- Beti Ki Doli -

by Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:00:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 21, 2005, 06:51:13 PM »
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shukriya waheed, nidhi, ishu...and nice one nikki !!!!!!!!!!

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ur Welcome  Meena............. tongue3
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«Reply #16 on: February 24, 2011, 05:34:47 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Aur Lajawab Likha Hai Meena Ji
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«Reply #17 on: April 16, 2011, 01:35:23 AM »
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Quote from: Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:00:54 PM
hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
 :D
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«Reply #18 on: April 16, 2011, 01:55:43 AM »
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Quote from: Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:00:54 PM
hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
 :D
Quote from: Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:00:54 PM
hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
 :D
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«Reply #19 on: November 24, 2011, 07:44:54 PM »
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Wah Meena Ji aapne bahut hi sundar likha hai dil chhu gai hai ye baat aapki.
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tre
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«Reply #20 on: January 04, 2012, 07:18:31 PM »
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Quote from: Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:20:10 PM
thank u talat aur bohot hi acha nikki tumne!!!

vidai ki gari bih bohot anmol hoti hai,
kuch kushi ke to kuch gum me ansoon mile hote hai,
lak duayen hoti hai par kehta kuuch nahin,
yeh lafz ansoowon se bayna hote hai, hoont sile hote hai!
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«Reply #21 on: June 09, 2012, 10:45:32 AM »
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Quote from: nikki on July 29, 2005, 02:15:54 PM
always welcum sis...

jab beti ki shadi ho rahi thi...to...

woh sama hi kuch aur tha
woh jazbaaton ka daur tha

woh ghadi bhar ki khushiyan
woh pal do pal mein badalne wala sama

woh armaano se bhare dil
woh kissi se milne ki khushi
aur sabse bichadne ka gum
woh waqt kabhi na lautkar ayega
jaante hain sab

fir bhi na-jaane kyun
beti ki shadi ho jaye
woh apne ghar jaye
uski doli uthe aur baap ka farz poora ho jaye
yahi dua maangte hain sab
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«Reply #22 on: June 09, 2012, 10:46:35 AM »
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Quote from: Meena on July 29, 2005, 02:00:54 PM
hello dosto,
shadiyan kis ko achi nahin lagti...music hota hai, masti hoti hai...meri yeh poem ek shaks ki soch hai jo ke ek shadi me sirf beti ke father ko dekhta hai. uske khayal, uski soch kuch lafzo me likhne ki koshish ki maine:

Kitna bebas lag raha hai yeh baap kismat ke aage,
Jis phool ko itne pyar se pala usse de raha hai kisi aur ke haath me,

Kushi to bohot hai ke beti ja rahi hai apne ghar,
Par ansowon ki barsat to hone hi lagi soch ke judai ke jazbaat me,

Juka jo ser sirf Ishwar ke aage, aaj insaaon ke aage bhi juk gaya,
Ankh ke moti mang rahe te Upparwale se beti ki kushiyan khairat me,

Dekho, aaj door ja rahi hai woh jo hogi na kabhi uske dil se door,
Ashirwad ke kawaj se raksha karega ek baap apni beti ki apne khayalat me,

Lakon duaon se sajayi hai doli apni ladli ki usne aaj,
Aur babul ke sanskar kaanda de rahe hai usko saath me!

umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayi hogi!
 :D
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«Reply #23 on: February 02, 2013, 02:50:33 PM »
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hi to all
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«Reply #24 on: February 27, 2014, 09:57:23 PM »
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hume to rona aa gaya humari shadi he 17 april ko bahut accha likhte ho aap. 2 lines share kar rahe he hum"MAST PAVAN SE DHHOOMA KARTE PAPA KI PARIYO ME HUM AB NAZAR NA AAYENGE PEEHAR KI GALIYO ME HUM".
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