Benaam rishta....Geet...

by brokenbyluv on January 18, 2011, 04:17:54 PM
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Benaam rishta hai hamara,
per dhadkane  tou jani pehchani hai,

chalti hai sanse sirrf terre naam se,
aaj jo zinda hu vo terri meherbani hai,

bhale faasle hamare darmiya badhne lage hai,
per merre labo per terre pyar ki nishani hai,

main chhuna chahti hu tumhe ek baar phir se,
terre liye pyasi merri sanso ki rawani hai,

jo merre sine mein palta hai terra ehsas,
merri jaan vo ehsas behad ruhani hai,

jis dor aur jazbaat se judte hai dil hamare,
wahi hamari zindgi hai aur wahi hamari kahani hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2011, 05:12:52 PM »
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geet....kuch rishte aise hi reh jate h...bht apne hote h ..ruuh se ruuh k par kabhi koi naam nahin paate h...
bht khubsurat aur dil ko gehre chhu jati post h ye.....
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2011, 05:14:32 PM »
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Sach kaha apne bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2011, 05:51:36 PM »
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brknluv ji--
ek aur chu lenewali dastaan.
behad khubsurat zazbaati peshkas.
ek baar mene padha tha Kasak ji ke post me aapka reply ke aapka aur Kasak ji ke alfaz aur ehsaas mach hote hai---
lekin mere hisaab se aap dodono ko padhna ek alag hi anubhaw hai par haan ehsaas same hi hote hai lekin andaaz aur alfaz mere hisab se bilikul alg.
khus rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2011, 06:22:26 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Geet Ji
Bahut Sunder Lafjo Mein Aapne Likha Hai Padhkar Accha Laga
Kasak Ji Ne Sahi Kaha Ki Kuch Risthe Aise Hi Rah Jate Hai
Hum Bhul To Nahi Pate Hai Par Un Rishto Ko Koi Naam Bhi Nahi De Pate Hai Yaad Unki Bahut Aati Hai Par Aansuoo Ke Siwah Humare Paas Kuch Nahi Hota Hai... Bahut Kub Geet Ji Uhi Likhte Rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2011, 07:09:21 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on January 18, 2011, 04:17:54 PM


Benaam rishta hai hamara,
per dhadkane  tou jani pehchani hai,

chalti hai sanse sirrf terre naam se,
aaj jo zinda hu vo terri meherbani hai,

bhale faasle hamare darmiya badhne lage hai,
per merre labo per terre pyar ki nishani hai,

main chhuna chahti hu tumhe ek baar phir se,
terre liye pyasi merri sanso ki rawani hai,

jo merre sine mein palta hai terra ehsas,
merri jaan vo ehsas behad ruhani hai,

jis dor aur jazbaat se judte hai dil hamare,
wahi hamari zindgi hai aur wahi hamari kahani hai.........



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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 04:20:50 AM »
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bahut khubsurat geetji...

badiaya hai bahut.. ekdam dil tak..
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 06:50:13 AM »
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bhut acha laga p[adh kar ki aaj b hamare bich rishton ki ahmiyat hai warna aaj ki duniya me koi kisi ki ahmiyat nahi rakhta

bhut acha likha hai geet ji aap ne

aap ki rachna dil ko chu gayi..............
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2011, 11:04:12 AM »
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ahaa dhadkane jani phchani hai..

kya bat kahi apne di..

dhers aari daad`
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2011, 03:03:49 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on January 18, 2011, 05:51:36 PM
brknluv ji--
ek aur chu lenewali dastaan.
behad khubsurat zazbaati peshkas.
ek baar mene padha tha Kasak ji ke post me aapka reply ke aapka aur Kasak ji ke alfaz aur ehsaas mach hote hai---
lekin mere hisaab se aap dodono ko padhna ek alag hi anubhaw hai par haan ehsaas same hi hote hai lekin andaaz aur alfaz mere hisab se bilikul alg.
khus rahiye
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thanx
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Bahut shukriya nirala ji apki baat sahi hai bhale hamare dard ki kahani milti hai per kasak ji ka apna ek alag aur umda andaaz hai..shukriya ji..
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2011, 03:05:00 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 18, 2011, 06:22:26 PM
Bahut Khubsurat Geet Ji
Bahut Sunder Lafjo Mein Aapne Likha Hai Padhkar Accha Laga
Kasak Ji Ne Sahi Kaha Ki Kuch Risthe Aise Hi Rah Jate Hai
Hum Bhul To Nahi Pate Hai Par Un Rishto Ko Koi Naam Bhi Nahi De Pate Hai Yaad Unki Bahut Aati Hai Par Aansuoo Ke Siwah Humare Paas Kuch Nahi Hota Hai... Bahut Kub Geet Ji Uhi Likhte Rahiye
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Sach kaha rishi ji kuch rishto k nasib mein sirrf ansu hi likhe hote hai...per kya kare zindgi ko jina hai aur khushi se jiye jayenge shukriya merri kavita ko pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2011, 03:08:33 PM »
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Quote from: Rahi2001 on January 19, 2011, 06:50:13 AM
bhut acha laga p[adh kar ki aaj b hamare bich rishton ki ahmiyat hai warna aaj ki duniya me koi kisi ki ahmiyat nahi rakhta

bhut acha likha hai geet ji aap ne

aap ki rachna dil ko chu gayi..............

Rishto ki ehmiyat wahi jante hai raahi ji jinka har rishta hamesha adhura hi raha ho aajkal logo ko rishte nibhane ki fursat hi kahan hai...shukriya merri kavita pasand karne k liye...
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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2011, 03:10:43 PM »
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Quote from: manjum on January 19, 2011, 04:20:50 AM
bahut khubsurat geetji...

badiaya hai bahut.. ekdam dil tak..
Quote from: Shihab on January 19, 2011, 10:47:00 AM
Wah Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Khuda Aapko Sahd o Aabad Rakhe...

Khush Rahiye...

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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on January 19, 2011, 11:04:12 AM
ahaa dhadkane jani phchani hai..

kya bat kahi apne di..

dhers aari daad`

Bahut bahut shukriya manju mann ji,shihab ji n abhi..
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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2011, 03:12:46 PM »
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geet ji..........its behtareen..............

aur koi shabd nahi mere paas iski tariif ke liye....

thx for sharing this
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«Reply #14 on: January 19, 2011, 03:16:55 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya utkarsh ji..
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