Beetee baatoN kaa gilaa koun kare........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on May 26, 2011, 06:06:08 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2166 times)
mamta bajpai
Guest
Reply with quote
Rang chehare se mohabbat kaa chhuraaooN kaise
ho hee jaataa hai bayaaN raaz chhupaaooN kaise

muskaraahat hai jo aaNkhoN me wo dekhee sabne
zakhm andar ke kisee ko bhee dikhaaooN kaise

ye alag baat hai tum saath naheeN ho mere
dil me chhubhtee hui yaadoN ko mitaaooN kaise

dard se zard hai cheharaa, ye paneelee aaNkheN
mai maseehaa se hee ye marz chhupaaooN kaise

beetee baatoN kaa gilaa koun kare jaane do
par mai ummeed e wafaa tujhse lagaaooN kaise

Mamta Bajpai
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
na gilaa kare !! by sammu1984 in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
na shikaayate.n na gilaa kare by DJ Goher in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Bandagee dar par kare koi............Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
AaNkheN............................Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
BaatoN baatoN me ...............Mamta Bajpai by mamta bajpai in Miscellaneous Shayri
Sajid_Ghayel
Guest
«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2011, 08:53:08 PM »
Reply with quote
Bohat khoob Mamta Jee.
Logged
MANOJ6568
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 31
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
42 days, 19 hours and 59 minutes.

Astrologer & Shayer

Posts: 12017
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile
«Reply #2 on: May 27, 2011, 04:39:33 AM »
Reply with quote
wah kya baat hai
likhna chahata hu kalaam mei bhi uske jaise
dard uske dil jaisa apne dil mei layu kaise
Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 26, 2011, 06:06:08 PM
Rang chehare se mohabbat kaa chhuraaooN kaise
ho hee jaataa hai bayaaN raaz chhupaaooN kaise

muskaraahat hai jo aaNkhoN me wo dekhee sabne
zakhm andar ke kisee ko bhee dikhaaooN kaise

ye alag baat hai tum saath naheeN ho mere
dil me chhubhtee hui yaadoN ko mitaaooN kaise

dard se zard hai cheharaa, ye paneelee aaNkheN
mai maseehaa se hee ye marz chhupaaooN kaise

beetee baatoN kaa gilaa koun kare jaane do
par mai ummeed e wafaa tujhse lagaaooN kaise

Mamta Bajpai
Logged
manjum
Guest
«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2011, 04:54:25 AM »
Reply with quote
wah wah mamtaji...... bahut khub....

aapki ghazal ko tarnnum ke sath hi pada hamne... bahut khub....
 Applause Applause Applause
Logged
md masood
Guest
«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2011, 05:16:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 27, 2011, 04:39:33 AM
wah kya baat hai
likhna chahata hu kalaam mei bhi uske jaise
dard uske dil jaisa apne dil mei layu kaise
Logged
Satish Shukla
Khususi Shayar
*****

Rau: 51
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
25 days, 6 hours and 16 minutes.

Posts: 1862
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2011, 05:20:48 AM »
Reply with quote

Mamta Ji,

Waah..Waah..bahut koobsoorat andaz-e-bayaN hai
achchhe fikra(soch) hai..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
  
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2011, 05:31:35 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 6 hours and 11 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2011, 08:00:59 AM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Saadgi Aur khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se,

 Iss Ghazal Ke Har A'shaar Aapne sajaaya Hai

bahut bahut Khoob Mamtaji
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2011, 08:02:43 AM »
Reply with quote
Gazal ko paRhane or pasand farmaane kaa tah e dil se shukriyaa Sajid saaheb!
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2011, 08:06:05 AM »
Reply with quote
Hameshaa kee tarah housalaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa Shihaab jee!
Logged
nirala
Guest
«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2011, 09:22:56 AM »
Reply with quote
hmm……
mamta ji…
achchi peshkas hai apki…
aap jaise kuch shayaro se mai wo expect karta hu jinhe parhkar dil ki gahraiyo se waah nikle…

be happy
Logged
Niha Khan
Guest
«Reply #11 on: May 27, 2011, 05:45:13 PM »
Reply with quote
Bohat Khoob Mamta Ji
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2011, 04:45:46 AM »
Reply with quote
Shukriyaa Manoj! achchha likhaa hai....par mujhe jawaab soojh nahee rahaa ..tumhaare andaaz me...Eshwar tumhe kisee bhee dard se door rakhe ..dheroN khushiyaa mile ...yahee duaa hai humaaree...
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #13 on: May 28, 2011, 04:48:35 AM »
Reply with quote
wow......Manju humne bhee ise tarannum kee saath hee likhaa thaa........
Logged
mamta bajpai
Guest
«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2011, 04:49:25 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut bahut shukriyaa Md Masood jee!
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Miscellaneous Shayri > Topic: Beetee baatoN kaa gilaa koun kare........Mamta Bajpai
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 08, 2024, 10:12:00 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.127 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8505 Real Poets and poetry admirer