Bachpan

by soudagar on June 12, 2012, 08:53:59 AM
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Yad aati h wo bachpan ki masumiyat,wo bachpan ki shaitani
yaad aati hai wo suni hui maa ko goud mein kahani

yad aata h wo barish mein bhigna ,phir sardi ke kaaran chhikna
yad aata hai maa ka apne aachal se sar pochhna, jhutha datna aur kosna

yad aata  baba ke aate hi pichhe padna,ghumne ki zidd krna
yaad aata hai baba ka bahr ghumana,bde pyar se ice cream dilana

yaad aati hai wo dosto ki toli, jinke sang kheli thi holi
yad aata h wo dosto ka rang lagana, pani tanki mein dal nahlana

yad aati h wo khadus madam, jiske dantne se hi nikl jata tha dum
yad aata h wo school kaa madhyantr, khelte the sabhi dost milkar,

yad aati hai wo pados ki ladki,khuli rehti thi jiske kamre ki khidki,
yad aata h uska chhup chhup kr dekhna, mere dekhte hi parde ke pichhe chhipna

yad ata hai wo titli pakdna, kabhi girna kabhi sambhalna
wo galiyon mein khelna, ghar ke shishe tutne par kisi ek ka bhi na milna



ab sab bdal gya, na bagiche rahe, na maidan rhe, na tyohar rahe na yaar rhe,
ab na wo khidki khulti hai aur na hi wo ladki dikhti hai
na kahin se dosto ki boli sunti hai, na ab holi manti hai
na barish ka mousam aata hai, na maa ka aanchal pochhta hai.


Bas dikhti hai sirf dunia ki bheed aur bheed mein tanha "soudagar" ki aankh se behta pani
yad aati hai wo bachpan ki masoomiyat wo bachpan ki shaitani.......
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2012, 09:19:07 AM »
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bahut sunder byaan kiyaa hai bachpan kaa aapko saadhuwaad deta hoon
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2012, 10:13:00 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB .
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2012, 10:23:11 AM »
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Kabhi Bhi Asaan Nahi Hota Hai LafzoN Mein Apne bachpan Ko Utaarna..
Aapka Likha Ek-Ek Lafz Ek Aaena Sa Mehsoos Hua Saudagarji..

Bahut Hi umda Khoobsurat Aur Zindagi Se Juudi Meethi Yaadon Ki Nishaani..

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2012, 04:11:46 PM »
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khusnaseebi meri  ki is rachna par pehle teeno comment mere pasandida shayro ke hai......lafzo mein abhar nahi prakat  kar pa raha ..........

 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2012, 05:41:10 PM »
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Bachpan ke din jab bhi yaad karo suhane lagte hai..
 bahut Khoob likha hai saudagar jee.
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2012, 06:46:50 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoobsurat shabdon me aapne bachpan ki kahaani ko pesh kiya hai... bahut khoobsurat andaaz me yaadon ko joda hai... bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2012, 07:27:02 PM »
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bohot khoob sir bohot umda likha hai aapne ....  Applause  Applause  icon_salut


aapke BACHPAN NE MUJHE MERA BACHPAN YAAD DILA DIA JO MAINE EK BAR LIKHA THA SHAYAD APNE PADA HO
AAPKE PESHE E KHIDMAT HAI

   BACHPAN:-
Jiya nahi mene bachpan apna , mere liye ye sab hai ek sapna….
Janu nahi kesa hota hai gudde-guddio se khelna,

Video game me level par karna.
Kuch naya   lane ki zid karna ,
Chekhna ,rona or khwahish karna.
Nahi jiya mene kabhi bachpan apna…..

Bachpan ki koi yad he nahi hai abhi,
Mila nahi dadu dadi ka pya kabhi.

Vo dadu ki khanaio me kho jana,
Dadi ki godi me sar rakh kar so jana.

Har roz dadu ka mere liye toffee choclete lana,
Or dadi k hato   se  roti ka khana……

Kabhi mujh se koi galati ho jana, papa ka mujhe gussa dikhana,
Us par dadu ka papa ko ankh dikhana, or dadi ka fir mujh rote ka gale lagana..

Nahi mila kabhi,  Mujhe pyar itna ….. mere liye  ye sab hai ek sapna….
Akela tha mai, akela hun mai..

Dusron k liye khush  hun yun to mai, andar se lekin khali hun mai…
Koi nahi hai mere pas yaden.. bas ye he hai jo hai bebak sapne…
Or ye he haI jo hai mere apne…!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2012, 03:33:27 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2012, 05:43:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2012, 05:43:42 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2012, 01:57:48 AM »
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roy ji bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2012, 07:03:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kamlesh ji
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bahut b ahut shukriya
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
I am touched. nice creation my son  Thumbs UP
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