"" Bahot khel chuke phoolon ke sang " 'NiR'

by nirala on January 31, 2011, 06:38:28 AM
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Bahot ho chuka Hansi-Thitholi
ab jara Gamgeen chehra banaya jaye

bahot khel chuke Phoolon ke sang
ab kaanto sang raas Rachaya jaye

Ummedon ka daaman bahot thaam liye
ab mayusiyon sang dil bahlaya jaye

rakha kya hai Hansne-hansane me
ab rona-dhona bhi sikhaya jaye

pyar me ' usko ' bahot rulaye
ab khud ko jara tadpaaya jaye

Chamak duniya ke bahoot dekh chuke
ab andhere me khud ko bhi chupaaya jaye

namumkin nahi hai kuch bhi Nir
ab thoda sa inme bhi haath azmaaya jaye
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Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2011, 07:55:14 AM »
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Bahot ho chuka Hansi-Thitholi
ab jara Gamgeen chehra banaya jaye

bahot khel chuke Phoolon ke sang
ab kaanto sang raas Rachaya jaye

Ummedon ka daaman bahot thaam liye
ab mayusiyon sang dil bahlaya jaye

rakha kya hai Hansne-hansane me
ab rona-dhona bhi sikhaya jaye

pyar me ' usko ' bahot rulaye
ab khud ko jara tadpaaya jaye

Chamak duniya ke bahoot dekh chuke
ab andhere me khud ko bhi chupaaya jaye

namumkin nahi hai kuch bhi Nir
ab thoda sa inme bhi haath azmaaya jaye
"
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
"

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne Niralaji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Khoob Par Yeh Bilkul Bhi Mazahiya Shayari nahi,Isliye Isse Move Kar raha Hoon Misc Section mein..Shukriya
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2011, 08:29:21 AM »
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ohh aisa kya Khwahish ji--
mene socha ye Funny hai kuki isme sab ulta xample dia hai mene issliye isko Majahia me daala tha.
aapne pasand kiya iske liye sukriya
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2011, 10:20:25 AM »
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bahut khoob Nirala ji ,excellent.
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2011, 10:25:54 AM »
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Phoole ke sang achha khelte ho ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2011, 10:46:22 AM »
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haha Thanks Kishan Usual Smile
 Suresh ji apka bhi sukriya
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2011, 01:47:05 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Nirala jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2011, 04:38:43 PM »
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thanx Rahim jee
aap bhi khus rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2011, 07:24:24 PM »
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Bahot ho chuka Hansi-Thitholi
ab jara Gamgeen chehra banaya jaye

bahot khel chuke Phoolon ke sang
ab kaanto sang raas Rachaya jaye

Ummedon ka daaman bahot thaam liye
ab mayusiyon sang dil bahlaya jaye

rakha kya hai Hansne-hansane me
ab rona-dhona bhi sikhaya jaye

pyar me ' usko ' bahot rulaye
ab khud ko jara tadpaaya jaye

Chamak duniya ke bahoot dekh chuke
ab andhere me khud ko bhi chupaaya jaye

namumkin nahi hai kuch bhi Nir
ab thoda sa inme bhi haath azmaaya jaye
"
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
"

Nice One ........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2011, 12:20:20 PM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2011, 07:46:50 PM »
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Bahot ho chuka Hansi-Thitholi
ab jara Gamgeen chehra banaya jaye

bahot khel chuke Phoolon ke sang
ab kaanto sang raas Rachaya jaye

Ummedon ka daaman bahot thaam liye
ab mayusiyon sang dil bahlaya jaye

rakha kya hai Hansne-hansane me
ab rona-dhona bhi sikhaya jaye

pyar me ' usko ' bahot rulaye
ab khud ko jara tadpaaya jaye

Chamak duniya ke bahoot dekh chuke
ab andhere me khud ko bhi chupaaya jaye

namumkin nahi hai kuch bhi Nir
ab thoda sa inme bhi haath azmaaya jaye
"
Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
"

badhiya hai ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2011, 09:16:06 AM »
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Nice One ........ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanx
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nirala
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2011, 09:18:08 AM »
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Bahut Khub Nirala JI
thanx chhote
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2011, 09:20:14 AM »
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badhiya hai ji
thanx mb
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