachpan ka aur sath hi sath bachpan ka pyar bhi,iss behetreen paish kash pe daad....
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2010, 07:06:05 AM »
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main aapk tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Rahim bhai... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapko pasand aaya ... aur aapne bahut achcha likha hai...!!!

Quote from: -Rahim- on September 05, 2010, 08:21:12 AM
tearyeyed tearyeyed Meri ankhein aisi hi hogayi hai apki yeh kavita parr kar dost..bahaut khubsoorati se likha hai..mujhe emotional kardia..ehsaas aur jazbaat beh rahe hai apki iss kavita main..bahaut bahaut khoob..
Apki yeh kavita parr kar yeh soch raha tha kay itni khubsoorat kavita se kitna zada khubsoorat woh shaks hoga jiski yaad main likhi gayi..!
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Kuch yun aya kay palkein bhigo gaya,
Jhonka tere khayal ka itna shadid tha..!
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2010, 07:09:01 AM »
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thank you

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on September 05, 2010, 06:26:03 PM
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2010, 06:07:32 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasajk ji... !!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 05, 2010, 07:00:37 PM
sad11 sad11 sad11

miss u re......
bht jyadaa

thnx kapil....kuch purani yaadein fir se roshan hogai dimag k kaarkahne me...
na jane kya kya ruup lengi ab....

thnx for this lovely poem......
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bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji...!!!

Quote from: nazar ghouri on September 05, 2010, 09:27:40 PM
klaskar saheb ek umda khakaa khinchaa hai aap ne bachpan ka aur sath hi sath bachpan ka pyar bhi,iss behetreen paish kash pe daad....
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2010, 06:08:38 PM »
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poori kavita kuch is tarha hai...

mujhe aaj bhi wo bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,
kitaab ke panno me kisi ka chehra nazar aata hai,

wo maasum si muskaan, wo aakhon ka chamakta paani,
aaj bhi un aankhon ka jhilmilaana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata hai,

haan mujhe mere saathi ka chehra nazar aata hai,
aaj bhi mujhe mere bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai,

gudde gudiyon ka khel, wo unka khel me vyah rachana,
saari ke tukdon se unke kapde banana yaad aata hai,

wo khilaune bachpan ke, wo kahaani bachpan ke,
un khilauno se khel ke din bitaana yaad aata hai,

khaake thokar agar main girta, uska aake mujhe uthaana,
mere aansuon pe uska tadapna mujhe aaj bhi yaad aata hai,

wo maasum sa chehra, wo aankhon se behta paani,
uske rooth jaane pe mera wo manaana yaad aata hai,

kabhi uske ghar jaana, kabhi uska mere ghar aana,
ghanto ek dusre ke saath khilkhilaana yaad aata hai,

maa se kehke pasand ke uske kuch banaana, saath khaana,
wo ek dusre se apni har pasand bataana yaad aata hai,

haathon pe banaate dolar aur jolly, wo statue kehna,
pyaar se ek dusre se baatein karna yaad aata hai,

wo bachpan ka pyaar mujhe aaj bhi yaad aata hai,
mere saathi ka chehra mujhe ab bhi nazar aata hai,

wo gungunaana , wo gaane gana saath milke,
wo saath uske school jaana yaad aata hai,

tiffin me laana pasand ki cheezen roz badalke,
aur unhe baantke school me khaana yaad aata hai,

pyaar se uske mere gaalon pe haath rakhna,
chere se mere baalon ko hataana yaad aata hai,

aaj bhi mujhe wo guzra zamaana yaad aata hai,
mere bachpan ke dost ka muskuraana yaad aata hai,

wo kaagaz ki kashti, wo baarish ka behta paani,
behte paani me kashti ka beh jaana yaad aata hai,

haan mujhe mere saathi ka chehra nazar aata hai,
aaj bhi mujhe mere bachpan ka pyaar yaad aata hai...
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