Beti Meri ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on May 18, 2010, 10:07:50 AM
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Meri izzath hai meri jaa.n hai beti meri  !!
Meri khushiyun ka ashiya.n hai betimeri !!

Mauth abhi jeet na payegi duwa.un se !!
Ke abbu ki neghabaa.n hai beti meri !!

Aye muflisi ab tu apna ghar badal lena !!
Dekh mujh pe maherbaa.n hai beti meri !!

Khushiyan ho ke faaqe eak sa chahera !!
Har waqath ki qadardaa.n hai beti meri!!

Kaash ye Rifayaten Badal Sakte ‘Qadeer”!!
Khuch waqath ki sayebaa.n hai beti meri !!

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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2010, 10:14:33 AM »
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Awesome Man!!!!

I'm Touched..Thankyou For This Beautiful Poetry
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2010, 10:19:20 AM »
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"Kaash Yeh Rifayaten badal sakte "qadeer"
Kuch Waqt Ki Sayebaan Hai beti meri"

Waah Waah Waah....Qadeer bhai Lajawaab!!!!

Sirf Itna Keh Sakta Hoon..Dil Ki Gehrai Se Nikli Hui yeh Ghazal Dil Ko Chuu Gayi

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2010, 10:34:49 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Qadeer ji,bahut baddiya,excellent creation. icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2010, 12:43:51 PM »
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buhat he umda nazm.. achhi lagi hamen..
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2010, 02:12:36 PM »
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"Kaash Yeh Rifayaten badal sakte "qadeer"
Kuch Waqt Ki Sayebaan Hai beti meri"

Waah Waah Waah....Qadeer bhai Lajawaab!!!!

Sirf Itna Keh Sakta Hoon..Dil Ki Gehrai Se Nikli Hui yeh Ghazal Dil Ko Chuu Gayi

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai..

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bhai apki mahubbath aur inayath ka shukriya ,, dad ke liye mehad mashkoor o mumnoo hon .. allah apko khush rakhe ..


apka bhai

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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 02:25:52 PM »
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A.Qadeer bhai itni purkashish aur umda tehreer hai ke lafzaon ke dayere main tareef aur daad ko qaid karna mushkil hai.har ek shair se mohabat ki khoshbo jhalakti hai.khass kar yeh shair to buniyadd hai wah wah itna pasand aya ke yaad hogaya.

ae muflisi tu ab apna ghar badal lena..
dekh! mujh pe meharbaan hai beti meri...  bahot khoob janab
daad qubol karen .  
Meri izzath hai meri jaa.n hai beti meri  !!
Meri khushiyun ka ashiya.n hai betimeri !!

Mauth abhi jeet na payegi duwa.un se !!
Ke abbu ki neghabaa.n hai beti meri !!

Aye muflisi ab tu apna ghar badal lena !!
Dekh mujh pe maherbaa.n hai beti meri !!

Khushiyan ho ke faaqe eak sa chahera !!
Har waqath ki qadardaa.n hai beti meri!!

Kaash ye Rifayaten Badal Sakte ‘Qadeer”!!
Khuch waqath ki sayebaa.n hai beti meri !!

qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2010, 02:49:25 PM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Qadeer Bhai, Bohat Umda Peshkash Hai, Aapke Behtareen Kalaamo Mein Is Kalaam Ki Bhi Ab Shirkat Hogayi,.

This Is One Of The Touching Ghazal From Ur Collection, May Allah Bless U,.


Rehmat Rab Ne Beti Ke Zariye Barsaai Hai,.
Beti Ke Kadam Se Hi To Roshni Ghar Mein Aai Hai,.

Beti Ho To Ghar Abaad Lage,.
Beti Ke Bagair Har Ghar Mein Tanhaai Hai,.

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Rab-ul-Aalameen Sabko Neak Saliheen Beti Aur Bete Ataa Kare Aameen,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2010, 03:04:38 PM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Qadeer Bhai, Bohat Umda Peshkash Hai, Aapke Behtareen Kalaamo Mein Is Kalaam Ki Bhi Ab Shirkat Hogayi,.

This Is One Of The Touching Ghazal From Ur Collection, May Allah Bless U,.


Rehmat Rab Ne Beti Ke Zariye Barsaai Hai,.
Beti Ke Kadam Se Hi To Roshni Ghar Mein Aai Hai,.

Beti Ho To Ghar Abaad Lage,.
Beti Ke Bagair Har Ghar Mein Tanhaai Hai,.

-Azeem-

Rab-ul-Aalameen Sabko Neak Saliheen Beti Aur Bete Ataa Kare Aameen,.

Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 08:22:11 PM »
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MASHAALLAH EK KHOOBSOORAT KALAAM LIKHA HAI QADEER BHAI AAPNEY....REALLY BETI...ALLAH KI EK AZEEM NEMAT HAI...MERI BHI EK BETI HAI...AAPKEY JAZBAAT SAMAJH SAKTA HOON........... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2010, 08:43:41 PM »
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ey muflisi ab tu apna ghr badal laina
daikh mujh pe meherbaa.N hai beti meri

waah Qadeer bhai kya baat hai, subhaanAllah kya baat kahi hai maza aa gaya janaab pad kar, aapne bhut hi achay ehsaas ko lafo.n mai piroya hai dil ke bhut qareeb raha ye sher, mashallah se baaqi ke ashaar bhi bhut achay hain magr ye khaas kar bhut acha laga, likhte rahiye bhut acha likhte hain aap, daad hazir hai qubool karein



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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 08:49:34 AM »
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Awesome Man!!!!

I'm Touched..Thankyou For This Beautiful Poetry



thanks a lot for your kind words , may allah success you at every path of ur life ..thanks for the time you gave to read this ...


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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2010, 08:51:53 AM »
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buhat he umda nazm.. achhi lagi hamen..


ji sahab nazm ki pazirai ke liye mashkoor hon .. apne pasand ki qeemat osool ho gayi ,, waise khuch aur kahene ki koshish ki thi ,,shayad nazm bann gayi ho.. allah apko khush rakhe ..


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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2010, 08:55:36 AM »
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Subhan Allah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Qadeer Bhai, Bohat Umda Peshkash Hai, Aapke Behtareen Kalaamo Mein Is Kalaam Ki Bhi Ab Shirkat Hogayi,.

This Is One Of The Touching Ghazal From Ur Collection, May Allah Bless U,.


Rehmat Rab Ne Beti Ke Zariye Barsaai Hai,.
Beti Ke Kadam Se Hi To Roshni Ghar Mein Aai Hai,.

Beti Ho To Ghar Abaad Lage,.
Beti Ke Bagair Har Ghar Mein Tanhaai Hai,.

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Rab-ul-Aalameen Sabko Neak Saliheen Beti Aur Bete Ataa Kare Aameen,.


bhai azeem , sub ap ki mahubbath hai bhai mere jo is tarhan se nawazte ho ,, apki nazron ka kamal hai ,,apki inayath aur dad pe behad mashkoor o mumnoo hon, waise aaj kal kamm hi nazar aate ho kahan ho miyan ,, hazri diya karo jigar , aur sach pucho to apke ashar ache hain ... dad hazir hai qubool karen .. khush raho hamesha ..


apka bhai

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