be-zubaa.n............sheba

by Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:19:47 PM
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                       khaamosh-khamosh sa kaarwaa.n mila!
                       nazro.n se  bhi  be-zubaa.n  mila!!


                       ki  jo  chaahat  falak  ki main ne.
                       tukde-tukde  mein  aasmaa.n   mila!


                       meri   talkhi   mein   dooba   hua.
                       ek-ek    lafz    hairaa.n     mila!


                       shakl   shaitaan   ki   liye   hue.
                       bade   adab   se   insaa.n    mila!


                       dekh kar, benoori  chehre  pe mere.
                       chaand  bhi  aaj  paresha.n   mila!


                       kha kar thokar zamaane ki wo sheba!
                       mera pyaar mujh se badgumaa.n mila!!

                  
                      
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2013, 07:36:02 PM »
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khoobsoora.t khayalat oomdaa ghaza.l sheba ,.............bohat c daad,............
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2013, 08:50:12 PM »
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ki  jo  chaahat  falak  ki main ne.
tukde-tukde  mein  aasmaa.n   mila!

shakl   shaitaan   ki   liye   hue.
bade   adab   se   insaa.n    mila!


dekh kar, benoori  chehre  pe mere.
chaand  bhi  aaj  paresha.n   mila!

bohut khoob likha hai apne,,,ye 3 ashaar
lajawaab lage.
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 09:01:46 PM »
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jitni Bhi Taarif ki jaaye kam hai.lajawaab ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Sheba Ji..Bahut Bahut Khooooooob
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 09:15:01 PM »
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Bahu bahut pasand ayi apki ye peshkash sheba jee..dheron daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2013, 11:13:43 PM »
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Intehaayee khoobsurat ghazal kahi Sheba ji .... Ehsaas, maanee aur bayaan... sabhi bahaut pasand aaye .... dheron daad o mubaarakbaad apko
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2013, 11:26:36 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat ashaar kahe hain aap ne . khas taur se
2, 4 & 5 sher bahut achha laga . Sheba ji ,dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2013, 12:18:03 AM »
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bht bht khoob Sheba...
as usual dhanshu post
mubarakbaad
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2013, 12:23:52 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:19:47 PM
                      khaamosh-khamosh sa kaarwaa.n mila!
                       nazro.n se  bhi  be-zubaa.n  mila!!


                       ki  jo  chaahat  falak  ki main ne.
                       tukde-tukde  mein  aasmaa.n   mila!


                      meri   talkhi   mein   dooba   hua.
                       ek-ek    lafz    hairaa.n     mila!


                       shakl   shaitaan   ki   liye   hue.
                       bade   adab   se   insaa.n    mila!


                       dekh kar, benoori  chehre  pe mere.
                       chaand  bhi  aaj  paresha.n   mila!


                       kha kar thokar zamaane ki wo sheba!
                       mera pyaar mujh se badgumaa.n mila!!

                   
                       

nice,ma'am
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2013, 10:20:43 AM »
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behad umda gazal.......itne mazaahiya reply krne wala shakhs kitni khubsurti se itni sanjeeda gazal likh raha hai .....lajawab lajawab lajawab.....


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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2013, 12:35:33 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 09, 2013, 07:19:47 PM
                      khaamosh-khamosh sa kaarwaa.n mila!
                       nazro.n se  bhi  be-zubaa.n  mila!!


                       ki  jo  chaahat  falak  ki main ne.
                       tukde-tukde  mein  aasmaa.n   mila!


                      meri   talkhi   mein   dooba   hua.
                       ek-ek    lafz    hairaa.n     mila!


                       shakl   shaitaan   ki   liye   hue.
                       bade   adab   se   insaa.n    mila!


                       dekh kar, benoori  chehre  pe mere.
                       chaand  bhi  aaj  paresha.n   mila!


                       kha kar thokar zamaane ki wo sheba!
                       mera pyaar mujh se badgumaa.n mila!!

                   
                       


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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2013, 01:50:42 PM »
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  ki  jo  chaahat  falak  ki main ne.
  tukde-tukde  mein  aasmaa.n   mila!

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Wah,Wah,Wah Sheeba ji,
Bahut achhe khayalaat ke saath bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2013, 07:07:02 PM »
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meri   talkhi   mein   dooba   hua.
                       ek-ek    lafz    hairaa.n     mila!


waah waah waah sheba ji... kya khoob likha hai aapne.. dhero daad...
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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2013, 12:13:40 AM »
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bahut khoob sheba jee
2nd & 4th sher behatreen
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2013, 02:02:17 AM »
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waah!waah! kya baat hai!

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