Bahaaron ki khaatir

by asma zehra on July 04, 2009, 02:29:08 PM
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Bujhi khandil liye phirte hain raahon mein aksar
Koi de chingaari charaagon ki khaatir

Be-akl kehte hain duniya mein mujh ko
Hanste hain hum bhi deewaanon ki khaatir

Sawaalon ki deewaaren wafaa ke aangen mein
Rangte hain jin ko fasaanon ki khaatir

Jitney kaante the chun liye chaman se
Ab to khile gul bahaaron ki khaatir.


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«Reply #1 on: July 04, 2009, 09:03:50 PM »
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Bohot ache Aasma ji...
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«Reply #2 on: July 04, 2009, 10:01:01 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Zehra Ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2009, 04:43:00 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Asma Ji.. Very Nice Creation.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 07:15:32 AM »
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Nice One Asma Ji.
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«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 07:16:32 AM »
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Beautiful creation Asma,achi gazal hai. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 11:09:05 AM »
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Bohot badhiya likha hai aapne qadeer ji...
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«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 12:42:44 PM »
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Wah Qadeer ji,bahut khoob,mindblowing. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 05:19:29 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ASMA...WAAH Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 06, 2009, 07:16:04 AM »
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Subhan allah kya qoob haqeeqath bayan ki hai apne na jane kitne hi log sare aam aur goshe goshe me is haqeeqath se jaddo jahed kar rahe hon .. bahoth umda paimane pe ap ne ishare dene ki koshish hai asma saheba dil se dad Karen !!mujhe apna likha khuch yaad aya !! mazirath chahonge ke kal maine yehi apki kissi aur thread me post kiya the .. masroof itna tha kaam me ke pata hi nahi chala kahan pe likh diya maine ..


Sitam gari dekhi teri aur unke hauslon ki bulandi bhi dekhi !!
Mauth ki goodh me muskurati maine zindagi bhi dekhi !!

Badshah hazaro mafath parast aa-a- aur chale gaye !!
Kissi faqir ke kaase se maine tawangari bhi dekhi !!

Lachari o bebasi ki fiza cha-e- hai qirya qirya !!
Aise alam me maine tere shaher me mausoqi bhi dekhi !!


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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 08:18:30 AM »
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Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 06, 2009, 07:16:04 AM
Subhan allah kya qoob haqeeqath bayan ki hai apne na jane kitne hi log sare aam aur goshe goshe me is haqeeqath se jaddo jahed kar rahe hon .. bahoth umda paimane pe ap ne ishare dene ki koshish hai asma saheba dil se dad Karen !!mujhe apna likha khuch yaad aya !! mazirath chahonge ke kal maine yehi apki kissi aur thread me post kiya the .. masroof itna tha kaam me ke pata hi nahi chala kahan pe likh diya maine ..


Sitam gari dekhi teri aur unke hauslon ki bulandi bhi dekhi !!
Mauth ki goodh me muskurati maine zindagi bhi dekhi !!

Badshah hazaro mafath parast aa-a- aur chale gaye !!
Kissi faqir ke kaase se maine tawangari bhi dekhi !!

Lachari o bebasi ki fiza cha-e- hai qirya qirya !!
Aise alam me maine tere shaher me mausoqi bhi dekhi !!


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KYAA UNCHI BAAT KAHI HAI QADIR SAHAB
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«Reply #11 on: July 06, 2009, 08:19:14 AM »
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Quote from: asma zehra on July 04, 2009, 02:29:08 PM


Bujhi khandil liye phirte hain raahon mein aksar
Koi de chingaari charaagon ki khaatir

Be-akl kehte hain duniya mein mujh ko
Hanste hain hum bhi deewaanon ki khaatir

Sawaalon ki deewaaren wafaa ke aangen mein
Rangte hain jin ko fasaanon ki khaatir

Jitney kaante the chun liye chaman se
Ab to khile gul bahaaron ki khaatir.


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BAHUT KHOOB ASMA JI
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 06, 2009, 08:18:30 AM
KYAA UNCHI BAAT KAHI HAI QADIR SAHAB

nawazish karam apka jo apne pasand farmaya .. but the credit goes to asma saheba !!

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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 05, 2009, 12:42:44 PM
Wah Qadeer ji,bahut khoob,mindblowing. Applause Applause Applause

shukriya madhuwesh ji !!

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Quote from: asma zehra on July 04, 2009, 02:29:08 PM


Bujhi khandil liye phirte hain raahon mein aksar
Koi de chingaari charaagon ki khaatir

Be-akl kehte hain duniya mein mujh ko
Hanste hain hum bhi deewaanon ki khaatir

Sawaalon ki deewaaren wafaa ke aangen mein
Rangte hain jin ko fasaanon ki khaatir

Jitney kaante the chun liye chaman se
Ab to khile gul bahaaron ki khaatir.


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Bahut khooob likha aapne Zehra ji  Applause
Daad kabul kijiyega..
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