BaRh jaaoN manziloN ko.............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on October 01, 2010, 04:42:20 PM
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BaRh jaaoN manziloN ko mann me lagan to de do
ud jaaoN baadloN me aisee pavan to de do

raahat kee baarisheN to milnee naheeN haiN mujhko
sahra me jal marooN mai aisee tapan to de do

hai khuli baaheN naye aasmaaN kee mere liye
jazba e dil me mere josh e agan to de do

douRtee bhaagatee is raah e hawaadis me Khuda!
thak gayee hooN mai mere paaoN me thakan to de do

shor aaloodah hai hangaamoN se hai labrez jahaaN
mujhko kuch aur naheeN bas thoda aman to de do

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 06:18:13 PM »
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Mamta jee Aadaab!

Aap aik aala shohara hai.... So aapke kalaam padhne meiN dilchaspi se padhte hai.....

Aapki yeH gazal bhi behad khoob rahi....
Chaliye aapki Gazal par aate hai..... Usual Smile         


Quote from: mamta bajpai on October 01, 2010, 04:42:20 PM
BaRh jaaoN manziloN ko mann me lagan to de do
ud jaaoN baadloN me aisee pavan to de do

Pahele misra kuch ajeeb sa sound kar raha hai... Par baar baar padhne ke bad misra zaheN meiN baitha... So aap bhi gaur kijiyeNga.... Par matla achcah hai Daad Usual Smile         


raahat kee baarisheN to milnee naheeN haiN mujhko
sahra me jal marooN mai aisee tapan to de do

Behad dilfareb khayaal pesh kiya hai.... Daad Usual Smile         


hai khuli baaheN naye aasmaaN kee mere liye
jazba e dil me mere josh e agan to de do

Achcha sher hai daad.... Usual Smile         


douRtee bhaagatee is raah e hawaadis me Khuda!
thak gayee hooN mai mere paaoN me thakan to de do

Kia baat hai..... bahut umdaa jee Daad Usual Smile         


shor aaloodah hai hangaamoN se hai labrez jahaaN
mujhko kuch aur naheeN bas thoda aman to de do

Masha Allah Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai Mamta jee ...... Daad           


Mamta Bajpai

Aik achchi umda gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye..... Khush o aabaad rahiye.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 08:49:55 PM »
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Mamta ji bhut bht kamal likha aapne

Bhut khoob....
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2010, 05:25:34 PM »
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Shukriya Neel jee!
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2010, 05:33:26 PM »
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Parvez jee! ye aap ka baddappan hai jo hum jaise likhne waloN ko bardaasht hi naheeN karte balkeh unka housla bhee baRhaate haiN.yaqeen janiye jaisaa aap ne kahaa hum waise hargiz naheeN....aap is par bhee humare kalaam me dilchaspi lete haiN hume achcha lagta hai...aap ki tahreer me humara kalaam aaine se roo b roo hotaa hai...jo kuch bhee seekhaa aap jaise ahabab kee sohbat or housla afzai ka hee asar hai.....aap ki zarranawazi ka behad shukriya.....
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 05:53:41 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on October 01, 2010, 04:42:20 PM
BaRh jaaoN manziloN ko mann me lagan to de do
ud jaaoN baadloN me aisee pavan to de do

raahat kee baarisheN to milnee naheeN haiN mujhko
sahra me jal marooN mai aisee tapan to de do

hai khuli baaheN naye aasmaaN kee mere liye
jazba e dil me mere josh e agan to de do

douRtee bhaagatee is raah e hawaadis me Khuda!
thak gayee hooN mai mere paaoN me thakan to de do

shor aaloodah hai hangaamoN se hai labrez jahaaN
mujhko kuch aur naheeN bas thoda aman to de do

Mamta Bajpai


bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob mindblowing mamta ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 05:57:09 AM »
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Shukriyaa or behad se bhee zyaadaa shukriyaa Adil jee! ek naakaarah kalaam aap kee nazr e inaayat se anmol ho gayaa....
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