~*~ Bas mera naam ajaega ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on March 15, 2011, 10:29:26 AM
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Jab ayegi baat wafa nibhane walon ki ae Zalim,
Tere labon par bas mera hi naam ajaega..

Main tujhe badua nahin deta mager kehta hoon,
Mujsa chahne wala tu kabhi nahin paega..

Tujhe yeh sunkar shayad khushi na ho ae dost,
Tere diye sare sitam ‘Khamosh’ khushi se seh jaega..

Dil main mere ab tak tere liye pyaar hai mager,
Waqt kay saath saath yeh bhi ankhon se beh jaega..

Maine sirf tere dil main basna chaha, jism main nahin,
Mager shayad koi ho jo sirf tera jism hi leh jaega..

Bahaut mushkil se milte hai toot kar chahne wale yahan,
Jo tanha hai hazaron main, wohi iss line ko samaj paega..

Aj toh log parr kar mujhe khoob wah wahi karte rehte hai,
Kuch arson baad ‘Khamosh’ bas ek naam banke reh jaega..

Jab baat hogi sachi mohobat karne wale wafa-daron ki,
Tere labon par ek hi naam ajaega.. ‘Khamosh’..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2011, 10:40:45 AM »
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kya baat hai rahmji.... bahut badiya kaha hai aapne.....

par yakin kijie khamosh ka naam  hamesha rahega....aur aapki wah wahi bhi hamesha rahegi....

aap likhte hi  itna badiya hain....

 Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2011, 11:46:42 AM »
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very nice rahim....
Bht bht khoob.....
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2011, 11:52:18 AM »
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kya kahu rhim ji.........

esa feel hua jese sidhe dil se nikal kar kagaj per aa gayi ........apne jo bhi lkiha he uska har lafz dil se likha he...

Maine sirf tere dil main basna chaha, jism main nahin,
Mager shayad koi ho jo sirf tera jism hi leh jaega..

bahot khoob rahim ji......lovely feelings with a moral of true love........
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2011, 01:29:40 PM »
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good poem Rahim-bhai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause

Bas bahut dair tak tera ye kalaam dil par chhaa jaayega
Jab bhee jikra hoga wafaadaron ka tera naam yaad aayega
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2011, 01:33:10 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 15, 2011, 10:29:26 AM
Jab ayegi baat wafa nibhane walon ki ae Zalim,
Tere labon par bas mera hi naam ajaega..

Main tujhe badua nahin deta mager kehta hoon,
Mujsa chahne wala tu kabhi nahin paega..

Tujhe yeh sunkar shayad khushi na ho ae dost,
Tere diye sare sitam ‘Khamosh’ khushi se seh jaega..

Dil main mere ab tak tere liye pyaar hai mager,
Waqt kay saath saath yeh bhi ankhon se beh jaega..

Maine sirf tere dil main basna chaha, jism main nahin,
Mager shayad koi ho jo sirf tera jism hi leh jaega..

Bahaut mushkil se milte hai toot kar chahne wale yahan,
Jo tanha hai hazaron main, wohi iss line ko samaj paega..

Aj toh log parr kar mujhe khoob wah wahi karte rehte hai,
Kuch arson baad ‘Khamosh’ bas ek naam banke reh jaega..

Jab baat hogi sachi mohobat karne wale wafa-daron ki,
Tere labon par ek hi naam ajaega.. ‘Khamosh’..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~


Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!Khoobsurat Peshaksh
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2011, 02:27:32 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on March 15, 2011, 10:29:26 AM
Jab ayegi baat wafa nibhane walon ki ae Zalim,
Tere labon par bas mera hi naam ajaega..

Main tujhe badua nahin deta mager kehta hoon,
Mujsa chahne wala tu kabhi nahin paega..

Tujhe yeh sunkar shayad khushi na ho ae dost,
Tere diye sare sitam ‘Khamosh’ khushi se seh jaega..

Dil main mere ab tak tere liye pyaar hai mager,
Waqt kay saath saath yeh bhi ankhon se beh jaega..

Maine sirf tere dil main basna chaha, jism main nahin,
Mager shayad koi ho jo sirf tera jism hi leh jaega..

Bahaut mushkil se milte hai toot kar chahne wale yahan,
Jo tanha hai hazaron main, wohi iss line ko samaj paega..

Aj toh log parr kar mujhe khoob wah wahi karte rehte hai,
Kuch arson baad ‘Khamosh’ bas ek naam banke reh jaega..

Jab baat hogi sachi mohobat karne wale wafa-daron ki,
Tere labon par ek hi naam ajaega.. ‘Khamosh’..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Rahim Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye ... umdaa peshkash rahi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2011, 08:44:38 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on March 15, 2011, 10:40:45 AM
kya baat hai rahmji.... bahut badiya kaha hai aapne.....

par yakin kijie khamosh ka naam  hamesha rahega....aur aapki wah wahi bhi hamesha rahegi....

aap likhte hi  itna badiya hain....

 Applause Applause
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Manjum jee..
Yeh toh bas ap logon ka pyaar hai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2011, 08:47:14 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on March 15, 2011, 11:46:42 AM
very nice rahim....
Bht bht khoob.....
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Priya di..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: KOYAL46 on March 15, 2011, 01:29:40 PM
good poem Rahim-bhai.... Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause

Bas bahut dair tak tera ye kalaam dil par chhaa jaayega
Jab bhee jikra hoga wafaadaron ka tera naam yaad aayega
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Koyal di..
2 lines main acha kuch kehgayi ap..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: khwaish on March 15, 2011, 01:33:10 PM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Bhai Rahim!!!Khoobsurat Peshaksh
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Shihab on March 15, 2011, 05:54:42 PM
Bahut Khub Rahim Bhai...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Shihab bhai..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: March 16, 2011, 08:51:07 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on March 15, 2011, 02:27:32 PM
Rahim Ji !! aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye ... umdaa peshkash rahi ... dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
Teh teh dil se shukriya Naresh bhai..
Khush rahiye..!

Quote from: Matrix Guy on March 15, 2011, 11:52:18 AM

kya kahu rhim ji.........

esa feel hua jese sidhe dil se nikal kar kagaj per aa gayi ........apne jo bhi lkiha he uska har lafz dil se likha he...

Maine sirf tere dil main basna chaha, jism main nahin,
Mager shayad koi ho jo sirf tera jism hi leh jaega..

bahot khoob rahim ji......lovely feelings with a moral of true love........
Jee mere bhai bilkul dil se likha hai..
Dil ki baat dil tak ponchi, bahaut khushi hui..
'True love'..haan kiya toh hai mager paya nahin..
Khair, kahin parra tha kay sirf pane ka naam mohobat nahin
mager sach hai kay pana hi sabse badi doulat hai..
Apka teh teh dil se shukriya mere bhai..
Khush rahiye..!

Kay afsos na hota mujhe ager pehle thukra diya hota usne Rahim,
Dukh hai toh iss baat ka kay roshni karke andhera kargaya woh..!
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