Be-Daag....cara

by cara on August 31, 2012, 01:28:49 PM

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cara

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Yun sab ki mehfil jaata hun
unki mehfil nahi jaata hun

Bahut khafa hai woh mujhse
nazren nahi use mila pata hun

Hogayi hai kuch khata mujhse
hath jodhkar mafi chahata hun

Lag gaya hai daman main daag
har hall use mitana chahta hun

Shikayat ka mauka nahi diunga usey
ke me bhi "Be-Daag" jeena chahta hun..


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nirala

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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 01:36:30 PM »

good one


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BANSI DHAMEJA

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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 01:45:45 PM »

Achha likha hai . par kahina chahoonga arz ahi :

Be daag zindagi jeene ke liye Daag to mitane honge
Daag mitane ke liye himat to jutani hogi

Himat jutaa ke unse nazren milani hongi
Nazren milane ke liye unki mahfil men jana hoga

Aur Ja kar unko dil ka haal sunana hoga
Sunaye bagair galatphahmee door hongi nahin

Galatphahimee door huye begair daag dhulenge nahin
Himmat jutao mere dost aur pahunch jao mhphil men

Bayaan kardo apne dil ka haal
Aur phir dekho uska kamala
GOOD LUCK


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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2012, 02:06:27 PM »

bahut achhe..


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mkv

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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2012, 03:36:34 PM »

Good one.. Applause

acche ashaar kahen hai aapne.
keep writing


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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 05:05:20 PM »

bahut khoob Cara ji....!!!


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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 11:32:49 PM »

bahut achha


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suman59

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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2012, 07:25:43 AM »

Quote from: cara on August 31, 2012, 01:28:49 PM

bahut badiya.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne cara sb. last four lines very nice.

humko hamari ishq ne kya-kya bana diya
Banakar bikari tauba aisa dikha diya


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cara

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Re: Be-Daag....cara

«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2012, 06:45:12 AM »

Nirala ji
Bansi dhameja ji...... apne bilkul sahi kaha hai...
Mohammad touhid ji
Mkv ji
HRIDAY JI
Nandbahu ji
Suman59 ji
Sksaini4 ji

mera likha padne aur pasand karne keliye bahut bahut shukriyan....