bachpan ke meet

by bekarar on November 27, 2005, 03:02:08 PM
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Doston kai dino ke baad mujhe do din akele bitane pade, wo bhi bina kisi dost ke, aur sachmuch achcha laga jab maine apane bachpan me jhanka jab mai apane bachpan me pahuncha to baar baar ek chehara mere samane aakar thahar jaata tha, mujhe ahsas hua yahi mera pahala pyar tha aur hai, us bachpan ke meet ke liye jo bhi dil se nikala likh dala.....
is post ke saath maine poll question bhi daala hai please poll



Teri un masoom adaon ka jawab,
zannat ki huron me bhi pa na saka,
koshishe bahoot ki nakamyab raha,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

wo tumhari ashiqana ada nahi bachpana hi tha,
umra meri bhi kam thi magar mai bachcha kahan tha,
us bachpane ko pyar mai bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere hathon ko thame rahata tha mai shamo sahar,
na kisi ka dar tha, na kisi ki fikar,
tera hath kya chuta ke fir pa na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere ashqon ka bahana dekh ke, mai bhi to rota tha,
bina jane teri khushiyon me khush, mai bhi hota tha
ye rishta kyun jawani me mai nibha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

"ladakon ke saath nahi khelate" tujhe nasihat di jaati,
"ladkiyon ke saath nahi khelega" mujhe ye baat samjhai jaati
wo khel tha ya koi rishta tha tere saath, ye sabako bata na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

wo chat ki sidiyon pe baith ke tera intzar karana,
tere aane pe baithe hone ki koi aur wazah kahana,
wo shayad pyar tha, tujhe samajha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

kai baar apane haathon se sajaya tha tumhe,
jhoothi shadiyon me sachchi dulhan banaya tha tumhe,
afsos ke haqikat us afsane ko bana na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

gharwalon ke jhagadon me jab tumse baat na ho paati thi,
wo aankhon ke ishare, teri muskarahat, sukun ban jaati thi,
tumhi mera sukune dil ho , bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2005, 06:12:30 PM »
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Doston kai dino ke baad mujhe do din akele bitane pade, wo bhi bina kisi dost ke, aur sachmuch achcha laga jab maine apane bachpan me jhanka jab mai apane bachpan me pahuncha to baar baar ek chehara mere samane aakar thahar jaata tha, mujhe ahsas hua yahi mera pahala pyar tha aur hai, us bachpan ke meet ke liye jo bhi dil se nikala likh dala.....
is post ke saath maine poll question bhi daala hai please poll



Teri un masoom adaon ka jawab,
zannat ki huron me bhi pa na saka,
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tumhi mera sukune dil ho , bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka


wow wow   bekara.........wonderfull  .......everywords  so  touching.... lekin  aap  ka  poll  option kahan  hai ??

agar hoti  meri  bhi kismat  to usko main bhi dil mein saja leta
khuda se maang  kar  usko apni  palkon  mein  bitha leta
rahta  woh  bhi meri  waadi mein  pariyon  ki  tarah
kabhi jo  girta palkon se  to  apne  honthon se saja  leta............... :oops:
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2005, 10:26:47 AM »
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thanx wahid ji,
I dont know why poll question is not there any way maine pucha tha ki

kya aap bhi mahsus karate hai ki aapaka pahala pyar tab hua tha jab aap shayad pyar ka matlab bhi nahi samajhate the yani ki bachpan me?
reply in yes or no
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2005, 04:25:12 PM »
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Very True, Nice and Emotional Poem!!!

Payaar means Emotions. Jo bachpan mai sabhi sathi ke sath hota hai, magar jis larki ke sath sabse jayada hota hai wo payari saheli ban jaati hai aor jis larke ke sath hota hai usse hum payaar ka naam de dety hai... just reverse for Boys!!

So answer to ur Poll is Yes!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 29, 2005, 12:14:41 PM »
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you are right pujaji
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«Reply #5 on: November 29, 2005, 02:30:34 PM »
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bahut he khoob bekarar n waheed...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 30, 2005, 04:57:24 AM »
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thanx salama ji but you didnt reply for poll question
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«Reply #7 on: November 30, 2005, 09:24:59 AM »
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Very True, Nice and Emotional Poem!!!

Payaar means Emotions. Jo bachpan mai sabhi sathi ke sath hota hai, magar jis larki ke sath sabse jayada hota hai wo payari saheli ban jaati hai aor jis larke ke sath hota hai usse hum payaar ka naam de dety hai... just reverse for Boys!!

So answer to ur Poll is Yes!!


Very True Pooja jee....!!!

N

bekarar....ma ans will b YES
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2005, 02:26:15 PM »
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thanx wahid ji,
I dont know why poll question is not there any way maine pucha tha ki

kya aap bhi mahsus karate hai ki aapaka pahala pyar tab hua tha jab aap shayad pyar ka matlab bhi nahi samajhate the yani ki bachpan me?
reply in yes or no


no...................
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2005, 06:08:05 PM »
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Wahhh bekarar ji,kya tareef karun iski,bottom of emotions cud b found here,gr8 piece of poetry.Nice work waheed too.

And aapke poll ka answer,i will give YES n Very true Pooja ji .

"Bhula doon use,keh gaya mujhse har ek shaks jo mujhe samjhane aaya,
 kya itna aasaan tha,us kachi umar me ki mohabbat ko bhulana,
 koi na samajh paaya,kaisa samandar daba rakha tha dil me maine,
 aajtak wo shaks na jaan paaya,kitni mohabbat ki usse maine,
 barson beet gaye,aaj bhi wo mohabbat dil me basa rakhi hai maine,
 dil hi dil me ki jiski ibaadat,uski tasveer dil me chupa rakhi hai maine,
 hothon pe muskaan to hoti hai,par dil hi dil me bohat roti hun,
 ek toote insaan ki tarah jeevan hai mera,na koi khwahish na arzoo,
 sochti hun,us bachpane me ki mohabbat me kya zindagi aaj bana li hai maine apni,
 bachpan ke meet mere na de saza itni badi mujhe mohabbat karne ki."
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2005, 06:48:04 PM »
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wah kaya zazbaat hai Nidhi.... bahoot khoob!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 07, 2005, 01:38:51 PM »
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Wahhh bekarar ji,kya tareef karun iski,bottom of emotions cud b found here,gr8 piece of poetry.Nice work waheed too.

And aapke poll ka answer,i will give YES n Very true Pooja ji .

"Bhula doon use,keh gaya mujhse har ek shaks jo mujhe samjhane aaya,
 kya itna aasaan tha,us kachi umar me ki mohabbat ko bhulana,
 koi na samajh paaya,kaisa samandar daba rakha tha dil me maine,
 aajtak wo shaks na jaan paaya,kitni mohabbat ki usse maine,
 barson beet gaye,aaj bhi wo mohabbat dil me basa rakhi hai maine,
 dil hi dil me ki jiski ibaadat,uski tasveer dil me chupa rakhi hai maine,
 hothon pe muskaan to hoti hai,par dil hi dil me bohat roti hun,
 ek toote insaan ki tarah jeevan hai mera,na koi khwahish na arzoo,
 sochti hun,us bachpane me ki mohabbat me kya zindagi aaj bana li hai maine apni,
 bachpan ke meet mere na de saza itni badi mujhe mohabbat karne ki."



oooooh............................. what a nice reply...............bahoot hi khub bayan kiya hai aapane dil ki baaton ko......................sachmuch aasan nahi hai bhulana bachpan ke pyar ko........
 thanx
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«Reply #12 on: December 07, 2005, 01:56:02 PM »
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bahut khoob nidhi...........!!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 07, 2005, 02:58:45 PM »
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Bekarar...Waheed n Nidhi........very nice ones from all of you !!!!
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«Reply #14 on: December 07, 2005, 05:57:28 PM »
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thanx talat ji, pls. reply for poll question
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