<>*Badal gai main to*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 21, 2013, 01:50:38 AM
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<>*Badal gai main to*<>


Badal gai main
to fir pachhtaoge
Mujhme mujhsa
kuch naa paaoge

Meri jis muskaan pe
marte ho tum
Use umra bhar
dhundhte reh jaaoge...

Shararatein meri
satati hai tumhe
Kal meri khamoshi se
ukta jaaoge....

Ithhlati firti hun aaj
tere ird gird main
Kal mujhe dekhne ko
taras jaaoge...

Na puchho "kasak..
tum aisi kyun ho"
Meri kahanii sunoge
to saham jaaoge...
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2013, 01:54:24 AM »
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<>*Badal gai main to*<>


Badal gai main
to fir pachhtaoge
Mujhme mujhsa
kuch naa paaoge

Meri jis muskaan pe
marte ho tum
Use umra bhar
dhundhte reh jaaoge...

Shararatein meri
satati hai tumhe
Kal meri khamoshi se
ukta jaaoge....

Ithhlati firti hun aaj
tere ird gird main
Kal mujhe dekhne ko
taras jaaoge...

Na puchho "kasak..
tum aisi kyun ho"
Meri kahanii sunoge
to saham jaaoge...

Kisi ek ke badalne se badalti nahin duniyan.!
Ek ke sahaare hi rahti nahin hai ab duniyan.!!



Anyway Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2013, 02:02:15 AM »
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Mat Badaliyega Behna Pls... Aap Jaise Hai Achchey Hain
Rahi Baat Shayari Ki To Badi Hi Sadgi Aur Khubsoorti Se
Lafzon Ko Piroya Hai Aapne. Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khub
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 02:51:22 AM »
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Kasak Jee Aadaab...!

Ufff itna gussa jee kise dikha rahi hai aap... mujhe tongue3
bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... badi pyaari aur dil ko chhune wali kalaam kahi hai aapne...

bade hi umdaa warse rahe.. is khoob nazm par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad akbul kijiye...

Likhate rhaiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2013, 02:54:55 AM »
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Waah bahaut khoob Kasak ji ......  ek sundar aur pur jazbaat nazm par daad aap ko
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 08:32:57 AM »
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waah waah beautiful
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 09:36:17 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 12:29:11 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaaaaah... kya baat hai... mastttttttt likhe ho... dheron dheron daaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2013, 12:42:59 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause :clap:wha wha wha wha
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2013, 03:53:35 PM »
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Allah aapko yon hi rakhe, aap kabhi na badlen...
bahot khooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2013, 05:47:32 PM »
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bahut khoob . nice poem kasak ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 21, 2013, 09:26:00 PM »
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<>*Badal gai main to*<>


Badal gai main
to fir pachhtaoge
Mujhme mujhsa
kuch naa paaoge


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kyun ji, itnaa gussaa kispar, kyaa naraazgi ho gayi, magar aapke gusse kaa bhi jawaab nahi, bahut khoob


Meri jis muskaan pe
marte ho tum
Use umra bhar
dhundhte reh jaaoge...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
naa ji naa, aisaa naa karnaa, aapki muskaan agar gum ho gayi to hum jaise aashiqon ka kyaa hogaa, jite ji mar naa jaayenge hum?


Shararatein meri
satati hai tumhe
Kal meri khamoshi se
ukta jaaoge....


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
jaante to ho ki aapki sharaaratein kitni pyaari hoti hain, yahi to hain jo chehre par anjaani si koi muskaan laa hi deti hain, tanhaayi mein jab kabhi bhi aapki yaad aati hai, aapki sharaartein yaad aati hain, muskaan apne aap chehre par aa hi jaati hain Usual Smile


Ithhlati firti hun aaj
tere ird gird main
Kal mujhe dekhne ko
taras jaaoge...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
chalo yeh point to aapkaa accept kar lete hain, nahi dekhenge aapko, dekhne kaa program cancel, dekhenge to mohabbat badh jaayegi, fir control naa ho paayegaa...hehehehehe... tongue3


Na puchho "kasak..
tum aisi kyun ho"
Meri kahanii sunoge
to saham jaaoge...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
main to zaroor puchhungaa ji, bataao ji 'Hriday ki Kasak' tum aisi kyun ho? itni achchi, itni pyaari, itni bholi, itni sundar, itni.... list khatam hi naa ho aapke taarifon ki, uparwaale ne jab aapko banaayaa hogaa bade fursat se banaayaa hogaa, masterpiece... hai naa? Usual Smile



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Hmmmmm ab kyaa kahen it rachnaa ki taarif mein, bilkul jaadu kaa saa asar hai ji, bahut pyaari, bahut khoosoorat rachnaa, ek dum Kasak style, straight from the heart, bahut din baad aapkaa likhaa kuch padh ke bahut bahut achchaa lagaa... ab gussa chhod bhi dijiye aur maan jaaiye.... thodaa try kar lete hain manaane kaa....



jo hai baat dil mein
zubaan ko keh lene do
tum khud ko tum jaisaa hi
sanam reh lene do

bahut tanhaa hoon main
tumhaare binaa sanam
tumhaari parchhaai ban ke
mujhe reh lene do

tumhaari maasoomiyat se
mujhe mohabbat hai
mujhe mohabbat ki
dariyaa mein beh lene do

naa do bad-duwa tum se
duur jaane ki mujhe
mujhe apni nazron ke
saamne hi reh lene do

de ke waastaa dard kaa
muh fer lete hain sab
le lo meri muskaan
mujhe kareeb reh lene do


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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2013, 06:33:41 PM »
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bahut khoob...

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