........bare kamaal ki!

by msanjusethi on April 20, 2013, 07:52:51 PM
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Bare k'maal ki hoti  
            ...kshudha mitaati Roti
mehnat karwaati    
          ...PathaR turwaati  
 Jhoot bulwaati,
        ... kattal karwaati Roti!
tor tor kar tukre
           ...Apne paas bulaati Roti
makhan se saag se dahi se daal se
                        ... dosti karwaati Roti
Bare kamaal ki hoti urza de jaati Roti
Bandar ka Billi se
         ....jhagra karwaati Roti!
Naan bread puri tandoori
          tarah -2 ke Roop Sjakar Samne Aati Roti!
Cheekh Cheetkaar Swapan ka Sansaar
Akaal mei Baarh mei maanush ko
               Apna grass banati Roti
Bare kmaal ki hoti  kshudha mitati Roti.
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2013, 08:02:43 PM »
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khoob,............
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2013, 08:08:51 PM »
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SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2013, 09:15:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2013, 09:30:04 PM »
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nice.
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2013, 02:25:53 AM »
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SHUKRIYA APKA
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2013, 02:48:17 AM »
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very  nice ,  interesting  poem  hai .....
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THANK U TUHINA
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Nice......
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2013, 03:57:35 PM »
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