Behane Hote Sabse Pyaare Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on May 20, 2010, 01:56:49 PM
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Zindagi mein Kuch Rishte Humein Banne-Banaye Milte Hai Aur Kuch Rishte Hum Khud Banate Hai..Maa-Baap, Bhai-Behan,Yeh Rishte Humein Khud Hi Naseeb Hote Hai..Aaj Kuch Apni Didi Ke Liye Likh raha Hoon..Jo Kal Hi  Vaapas Apne Sasural Gaye Hai..Humesha Se Duniya Ke Iss Reet par Mujhe Shikayat rahi hai Ke Betiyon Ko Aakhir Kyon Vida Kiya Jaata Hai..Umeed Karta Hoon Jin Jazbaaton Mein Main Yeh Likh raha Hoon,Unn Jazbaaton Ko Aap Sab Bhi Mehsoos Kar sake..Shukriya..



Din Ladakpan Ke Has Kar Saath Guzaare Hai
Beete Hue Lamhe Lagte Ab Humein Jaise Roshan Sitaare Hai

Bahut Kuch Paaya, Bahut Kuch Khoya!!!
Par Aapko Khokar Mehsoos Hota hai,
Jaise Zindagi ki Sabse Anmol Cheez Hum Haare Hai

Aapki unn Baaton ko kabhi Bhoola Nahi Hoon Main
Jo Pal Saath Beetaye hai,woh pal Ab sirf Humare Hai...

Naa jaane Kyon Yeh Vidaai Ki reet Chali Aayi hai!!!
Lehrein to Aakar chale jaati hai Reh jaate piche sirf Kinaare Hai

Ek Duje ko khoob Hasaya, Ek Duje ko khoob Rulaya
Aaj sochta hoon,Beetein lamho ki yaadein Hi Jeene ke sahaare Hai

Didi!!!! yeh Dua Hai Dil se ke Aapka Aangan Humesha Khusboyon Se Mehakta Rahe!!
"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Yeh Dil se Ke "Behane Hote Sabse Pyaare Hai"

Din Ladakpan ke Has kar Saath Guzare Hai!!!!

               ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: May 20, 2010, 02:28:26 PM »
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khwaishji bahut pasand aai hai aapki ye nayaab nazm. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sachh hai behane hoti hi bahut pyaari hain .aap jaise bhai bhi to hone chhahiye fir aisi behano ke liye.
meri koi behan nahin hai,zindagi adhuri hi lagati hai ek behan ke bina.
u r very lucky to have a sis.
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2010, 03:22:36 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2010, 02:28:26 PM
khwaishji bahut pasand aai hai aapki ye nayaab nazm. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
sachh hai behane hoti hi bahut pyaari hain .aap jaise bhai bhi to hone chhahiye fir aisi behano ke liye.
meri koi behan nahin hai,zindagi adhuri hi lagati hai ek behan ke bina.
u r very lucky to have a sis.

Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear For Giving Your Valuable Time To This Poetry... Usual Smile

Aur Suresh Ji,Main Bahut Hi Nalaayak Bhai Hoon!!! Apne Didi Ki tarah Kabhi Naa Ban Paya..

I M Indeed Very lucky To Have A Sis..Aur Meri didi Aapki Bhi Didi Hui..So U R LUCKY TOO.. icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2010, 03:27:20 PM »
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shukriya khwaishji mujhe bhi thoda adhikaar de diya.haan ek baat aap nalaayak nahin ho sakte kyonki jo kavitaen likhte hain wo soft hearted hote hain.aur soft hearted log girls ko bahut pasand hote hain.
me think u r the best bro.
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Thankyou Soooooooooooooooooooooooo Much Dear For Giving Your Valuable Time To This Poetry... Usual Smile

Aur Suresh Ji,Main Bahut Hi Nalaayak Bhai Hoon!!! Apne Didi Ki tarah Kabhi Naa Ban Paya..

I M Indeed Very lucky To Have A Sis..Aur Meri didi Aapki Bhi Didi Hui..So U R LUCKY TOO.. icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2010, 08:07:07 PM »
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Khwahish jee bahaut khoob hamesha ki tarha...Bahaut jazbaton bhari peshkash hai...Jahan tak sawal bidhayi ka hai, woh toh ek reet hai aur reeton ko badalna, humara sansar ijazat nahin deta...aj humare sansar main kayi cheezein aisi hai jo hume bhi pasand nahin mager badalna...na mumkin sa lagta hai...khair, betiyon ko toh vida hona hi hai ek dinn...yeh hi sachayi hai mere dost!
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2010, 08:34:54 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Khwaish ji,great creation.really touched. icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2010, 11:32:47 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji... sach me behene hoti hi itni pyaari hai har rishta unke aage feeka lagne lagta hai.. bahut sundarta se aapne apne ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2010, 10:36:56 AM »
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Very nice marvellous creation khwaish ji...per sada se yahi reet chali aayi hai ki ghar ki betiyo ko ek naa ek din duje ghar jana hi padhta hai...waise kehte hai naa duriyo se rishte aur bhi majbut hote hai tou aur kisike chale jane se pyar kam nhi hota balki din-b-din badhta hi jata hai...bahut umda... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2010, 02:47:33 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 20, 2010, 03:27:20 PM
shukriya khwaishji mujhe bhi thoda adhikaar de diya.haan ek baat aap nalaayak nahin ho sakte kyonki jo kavitaen likhte hain wo soft hearted hote hain.aur soft hearted log girls ko bahut pasand hote hain.
me think u r the best bro.


Thankyou Once Again Suresh For So Kind Words

Thanks A Lottttttttttttt icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2010, 05:42:26 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 20, 2010, 08:34:54 PM
Bahut hi khoob Khwaish ji,great creation.really touched. icon_salut Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou Sooooooooooooooooo Much Dear Madhu..

Thanks A Lot For Always Reading And Appreciating!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2010, 11:10:05 PM »
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Wah Khwaish Ji Kamal.......

Bhut hi Khoob .......

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Quote from: -Rahim- on May 20, 2010, 08:07:07 PM
Khwahish jee bahaut khoob hamesha ki tarha...Bahaut jazbaton bhari peshkash hai...Jahan tak sawal bidhayi ka hai, woh toh ek reet hai aur reeton ko badalna, humara sansar ijazat nahin deta...aj humare sansar main kayi cheezein aisi hai jo hume bhi pasand nahin mager badalna...na mumkin sa lagta hai...khair, betiyon ko toh vida hona hi hai ek dinn...yeh hi sachayi hai mere dost!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Bhai Rahim!!!

Sach Kaha Bhai Aapne, reeton Ko badalna Sansaar Ijazat nahi deta..

Aur yeh Bhi Sach hai Ke Yeh Betiyon ko vida Karne Ki Reet Mere Hisaab se,Kisi Insaan Ke Liye,Yeh Sabse Mushkil Reet Hai..

Aapne Waqt Diya..Aapka Tehhhhhhhh Dil se Shukriya icon_flower
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Quote from: klaskar on May 20, 2010, 11:32:47 PM
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji... sach me behene hoti hi itni pyaari hai har rishta unke aage feeka lagne lagta hai.. bahut sundarta se aapne apne ehsaason ko bayaan kiya hai... bahut bahut khoob...!!!

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Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 21, 2010, 10:36:56 AM
Very nice marvellous creation khwaish ji...per sada se yahi reet chali aayi hai ki ghar ki betiyo ko ek naa ek din duje ghar jana hi padhta hai...waise kehte hai naa duriyo se rishte aur bhi majbut hote hai tou aur kisike chale jane se pyar kam nhi hota balki din-b-din badhta hi jata hai...bahut umda... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Hi Achi Aur Sachi Baat Kahi Hai Aapne Geetji,Dooriyon Mein Rishte Aur Bhi mazbut Ho Jaate Hai,Vakai Yeh Sach Hai..

Aur geetji,Main jaanta Hoon yeh Reet To Chali aayi hai naa hi kabhi yeh badlegi Par Dil Mein Kisi Apne se Door Jaane Ki kalish To rehti hi hai..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya jo aapne apna waqt diya.. icon_flower
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