BECAUSE I AM A GIRL?...........(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on September 26, 2013, 01:16:59 AM
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HELLO FRIENDS I HAVE WRITTEN THIS POEM ON BEHALF OF ALL THOSE GIRLS WHOSE LIVES ARE DIFFERENT FROM US.THEY ARE MADE OR FORCED TO LIVE AS PROSTITUES,OR SOLD OUT IN THIS WORLD.THESE ARE THE WORDS FROM HEART OF EVERY GIRL WHO ISNT YET A PART OF THIS WORLD OF OURS.

tearyeyed BECAUSE I AM A GIRL tearyeyed

O GOD!
Why in this world u send me?
Why this life u lend me?


I was told this world is nice,
I was told this will brighten my life.


But it was wrong O God!
Why those dreams you showed me lord?


I came here and grew up old,
Here my soul, my body was sold.


Sold was my dream, my faith in life,
I never was a daughter, never would b a wife.


I keep on thinking what my fault was
Where your court, where your laws are,
Where should I appeal, where is your wishing star?

No one to adopt me, no one to care,
Tell me with whom my pain I share.


I seem free, but my heart is chained,
GOD, if this is the  world you send me,

PLZ NEVER SEND ME AGAIN.

ALASSSssssssss…….
I plea from this world,
Don’t let my life in this dirt curl,
Just because of the reason that

I AM A GIRL…….
 tearyeyed



I WANT YOU ALL TO FEEL THE THINGS & NOT JUST READ.FOR ME YOUR UNDERSTANDING MATTERS MUCH MORE THAN APPRECIATION.
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«Reply #1 on: September 26, 2013, 01:49:59 AM »
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Pain of the girl beautifully expressed . Hats off !
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«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2013, 01:52:57 AM »
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Pain of the girl beautifully expressed . Hats off !
thank you sir.
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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2013, 02:46:19 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2013, 02:52:35 AM »
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Good Work.
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2013, 02:57:25 AM »
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I think god vo massage send nahi kerga kyoki god ne tumhai apne hisab se sabse badi cheez zindgi di hai aur tum apne hisab se sabse chhoti cheez maang rahi ho  want to your real wish jab mai karta hoo to kisi ke saath galat nahi karta
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2013, 09:00:40 AM »
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nice creation
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2013, 12:15:31 PM »
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thank u all for reading my poem
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2013, 01:38:49 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2013, 02:06:59 PM »
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wonderful, just superb  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2013, 03:02:42 PM »
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aankhein nam ho gayi ambika ji... hats off to you..
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2013, 07:01:08 PM »
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thank u sir
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2013, 07:01:56 PM »
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thank u everyone..
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2013, 07:08:47 PM »
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I think god vo massage send nahi kerga kyoki god ne tumhai apne hisab se sabse badi cheez zindgi di hai aur tum apne hisab se sabse chhoti cheez maang rahi ho  want to your real wish jab mai karta hoo to kisi ke saath galat nahi karta
sir it isnt ke  wish choti ho ya badi.jiske pass jo nhi hota uske liye vahi sabse badi wish hai.or in my life iv got everything.but kuch bacche aise b hai,jinke pass shayad kuch wish karne tk ka hak b nhi hota.asie jinke liye aazadi,bachpan in sab ke matlab bahut alag hote hai.we hv got a good life but hame ye life mili hai from our parents.but jinke baare me mein baat kr rhi hu unki life unhone khud nhi chuni.they are forced upon to live like that.
and thats really good ke aap kabhi kisi ke saath galat nhi karte.
my motive was to take a very little step towrds a very big cause.
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2013, 12:21:40 AM »
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Jo sawaal aapne uthaye hai..
sochne par mazboor karte hain.
sirf wah wah karke nikal jaana solution naheen.

Ham jo bhi chaahte hai..use vyavhaar men laana hoga.
apne paraye ki soch se oopar uthkar..

A girl worried for a girl is appreciable but everybody irrespective of gender should be equally worried over this issue.
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