Bas hawaa ke hee raham par hai............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on August 27, 2011, 01:29:24 PM
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Bas hawaa ke hee raham par hai rawaanee meree
ulajhee taaroN me patang see hai kahaanee meri

chhoot kar aaNkh se nikalaa to mai mit jaaooNgaa
chashm e nam hee to mahaj ek nishaanee meree

koun detaa hai bhalaa saath yahaaN saaNsoN tak
meree parchhyeeN hee nikalee hai deewaanee meree

kuchh nahee or khataa meree dikhee hai sabko
mujhko le doobee hai ik saaf-bayaanee meree

doobate waqt jo tinake kaa sahaaraa thaa teraa
teree'Mamta' se hai pahachaan puraanee meree

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2011, 02:01:53 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 27, 2011, 01:29:24 PM
Bas hawaa ke hee raham par hai rawaanee meree
ulajhee taaroN me patang see hai kahaanee meri

chhoot kar aaNkh se nikalaa to mai mit jaaooNgaa
chashm e nam hee to mahaj ek nishaanee meree

koun detaa hai bhalaa saath yahaaN saaNsoN tak
meree parchhyeeN hee nikalee hai deewaanee meree

kuchh nahee or khataa meree dikhee hai sabko
mujhko le doobee hai ik saaf-bayaanee meree

doobate waqt jo tinake kaa sahaaraa thaa teraa
teree'Mamta' se hai pahachaan puraanee meree

Mamta Bajpai

Justttt Excellent!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Mamtaji..har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

"Kuch Nahi Aur Khataa Meri Dikhi Hai Sabko
 Mujhko Le Doobee Hai Ek Saaf Bayaani Meri"

Waah Waah Waah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2011, 05:36:11 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Waah..waah..bahut khoob matle se maqte
tak, saro-paa jawab naheen.

Saath hi ye Badle badle tewar sach men
maza aa gaya...aaj ka kota poora ho
gaya...

Dili daad aur decillions badhaee hamari
or se
 
Aapka ye sher....

chhoot kar aaNkh se nikalaa to mai mit jaaooNgaa
chashm e nam hee to mahaj ek nishaanee meree

...padhkar Naqsh Sahab ka yeh matla yaad aa gaya

"अपनी भीगी हुई पलकों पे सजा लो मुझको
 रिश्ताए-दर्द समझकर ही निभा लो मुझको"

Ek aur sher isee ghazal ka...jo
pahli baar khud Naqsh Sahab se
roobroo suna tha aur yaad ho gaya
aap bhi bhool na paayenge...

"छाँओं भी दूँगा, दवाओं के भी काम आऊँगा
 नीम का पौदा हूँ, आँगन में लगा लो मुझको"

Ek baar phir se dheron daad aur badhiyaan.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


                     
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2011, 02:00:25 AM »
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Behad shukriyaa Khwaish jee! aap ke saraahanaa se kaavya lekhan me gahree santushti kee anubhooti hoti hai.....
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2011, 02:08:13 AM »
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Shukriyaa Satish jee!
 aap kee daad ke liye dil se mashkoor o mamnoon hooN......aap kee khushnaseebee se mujhe jalan see ho rahee hai.......
umdah shiroN se mulaaqaat hee nahee unse roo b roo ho unkaa kalaam bhee sunanaa...kyaa baat hai!!!!!
aap shayad Naqsh Layalpuri jee kee hee baat kar rahe haiN...
aise behatareen sher humaare saath share karne ke liye bhee bahut bahut shukriyaa ...
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2011, 06:28:48 AM »
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bht bht khoob mamta di...
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2011, 07:18:31 AM »
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shukriya Priya!
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2011, 07:20:16 AM »
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bohut khoob mamta ji... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2011, 07:27:22 AM »
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Shukriyaa Tamanna jee!
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2011, 04:44:18 PM »
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Mamta jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah kia khoob aur umdaa gazal se bazm ko
nawaaza hai aapne.... Usual Smile

Behad khub khayaal aur khubsurat bayaani rahi Usual Smile
Sabhi ashaar laa jawaab rahe .. waah dili daad
O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye Usual Smile

          


Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 27, 2011, 01:29:24 PM
Bas hawaa ke hee raham par hai rawaanee meree
ulajhee taaroN me patang see hai kahaanee meri

Waah kia gazab ka matla kaha hai Mamta jee..
Behad khoob shayari ki hai daad daad daad Usual Smile          

chhoot kar aaNkh se nikalaa to mai mit jaaooNgaa
chashm e nam hee to mahaj ek nishaanee meree

Masha Allah kia kahne Aapke zahin soNch O
khayaal ke... laa jawaab aik behad khubsurat sher kaha hai
aapne... HazaaroN daad hazir hai is sher par daad daad daad Usual Smile          

koun detaa hai bhalaa saath yahaaN saaNsoN tak
meree parchhyeeN hee nikalee hai deewaanee meree

Kia kahne janab Waah waah bahut khoob..
behad khoob khayaal kaha hai daad Usual Smile          

kuchh nahee or khataa meree dikhee hai sabko
mujhko le doobee hai ik saaf-bayaanee meree

Waah waah waah Kia baat hai Mamtaa jee
Waah kia kahne behad gazab aur behad umdaa sher kaha
hai aapne waah... Daad daad daad Usual Smile          

doobate waqt jo tinake kaa sahaaraa thaa teraa
teree'Mamta' se hai pahachaan puraanee meree

Kia kahne Mamtaa jee bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          

Mamta Bajpai

Behad khoob aur umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne...
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe .. tah e dil se daad O
mubarakbaad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Kikhate rahiye.. ate rahiye... Usual Smile
Khush O aabaad rahiye.. Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2011, 04:15:05 PM »
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Behad shukriyaa Parwaaz jee! der se peply ke liye sharmindah hoon mai.......dil kol kar aap ne jab bhee kalaam ko saraahaa hai yaqeen jaaniye khoyaa confidence waapas aa gayaa. thanks a lot!
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