BEKHUDI

by drpandey on April 14, 2010, 08:24:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 15, 2010, 08:16:19 AM »
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wah bahoth qoob Dr.saheb , apki ghazal nazar nawaz howi ,, hazaro dad ba awaz a buland qubool karen .. apki har taherir se mai mutasir howa hon ..allah apko hamesha khush rakhe aur ap jaise sukhan war logon ki maujodgi bazm me banaye rakhe ..

Bus eak ilteja .. 2nd ashar me hum kafiya nahi hai ,, matle me bhi apne azadi nahi li agar le lete to thik raheta ..qair apne sher ke wazan ko barqarar rakhne ke sabab kiya ho ,, baher kaf bahed qoob padke acha laga ..dad hazir
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Qadeer sahab adaab arz hai, aapne jo bhool sudhar karwaya uske liye aapka behad shukrguzar hun..aapne jis andaaz se hamari hausla afzai ki uska azehad shukriya.
Umeed karta hun aapki inayat hamesha bani rahegi..ek baar phir aapka tahe-dil se shukriya..
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«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2010, 08:20:42 AM »
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bahot khoob pandey ji
Inayat aur hausla afzai ka bahot bahot shukriya S.hashmi Ji..Umeed karta hun aapki inayat hamesha bani rahegi..
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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2010, 08:25:49 AM »
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Wah wah Pandey sb. bahot khoob kalaam hai aapka. Ek juda rang ki ye badi purkashish aur murassa takhleeq hai. Mubarakbaad.
Adaab arz hai Riyaz Sahab, ghazal pasand farmaney aur behtareen alfazon se himmat afzai ka behad Shukriya. Aapke nawazis ka azehad shukrguzar rahunga..
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2010, 08:29:28 AM »
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Aapka jawab padhkar bohat khushi hui Dr. saheb aur usse bhi zyda khushi aapka PM padkar hui, aapne jo badlaav kiye hai usne Ghazal me char chand laga diye hai yeh baat aapko PM karke nahi keh paya qke abhi meri 30 post nahi hui hai aur main aapko PM nahi kar sakta. Allah aapki kalam ko aur taqat bakshe.....Aameen
Nafseeyati_Mareez sahab mai hamesha achhi salah ka muntzir rahta hun..Allah aapki duwaon mein asar daley....Aameen!!
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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2010, 08:41:09 AM »
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Qadeer sahab adaab arz hai, aapne jo bhool sudhar karwaya uske liye aapka behad shukrguzar hun..aapne jis andaaz se hamari hausla afzai ki uska azehad shukriya.
Umeed karta hun aapki inayat hamesha bani rahegi..ek baar phir aapka tahe-dil se shukriya..


walekum adab Dr.saheb..

apka jawab apki shaqsiyath aur faraq dili ko bayan kar raha hai ..bade din baad bhaichare ka aisa jazba yo pe dekhne ko mil raha hai .. allah isse qaiyam rakhe ....khush rahe , muskurate rahen hamesha ..

khadim

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«Reply #20 on: April 15, 2010, 09:29:58 AM »
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walekum adab Dr.saheb..

apka jawab apki shaqsiyath aur faraq dili ko bayan kar raha hai ..bade din baad bhaichare ka aisa jazba yo pe dekhne ko mil raha hai .. allah isse qaiyam rakhe ....khush rahe , muskurate rahen hamesha ..

khadim

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shukriya aapka Quadeer Sahab, main kuchh bhi nahin hun bas wahi Almighty (Allah/Ishwar/God) jo bhi karwata hai karta chala jata hun, ye aapki muhabbat hai jo aako aisa kahne per majboor kar rahi hai..yahi qaiyam rahe. Mujhe umeed hai aap aise hi inayat banaye rahenge. Allah aapki duwaon mein daley..Aameen!!
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«Reply #21 on: April 15, 2010, 06:31:26 PM »
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Itna Karam Kiya Hai'Adab' Ishq Ne Mere
Jugnu Ko Kar Diya Hai Sitara Yahan Wahan


Wah Wah Pandey Ji Kya Kehne
Bahut Hi Umda Janaab...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Adaab arz hai Shihab bhai, ghazal pasand farmaney aur behtareen andaz se himmat afzai ka behad Shukriya. Aapke nawazis ka azehad shukrguzar rahunga..
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«Reply #22 on: April 17, 2010, 06:47:58 AM »
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                    GHAZAL
Din bekhudi mein hamne guzara yahan wahan !
Lekar tumhara naam pukara yahan wahan !

Khoja daro-diwaar pe shaya tumhara naam,
Sabne kiya mazaaq hamara yahan wahan !

Tahreer ho gaya tha zamane mein diwana,
Sadqe varaq ka hamne utara yahan wahan !

Poochha jo dillagi se usne hamara haal,
Hamne zakham dikha diya sara yahan wahan !

Itna karam kiya hai 'Adab' ishq ne mere,
Jugnu ko kar diya hai sitara yahan wahan !


Dr HP Pandey


Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Dr Pandey Ji
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