balaa................A.B

by adil bechain on September 15, 2013, 05:07:06 AM
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                        ghar-ghar    mein    aisi   siyaasat   hone   lagi...,
                        ke  chhote-chhote  kamro.n  ki  riyaasat hone lagi...,

                        zinda  rahna,  hai  hamaari  fitrat  mein shaamil....,
                        warna   ye  zindagi   to   ek   aafat   hone  lagi...,

                        baat-baat    pe    mar-mitne   ko   aamaada   logg...,
                        ess   mulk   mein   roz   hi  shahaadat  hone lagi...,

                        koocha-e-yaar se   jo  nikle  to  bhatak  hi  gaye...,
                        zarre-zarre    se   phir   shikaayat   hone   lagi...,

                        takra kar sarr inn diwaaro.n se haasil kuchh nahin...,
                        inhi  ke  saaye  mein  ab rahne ki aadat hone lagi...,

                        hue jo  meharbaa.n woh to dil apna  khaufdazda hua...,
                        ke'  bechain'  ki  jaan pe roz ek aziyat hone lagi...,

                       
 

                       

                       
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2013, 05:10:40 AM »
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waah waah wah waah Adil ji, kyaa kehne , bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne.....!!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2013, 05:13:43 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Adilji.
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2013, 06:06:13 AM »
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you first stanza is superb..!!  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2013, 08:31:09 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2013, 12:40:45 PM »
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 Applause  bahut khoob AB saheb
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2013, 01:31:32 PM »
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takra kar sarr inn diwaaro.n se haasil kuchh nahin...,
inhi  ke  saaye  mein  ab rahne ki aadat hone lagi...,

Bahut khoob Adil bhai
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2013, 01:56:52 PM »
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waaah waaah bohut khoob A.B sahab
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waaaaaaaaah adil ji.. kya kehne.. bahut bahut achcha likhe ho aap.. sabhi ashaar bahut gehre soch se saje hue.. hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #9 on: September 22, 2013, 07:08:22 PM »
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waah waah wah waah Adil ji, kyaa kehne , bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne.....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2013, 09:36:14 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 15, 2013, 05:13:43 AM
Bahut Khoob Adilji.


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