bachpan ke meet

by bekarar on November 27, 2005, 03:02:08 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 16, 2006, 06:20:10 PM »
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Thanx pooja ji,salma,bekaraar and Talat.
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«Reply #16 on: January 22, 2006, 07:10:44 PM »
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bachpan ka pyar har daur ke pyar se,
kuch khaas hota hai,
luka chupi, rangeen titaliyan,
kudrat ke khas nagamon ka, saaz hota hai
jab na shaklo surat ke mayne hote hain,
na daulat ka ehsas hota hai,
bas apana pyara dost kahin kho na jaye,
ek yahi ehsas hota hai
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«Reply #17 on: August 08, 2008, 12:42:01 PM »
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kya umr thi, kya dour tha, kya fasana tha,
hawaon me udate the hum, pairon tale jamana tha
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«Reply #18 on: August 08, 2008, 12:49:58 PM »
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Doston kai dino ke baad mujhe do din akele bitane pade, wo bhi bina kisi dost ke, aur sachmuch achcha laga jab maine apane bachpan me jhanka jab mai apane bachpan me pahuncha to baar baar ek chehara mere samane aakar thahar jaata tha, mujhe ahsas hua yahi mera pahala pyar tha aur hai, us bachpan ke meet ke liye jo bhi dil se nikala likh dala.....
is post ke saath maine poll question bhi daala hai please poll



Teri un masoom adaon ka jawab,
zannat ki huron me bhi pa na saka,
koshishe bahoot ki nakamyab raha,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

wo tumhari ashiqana ada nahi bachpana hi tha,
umra meri bhi kam thi magar mai bachcha kahan tha,
us bachpane ko pyar mai bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere hathon ko thame rahata tha mai shamo sahar,
na kisi ka dar tha, na kisi ki fikar,
tera hath kya chuta ke fir pa na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere ashqon ka bahana dekh ke, mai bhi to rota tha,
bina jane teri khushiyon me khush, mai bhi hota tha
ye rishta kyun jawani me mai nibha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

"ladakon ke saath nahi khelate" tujhe nasihat di jaati,
"ladkiyon ke saath nahi khelega" mujhe ye baat samjhai jaati
wo khel tha ya koi rishta tha tere saath, ye sabako bata na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

wo chat ki sidiyon pe baith ke tera intzar karana,
tere aane pe baithe hone ki koi aur wazah kahana,
wo shayad pyar tha, tujhe samajha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

kai baar apane haathon se sajaya tha tumhe,
jhoothi shadiyon me sachchi dulhan banaya tha tumhe,
afsos ke haqikat us afsane ko bana na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

gharwalon ke jhagadon me jab tumse baat na ho paati thi,
wo aankhon ke ishare, teri muskarahat, sukun ban jaati thi,
tumhi mera sukune dil ho , bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

Wow... Kitna innocent aur kitna pyaara...

Shabd nahin moti bikhere hai aapne Sanjeev ji..
Main abhi takk 3 baar padh chuki hoon isey... abhi phir se dobara padhne ka mann hai.. (is reply ke baad).. Usual Smile


Waise.. Don't mind, aaj ek afsos bhi hua.. Ki Hamare bachpan ke dost bhi kaash shayar hote.. tongue3 toh koi hamare liye bhi itna hi pyaara sa likhta.. Giggle
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«Reply #19 on: August 08, 2008, 01:07:11 PM »
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thanks mahiyaye to aapki nazren hain....waise sach bhi hai bina kaat-chant ke post ki thi ye maine....bina is baat ke paraaah kiye ki tuk ban rahi hai ya nahi....
aur aapki nazar se guzar gai.aapne pasand kiya.samjho bahoot hua humare liye
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«Reply #20 on: August 08, 2008, 01:11:23 PM »
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Yun hi humein taad ke jhaad par naa chadhaaiye.. Usual Smile

bachpan ka pyar har daur ke pyar se,
kuch khaas hota hai,
luka chupi, rangeen titaliyan,
kudrat ke khas nagamon ka, saaz hota hai
jab na shaklo surat ke mayne hote hain,
na daulat ka ehsas hota hai,
bas apana pyara dost kahin kho na jaye,
ek yahi ehsas hota hai


kya umr thi, kya dour tha, kya fasana tha,
hawaon me udate the hum, pairon tale jamana tha


Bahut bahut khoob... Applause
Yeh bhi kamaal ka likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #21 on: August 08, 2008, 04:06:22 PM »
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bachpan ka pyar har daur ke pyar se,
kuch khaas hota hai,
luka chupi, rangeen titaliyan,
kudrat ke khas nagamon ka, saaz hota hai
jab na shaklo surat ke mayne hote hain,
na daulat ka ehsas hota hai,
bas apana pyara dost kahin kho na jaye,
ek yahi ehsas hota hai


wah kaya baat hai!!!
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«Reply #22 on: August 09, 2008, 03:33:20 AM »
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Yun hi humein taad ke jhaad par naa chadhaaiye.. Usual Smile

Bahut bahut khoob... Applause
Yeh bhi kamaal ka likha hai aapne..


are tad ke jhad wali koi baat nahi agar hai bhi to ye tum mere liye kar rahi ho na ki mai tumhaare liye NaNaNa

shukriya aage bhi tumne pasand kiya

wah kaya baat hai!!!

shukriya pooja ji,

aji koi khas baat nahi hai...bas aapki nazren hi kuch khas hain...itni si baat hai
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«Reply #23 on: November 12, 2008, 04:45:45 AM »
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it realy very nice
Doston kai dino ke baad mujhe do din akele bitane pade, wo bhi bina kisi dost ke, aur sachmuch achcha laga jab maine apane bachpan me jhanka jab mai apane bachpan me pahuncha to baar baar ek chehara mere samane aakar thahar jaata tha, mujhe ahsas hua yahi mera pahala pyar tha aur hai, us bachpan ke meet ke liye jo bhi dil se nikala likh dala.....
is post ke saath maine poll question bhi daala hai please poll



Teri un masoom adaon ka jawab,
zannat ki huron me bhi pa na saka,
koshishe bahoot ki nakamyab raha,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

wo tumhari ashiqana ada nahi bachpana hi tha,
umra meri bhi kam thi magar mai bachcha kahan tha,
us bachpane ko pyar mai bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere hathon ko thame rahata tha mai shamo sahar,
na kisi ka dar tha, na kisi ki fikar,
tera hath kya chuta ke fir pa na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

tere ashqon ka bahana dekh ke, mai bhi to rota tha,
bina jane teri khushiyon me khush, mai bhi hota tha
ye rishta kyun jawani me mai nibha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

"ladakon ke saath nahi khelate" tujhe nasihat di jaati,
"ladkiyon ke saath nahi khelega" mujhe ye baat samjhai jaati
wo khel tha ya koi rishta tha tere saath, ye sabako bata na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

wo chat ki sidiyon pe baith ke tera intzar karana,
tere aane pe baithe hone ki koi aur wazah kahana,
wo shayad pyar tha, tujhe samajha na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka,

kai baar apane haathon se sajaya tha tumhe,
jhoothi shadiyon me sachchi dulhan banaya tha tumhe,
afsos ke haqikat us afsane ko bana na saka
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka

gharwalon ke jhagadon me jab tumse baat na ho paati thi,
wo aankhon ke ishare, teri muskarahat, sukun ban jaati thi,
tumhi mera sukune dil ho , bata na saka,
mere bachpan ke meet tujhe bhula na saka
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«Reply #24 on: November 12, 2008, 04:46:55 AM »
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very nice
wah kaya baat hai!!!
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«Reply #25 on: November 12, 2008, 05:33:37 AM »
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karke yaad un beeti baaton ko
aankho se aansu behte hain
bachpan k beete din wo saare
aaj bhi ird-gird mere rehte hain

wo pal kitna acha tha hamdam
jisme saath tera-mera suhana tha
jaane kya kyaa baatein karte the ham
aur khelna to tujhse milne ka bahana tha

wo haath pakad galiyon mei mera
bas saara din jo bitaana tha
waqt ka kuch pata bhi na chalta
aur ghar tera jaise mera thikana tha

aata tha jab bhi tu saamne
dharkano ho jaati jaane kyu tufaani thi
shyd samajh na paayi thi mein tab
ki mein teri hi deewani thi

jab ham jawaa hua tab se
alag tera mera ghar pariwaar hua
roka har kadam sabne mujhe
tab jaan payi ki mujhe tujhse tha pyaar hua

ek roz jo tu chala gaya tha chod mujhe
fir mera jeena tha dushwaar hua
dekh mere haalaat meri bebasi
papa ne fir mera byaah kar diyaa

ek mitti k putle ko tha sabne
jhoote armaano se tha fir sajaya
par mere dil mei tha kya
na tujhe bata saki na zamaana jaan paaya

aaj tak jee rahi hoon mein dekh
rishton ka sir par bojh liye
har mod par chadhti hai meri bali
bas jinda hoon to teri ek jhalak k liye


tearyeyed

wonderful creation sanjeev ji  Applause  Applause

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«Reply #26 on: November 12, 2008, 06:20:33 AM »
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 :clap:Bahoot hi achhe bhaawna...daad qubool kareiN
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«Reply #27 on: November 12, 2008, 06:36:48 AM »
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:clap:Bahoot hi achhe bhaawna...daad qubool kareiN

ji bohut bohut shukriya harsh ji 
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«Reply #28 on: November 13, 2008, 05:26:58 PM »
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bahoot khoob bhawna
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«Reply #29 on: November 18, 2008, 10:28:50 AM »
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thnks pooja ji 
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