Bachpan ki yaadein...................................Aqsh

by aqsh on November 28, 2012, 11:21:21 AM
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Woh befikr bachpan, woh girna sambhalna
Ammi ki nazroN se, bachkar nikalna

Woh chulhe ki roti, haathoN ka taqiya
GudiyoN ki shaadi, woh ladna jagadhna

Woh ammi ki lori, woh kisse-kahani
Woh abba ka mujhko, khana khilaana

Woh mitti ke haathi, woh mitti ke ghode
KheloN ki duniya meiN, hansna aur rona

Karke shararat, woh masoom banna
Woh ammi se darkar, kahin door chupna

Ammi ki godi thi, duniya ki jannat
Usi jannat meiN hota tha, apna sona

Mushkil hai bada, aasaan nahiN
Bhula dena, haseeN khwaab suhaana
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«Reply #1 on: November 28, 2012, 11:24:29 AM »
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bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 28, 2012, 11:28:14 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 28, 2012, 11:21:21 AM
Woh befikr bachpan, woh girna sambhalna
Ammi ki nazroN se bachkar nikalna

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Woh chulhe ki roti, haathoN ka taqiya
GudiyoN ki shaadi, woh ladna jagadhna

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Woh ammi ki lori, woh kisse-kahani
Woh abba ka mujhko, khana khilaana

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Woh mitti ke haathi, woh mitti ke ghode
KheloN ki duniya meiN, hansna aur rona

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Karke shararat, woh masoom banna
Woh ammi se darkar, kahin door chupna

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Ammi ki ghodi thi, duniya ki jannat
Usi jannat meiN hota tha, apna sona

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Mushkil hai bada, aasaan nahiN
Bhula dena woh, haseeN khwaab suhaana

mind blowing  ek RAU meri taraf se inshallah kal lena ,,,bcoz after 8 hrs..
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«Reply #3 on: November 28, 2012, 11:28:24 AM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on November 28, 2012, 11:24:29 AM
bahut khoob Aqsh ji.. Applause Applause
thnx nishi jee
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«Reply #4 on: November 28, 2012, 11:29:29 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 28, 2012, 11:28:14 AM
mind blowing  ek RAU meri taraf se inshallah kal lena ,,,bcoz after 8 hrs..
thank you sahal jee
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«Reply #5 on: November 28, 2012, 11:37:08 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 28, 2012, 11:21:21 AM
Woh befikr bachpan, woh girna sambhalna
Ammi ki nazroN se, bachkar nikalna

Woh chulhe ki roti, haathoN ka taqiya
GudiyoN ki shaadi, woh ladna jagadhna

Woh ammi ki lori, woh kisse-kahani
Woh abba ka mujhko, khana khilaana

Woh mitti ke haathi, woh mitti ke ghode
KheloN ki duniya meiN, hansna aur rona

Karke shararat, woh masoom banna
Woh ammi se darkar, kahin door chupna

Ammi ki ghodi thi, duniya ki jannat
Usi jannat meiN hota tha, apna sona

Mushkil hai bada, aasaan nahiN
Bhula dena woh, haseeN khwaab suhaana
wah kya baat hai aqsh jee nihayat umda kalaam hai, dheerroon daad qubool karen...
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2012, 11:42:36 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 28, 2012, 11:37:08 AM
wah kya baat hai aqsh jee nihayat umda kalaam hai, dheerroon daad qubool karen...
bahut bahut thnx aarish jee
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«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2012, 12:08:07 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 28, 2012, 11:21:21 AM
Woh befikr bachpan, woh girna sambhalna
Ammi ki nazroN se, bachkar nikalna

Woh chulhe ki roti, haathoN ka taqiya
GudiyoN ki shaadi, woh ladna jagadhna

Woh ammi ki lori, woh kisse-kahani
Woh abba ka mujhko, khana khilaana

Woh mitti ke haathi, woh mitti ke ghode
KheloN ki duniya meiN, hansna aur rona

Karke shararat, woh masoom banna
Woh ammi se darkar, kahin door chupna

Ammi ki ghodi thi, duniya ki jannat
Usi jannat meiN hota tha, apna sona

Mushkil hai bada, aasaan nahiN
Bhula dena, haseeN khwaab suhaana

nice,ma'am
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2012, 12:10:48 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on November 28, 2012, 12:08:07 PM
nice,ma'am
thnx marhoom jee
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«Reply #9 on: November 28, 2012, 12:23:17 PM »
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gd one aapne to bachpan ki yaad hi dila di.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2012, 12:24:14 PM »
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Quote from: bolte raho sushil on November 28, 2012, 12:23:17 PM
gd one aapne to bachpan ki yaad hi dila di.....
thnx sushil jee
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«Reply #11 on: November 28, 2012, 12:32:31 PM »
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sirf do line aur meri taraf se bhi DONT MIND....

wo mil k bichdna , wo gir k sambhalna,
ammi ki ungli pakad k hi chalna,
           na kuch tha hamara na kuch tha tumhara
           bade bekaboo hai wo bachpan ki yaaden ,
           wo shone k din aur chandi ki raaten .......

BAHOT KHUB :
AB LIKHUN TO SHABD KAM PAD JAAYENGE , AUR NA LIKHOON TO AANSOO BAHTE JAAYENGE.................
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2012, 12:42:10 PM »
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wow bahut khoob... sach mein bahut hi acha likha apne.. lovely..
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2012, 01:03:37 PM »
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Quote from: bolte raho sushil on November 28, 2012, 12:32:31 PM
sirf do line aur meri taraf se bhi DONT MIND....

wo mil k bichdna , wo gir k sambhalna,
ammi ki ungli pakad k hi chalna,
           na kuch tha hamara na kuch tha tumhara
           bade bekaboo hai wo bachpan ki yaaden ,
           wo shone k din aur chandi ki raaten .......

BAHOT KHUB :
AB LIKHUN TO SHABD KAM PAD JAAYENGE , AUR NA LIKHOON TO AANSOO BAHTE JAAYENGE.................

nahi aap chahe toh likh sakte hai mere taraf se koi manai nahi bachpan ki yaadein har kisi ko tadpaati hai
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2012, 01:04:22 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on November 28, 2012, 12:42:10 PM
wow bahut khoob... sach mein bahut hi acha likha apne.. lovely..
thnx lovely jee
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