Bandhan

by Pooja on April 30, 2009, 06:16:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 01, 2009, 05:41:01 AM »
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bahut achche pooja di apne sach main bahut hi khoosurati se bayaan kiya hi ......bandhan mein bandhne walon ka haal


ae preet mere , manmeet mere
de doon main tera saath
par more piya bas itna sun le
mohe bandhan mein na baandh

chhoda aangan babul ka main teri sang hoon aayi
par yeh sun le sjna mere , main dasi ban na aayi
meri bhi chahat hai kuch, hai mere bhi armaan
maine bhi apni duniya hai rangon se sajayi

huyi purani baatein ab yeh ladki ghr kii rani
maine jo arjit kii vidya uska na koi saani
karoongi b woh jo dil ko bhaaye, saath tu thoda de de
baandh piya na mujhko preet mein, sun meri bhi Vaani


wah wah wah Salil ji, jitna apko padne ka avsar mil raha hai utne he hum apki shayri ke fan hote ja rahe hai.....bahoot khoob Ek Folk song ki tarah.. itani meethi, dil ko chuti hui kavita likhi hai apne... kamaal... dil khush ho gaya...
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«Reply #16 on: May 02, 2009, 02:04:34 PM »
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Bahoot khoob Pooja sis :claaping: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Or Azeem ji or Netra ji ne bahoot acha sath nibhaya Thumbs UP

Shukriya salma Ji,.
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«Reply #17 on: May 02, 2009, 02:08:59 PM »
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bahut achche pooja di apne sach main bahut hi khoosurati se bayaan kiya hi ......bandhan mein bandhne walon ka haal


ae preet mere , manmeet mere
de doon main tera saath
par more piya bas itna sun le
mohe bandhan mein na baandh

chhoda aangan babul ka main teri sang hoon aayi
par yeh sun le sjna mere , main dasi ban na aayi
meri bhi chahat hai kuch, hai mere bhi armaan
maine bhi apni duniya hai rangon se sajayi

huyi purani baatein ab yeh ladki ghr kii rani
maine jo arjit kii vidya uska na koi saani
karoongi b woh jo dil ko bhaaye, saath tu thoda de de
baandh piya na mujhko preet mein, sun meri bhi Vaani


Waah Salil Bhai, Kamaal Ka Likha Hai Yaar, Bohat Bohat Achche, Sachchi Ek olk Song ki Tarah hai,.

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«Reply #18 on: May 02, 2009, 04:07:42 PM »
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Wah Pooja Di Kya kamal ka likha hai. Superb like always....Usual Smile

Wah wah wah kya baat hai Azeem & salil.. Too good Guys...
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«Reply #19 on: May 03, 2009, 01:03:11 AM »
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All participants in this thread have written beautifully. Futher, I am also trying to write few words hope Yoindian will like it.

Bandhan mai raha pana muskil hota hai
Per bin bandhan jindagani chlana aur bhi muskil hota hai

Eis duiya mai aae ho to jee bhar jeo, aey mare Doost
Per apno ki eis nanhi si duniya ka, kuch khayal to rakhoo

Aur Rakho khayal sabhi ka, aey mare humsafar
Per jindagani Kay ein imtihaano ko, bandhan na samjho..

Bandhan mai raha pana muskil hota hai
Per bin bandhan jindagani chlana aur bhi muskil hota hai..

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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2009, 05:23:49 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Roy ji... bahoot khoob... baat to apne bahoot sahi kahi....


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«Reply #21 on: May 06, 2009, 02:38:01 AM »
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Wah wah sab ne bahut accha likha hai... Thumbs UP

Prashant Roy ji...

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Bandhan mai raha pana muskil hota hai
Per bin bandhan jindagani chlana aur bhi muskil hota hai..

Kya khoob kaha.....Thumbs UP
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