-----/// Bhagwaan badal jaate hain ///----- Hriday

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manzilon  ke   paas  jaake  aksar, raaste  badal  jaate  hain
safar  mein  zindagi  ke  aksar  humsafar  badal  jaate hain

saahilon  ke  paas  jaa kar  aksar  doobti  hain  kashtiyaan
lehron  ko  kyaa  dosh  den jab manzar hi badal jaate hain

jab  tak  kareeb hain, tab tak apno ko  apne  maante hain
faaslon  ke  badh  jaane se, saare  apne  badal  jaate  hain

woh rishton  kaa bandhan, jo  kabhi  atoot  ho jaataa hai
kuch  waqt  ke baad kyun  woh  rishte hi badal jaate hain

har  woh cheez, jis  se mohabbat  ho  khud se bhi zyaadaa
waqt ke saath  har us  cheez  ke  maayne  badal jaate hain

jin khwaabon ko  aankhon mein sajaake, jaagte  hain hum
kyun  zindagi  ke saath  har  woh khwaab badal jaate hain

kyaa dosh den us insaan ko, jise  bhagwaan  ne banaayaa
insaan  kyaa cheez hai, khud  bhagwaan  badal  jaate hain


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«Reply #1 on: September 14, 2014, 07:34:59 PM »
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Title: -----/// Bhagwaan badal jaate hain ///----- Hriday
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manzilon  ke   paas  jaake  aksar, raaste  badal  jaate  hain
safar  mein  zindagi  ke  aksar  humsafar  badal  jaate hain

saahilon  ke  paas  jaa kar  aksar  doobti  hain  kashtiyaan
lehron  ko  kyaa  dosh  den jab manzar hi badal jaate hain

jab  tak  kareeb hain, tab tak apno ko  apne  maante hain
faaslon  ke  badh  jaane se, saare  apne  badal  jaate  hain

woh rishton  kaa bandhan, jo  kabhi  atoot  ho jaataa hai
kuch  waqt  ke baad kyun  woh  rishte hi badal jaate hain

har  woh cheez, jis  se mohabbat  ho  khud se bhi zyaadaa
waqt ke saath  har us  cheez  ke  maayne  badal jaate hain

jin khwaabon ko  aankhon mein sajaake, jaagte  hain hum
kyun  zindagi  ke saath  har  woh khwaab badal jaate hain

kyaa dosh den us insaan ko, jise  bhagwaan  ne banaayaa
insaan  kyaa cheez hai, khud  bhagwaan  badal  jaate hain


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बहुत खूब.....

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bahut khoob Hriday ji
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bahut khub hridayji.....

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bahut bahut shukriyaa aap sabhi ko jo aapne meri is koshish ko padhaa aur pasand kiyaaa....!!!

Title: -----/// Bhagwaan badal jaate hain ///----- Hriday
 Post by: ~Hriday~ on September 14, 2014, 11:28:04 AM





manzilon  ke   paas  jaake  aksar, raaste  badal  jaate  hain
safar  mein  zindagi  ke  aksar  humsafar  badal  jaate hain

saahilon  ke  paas  jaa kar  aksar  doobti  hain  kashtiyaan
lehron  ko  kyaa  dosh  den jab manzar hi badal jaate hain

jab  tak  kareeb hain, tab tak apno ko  apne  maante hain
faaslon  ke  badh  jaane se, saare  apne  badal  jaate  hain

woh rishton  kaa bandhan, jo  kabhi  atoot  ho jaataa hai
kuch  waqt  ke baad kyun  woh  rishte hi badal jaate hain

har  woh cheez, jis  se mohabbat  ho  khud se bhi zyaadaa
waqt ke saath  har us  cheez  ke  maayne  badal jaate hain

jin khwaabon ko  aankhon mein sajaake, jaagte  hain hum
kyun  zindagi  ke saath  har  woh khwaab badal jaate hain

kyaa dosh den us insaan ko, jise  bhagwaan  ne banaayaa
insaan  kyaa cheez hai, khud  bhagwaan  badal  jaate hain


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bahut khoob Hriday ji


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Wah Wah. Bahut Khoob.

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bahut khub hridayji.....

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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2014, 09:53:59 AM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab behad sahiN farmaaya aapne... waqt ke saath saath bahut kuch badal jaata hai..

Kafi khoob khayaal rahe aapki is kalaam ke... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2014, 10:08:55 AM »
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bahut umda likha hai hriday ji....hriday se nikale alfaaz likhe hai aapne....ek ek lafj umda....insaan toh badal jaate h....lekin bhgwaan badalte h....iss line k peeche rahe zazbaat mai smjh nai pa rahi....waqt mile toh smjhayiega zarur......daad kabul karein iss behtrin kalaam par
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«Reply #12 on: September 18, 2014, 04:59:57 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji.....!!!



Kapil Jee Aadaab...!


Bahut khoob janab behad sahiN farmaaya aapne... waqt ke saath saath bahut kuch badal jaata hai..

Kafi khoob khayaal rahe aapki is kalaam ke... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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bahut bahut shukriyaa Pooja ji, aakhri line mein maine bhagwaan ke baare mein bataayaa hai ki bhagwaan ki kripaa har kisi par ek si nahi rehti hameshaa, waqt ke saath achchaa buraa waqt aataa rehtaa hai, aur woh waqt ko laane waale bhagwaan hi to hote hain, hamaare saath jo kuch bhi hotaa hai woh hamaari kismat hai aur kismat banaane waalaa bhagwaan hi to hai, dusri tarha aise bhi dekh sakte hain kabhi kisi par shani bhaari hotaa hai to shani dev ki poojaa, kabhi achchaa pati yaa patni chaahiye hotaa hai to log shivji ki poojaa karte hain, isi tarhaa har badalte waqt ke liye log bhagwaan badalte rehte hain, bas isi soch ke saath maine woh likhaa hai ki bhagwaan badal jaate hain...




bahut umda likha hai hriday ji....hriday se nikale alfaaz likhe hai aapne....ek ek lafj umda....insaan toh badal jaate h....lekin bhgwaan badalte h....iss line k peeche rahe zazbaat mai smjh nai pa rahi....waqt mile toh smjhayiega zarur......daad kabul karein iss behtrin kalaam par
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Kapil jee Aadaab...


Bahut khoobsurat jawaab diya hai aapne ...
Aapke khoobsurat khayaal ko dheroN daad ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...

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