Behakane ki baat thi..................

by SURESH SANGWAN on March 05, 2014, 01:22:47 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 05, 2014, 09:35:23 PM »
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Bahut khub.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: March 06, 2014, 12:57:10 AM »
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बहकने की बात थी कुछ संभलने का इशारा था
ज़रा खुल के बतलाओ क्या मतलब तुम्हारा था

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

मानिंद सूखे पत्ते के हम साथ हवा के हो लिये
लगा उन लम्हों में ज़िंदगी ने हमें  पुकारा  था
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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रास्ता  खुदा  जाने  कब  बदल लिया  उसने
हम बैठे थे जहाँ वो तो नदिया का  किनारा था
 
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
हँसने की बातें तो  दूर की बातें हैं ए 'सरु'
मर्ज़ी से रोना भी कहाँ ज़माने को गवारा था
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«Reply #17 on: March 06, 2014, 02:04:10 AM »
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waaaaah waaaaah bahut khub
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«Reply #18 on: March 06, 2014, 02:55:21 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: March 06, 2014, 11:10:40 PM »
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thanks a lot sir
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waah waah kyaa baaat dheron daad
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«Reply #20 on: March 06, 2014, 11:11:15 PM »
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thankewww sooooo much usha ji


बहकने की बात थी कुछ संभलने का इशारा था
ज़रा खुल के बतलाओ क्या मतलब तुम्हारा था

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

मानिंद सूखे पत्ते के हम साथ हवा के हो लिये
लगा उन लम्हों में ज़िंदगी ने हमें  पुकारा  था
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

रास्ता  खुदा  जाने  कब  बदल लिया  उसने
हम बैठे थे जहाँ वो तो नदिया का  किनारा था
 
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
हँसने की बातें तो  दूर की बातें हैं ए 'सरु'
मर्ज़ी से रोना भी कहाँ ज़माने को गवारा था
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley





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«Reply #21 on: March 06, 2014, 11:32:57 PM »
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thanks mkv ji
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नज़रें तो थी मगर कहाँ उठाने की इजाज़त थी
कभी सोचा ही नहीं हमने क्या कुछ हमारा था

Bahut badhiya Saru jee
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«Reply #22 on: March 06, 2014, 11:33:47 PM »
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thanks a lot Rajan ji
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waaaaah waaaaah bahut khub
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«Reply #23 on: March 06, 2014, 11:35:22 PM »
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thanks ekta ji
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Bahut khub.  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: March 06, 2014, 11:36:30 PM »
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thanks a lot shirin ji.
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Wah Wah! Behad Khub!!! Bohat Aacha Likha Hai Aap Ne!

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«Reply #25 on: March 06, 2014, 11:37:23 PM »
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thankew soooooooooooooo much md Tauhid ji
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waaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah saru ji..

har ek she'r laajawaab hai... dhero daaad daaaaad... Usual Smile Usual Smile

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«Reply #26 on: March 06, 2014, 11:39:00 PM »
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thankeww sooooooooooooo much aqsh ji
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Ufffffffff saru ji aapka andaz e bayan sabse alag sabse nirala hai... mujhe aapki poetries yaqeen maaniye bahut pasand hai... bahut achcha likhti hai aap... aur yeh kalaam bhi bahut hi umda hai... ek rau ke saath hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega..
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«Reply #27 on: March 08, 2014, 01:44:02 PM »
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thanks a lot Ravi ji
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क्या बात है,,,,,,,,,,,,बहुत उम्दा,सुरेश जी.!!
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«Reply #28 on: March 08, 2014, 01:45:41 PM »
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thanks a lott rajan ji..
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waaaaah waaaaah bahut khub
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«Reply #29 on: March 08, 2014, 03:04:49 PM »
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thanks shirin ji.
Wah Wah! Behad Khub!!! Bohat Aacha Likha Hai Aap Ne!

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