Beti Ki Kismet…....…Koyal

by KOYAL46 on February 03, 2011, 10:37:42 AM
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hello icon_flower icon_flower  icon_queen Beti Ki Kismet  icon_queen icon_flower icon_flower hello

Mein kheelee tumhare chaman mai
Kya isme Meri khata Bataa mujhe

Samaaj k reeti-reewaaj tumhare
Phir inkee hai kyu sajjaa mujhe

Lagti hoon bojh tou beshaq mita mujhe
Anchahee hu mein ehsaas na dila mujhe

Tumhaare he khoon ka paudha hu mein
Paraayee hoon jataa ke na sataao mujhe

Betiyon ko janamte he maarne waalon samjho tum
Mitt jaayega wajood tumhaara b fir dosh na dena mujhe
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«Reply #1 on: February 03, 2011, 11:38:21 AM »
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bahut badiya koyalji.... agar ham ese muddon par bhi likhe lagen to sach main samaaj main kuchh badlaw la sakenge....

khub likha hai...
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«Reply #2 on: February 03, 2011, 11:56:44 AM »
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Koyal Tum nay toe bohout KHOOB likhi hai..  icon_flower icon_flower
Aaj kal duniya may Beti k saath aeisa Chalaya ja raha hai jeise k woh un k Khoon hi nahi hai..  tearyeyed tearyeyed

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«Reply #3 on: February 03, 2011, 12:19:41 PM »
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sahi kaha tumne koyal....
good thought on this sbject....
very nice....
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2011, 01:42:00 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 03, 2011, 10:37:42 AM
hello icon_flower icon_flower  icon_queen Beti Ki Kismet  icon_queen icon_flower icon_flower hello

Mein kheelee tumhare chaman mai
Kya isme Meri khata Bataa mujhe

Samaaj k reeti-reewaaj tumhare
Phir inkee hai kyu sajjaa mujhe

Lagti hoon bojh tou beshaq mita mujhe
Anchahee hu mein ehsaas na dila mujhe

Tumhaare he khoon ka paudha hu mein
Paraayee hoon jataa ke na sataao mujhe

Betiyon ko janamte he maarne waalon samjho tum
Mitt jaayega wajood tumhaara b fir dosh na dena mujhe


Nice tought ... aaj ki aawaaz par ... Koyal Ji !

bahut accha likha hai aapne ... iski bahut zaroorat hai aaj ! mujhe yakeen hai ... aapki kavita duushiit maansiiktaa meN aandhii kaa kaam karegi ...... !!!!!!!!!!!

dil se daad !!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2011, 06:48:44 AM »
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achhi koshish..  bahu khoob..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2011, 08:21:53 AM »
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koyal ji ki aavaj hum tak sunayi di hume Usual Smile bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2011, 07:47:45 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: February 06, 2011, 01:53:27 AM »
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Ek  achha sandesh ....koyal......good poem......  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Quote from: KOYAL46 on February 03, 2011, 10:37:42 AM
hello icon_flower icon_flower  icon_queen Beti Ki Kismet  icon_queen icon_flower icon_flower hello

Mein kheelee tumhare chaman mai
Kya isme Meri khata Bataa mujhe

Samaaj k reeti-reewaaj tumhare
Phir inkee hai kyu sajjaa mujhe

Lagti hoon bojh tou beshaq mita mujhe
Anchahee hu mein ehsaas na dila mujhe

Tumhaare he khoon ka paudha hu mein
Paraayee hoon jataa ke na sataao mujhe

Betiyon ko janamte he maarne waalon samjho tum
Mitt jaayega wajood tumhaara b fir dosh na dena mujhe
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«Reply #9 on: February 06, 2011, 02:33:03 PM »
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Bahut Khub Koyal JI
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: February 06, 2011, 03:06:07 PM »
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Thanks a lot......Manjum ji.......pasand karne k liye


Quote from: manjum on February 03, 2011, 11:38:21 AM
bahut badiya koyalji.... agar ham ese muddon par bhi likhe lagen to sach main samaaj main kuchh badlaw la sakenge....

khub likha hai...
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«Reply #11 on: February 07, 2011, 04:27:00 PM »
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Sahi kaha aapne Dil-ki-baat ji.......pasand karne k liye aapka shukriyaa ji...... icon_flower


Quote from: Dil ki baat on February 03, 2011, 11:56:44 AM
Koyal Tum nay toe bohout KHOOB likhi hai..  icon_flower icon_flower
Aaj kal duniya may Beti k saath aeisa Chalaya ja raha hai jeise k woh un k Khoon hi nahi hai..  tearyeyed tearyeyed

 Applause Applause Reall ynice
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bahoot umda koyal ji...yoindia par jagrookta ki bayar ko aage badhate rahne ke liye..
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