BHEED KO SAMJHANE WOH BECHARA GAYA...........

by khwaish on November 01, 2007, 05:47:24 PM
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PATHAR SE JAB USSE MAARA GAYA
DEKHNE MANZAR,SAARA GAYA..

WOH INSAAN BHI KUCH KEHNA CHAAHTA THA
PAR KISI NE USKI BAAT SUNI NAHI,
WOH INSAAN BAS LOGO MEIN DUTKAARA GAYA..

HOKE REH GAYA THA
WOH LAHOO MEIN TAR-BATAR,
BHEED KO SAMJHANE
JO WOH BECHARA GAYA..

JAB SE LAUTA HAI BAHUT
SEHMA-SEHMA SA REHTA HAI
KISI AUR KI BEGUNAHI KI SAFAI MEIN
KUCH KEH CHAAHTA  THA
PAR BEDARDI SE MAARA GAYA..

INSAAN  KI ZINDAGI BAHUT HI SASTI HO
GAYI AAJ KI DUNIYA MEIN,
PAR IMAANDARI KA NASHA RAKHTA THA
BHEED KO SAMJHANE FIR DOBARA GAYA..

KABHI MAZHAB,KABHI CASTE,KABHI JAAT,KABI PAAT
MASHROOF HAI INSAAN EK DUSRE KO MAAR MITNE MEIN
SAMJHANE WAALA TO JAISE SAAMNE SE AWAARA GAYA..

"KHWAISH" AB APNE SHEHAR KE BAASHINDE BHI,
AB LAGTE HAI AJNABI HUMEIN,
JAANE KIS BASTI MEIN WOH BANJARA GAYA..
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2007, 09:15:51 PM »
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This poem reflects lots of real cases that we read and see around us ! =D> =D> =D>

Very true expressions ! The end of the poem is very good.

Daad kabool kijiye bro !
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«Reply #2 on: November 04, 2007, 04:42:30 PM »
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Nice One Khwaish Ji,.
Ek Axccchi Kavita Padhne Ko Mili,.
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«Reply #3 on: November 04, 2007, 06:48:48 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RAJBIR VEERJI..
BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA AZEEM BHAI...
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2007, 02:12:13 PM »
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U'r Allways Welcome Ji,.
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2007, 05:12:46 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai khwaish ji,... hamesha ki tarah kuch alag aor kamal ka likha hai apne!!!

Good Creation!!!


Samjha kar ajj kisi ko kaya hoga
Wo ho hoga jo manjoore khuda hoga
Sunta nahi ajj koi bhi kisi ki baat
Khatam ho jaane per churcha amm hoga

Swarth hai lalach hai aor kisi ke liye manoranjan bhi
Amm insaan ki insaniyat ka blatkaar to bar bar hoga
Samjhane jayega jo bhi ajj, mara jayega bin mout ke
Dekhte rahege sab aor yah najara bar bar hoga!!!

Bichara mara gaya bina kisi ke baat ke
Ho jaane ke baad ranj ser-e-bazar hoga
Puchege shayad kuch log pahle pahle haal
Baad main phir se wo hi dobara haal hoga!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2007, 05:47:35 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai khwaish ji,... hamesha ki tarah kuch alag aor kamal ka likha hai apne!!!

Good Creation!!!


Samjha kar ajj kisi ko kaya hoga
Wo ho hoga jo manjoore khuda hoga
Sunta nahi ajj koi bhi kisi ki baat
Khatam ho jaane per churcha amm hoga

Swarth hai lalach hai aor kisi ke liye manoranjan bhi
Amm insaan ki insaniyat ka blatkaar to bar bar hoga
Samjhane jayega jo bhi ajj, mara jayega bin mout ke
Dekhte rahege sab aor yah najara bar bar hoga!!!

Bichara mara gaya bina kisi ke baat ke
Ho jaane ke baad ranj ser-e-bazar hoga
Puchege shayad kuch log pahle pahle haal
Baad main phir se wo hi dobara haal hoga!!


BAHUT KHOOB POOJA...AS USUAL,SUPERB REPLY.BAHUT HI KHOOB..
EK HI SOCH MEIN LIKHNA BAHUT MUSHKIL  HOTA HAI...AAPNE BAKHOOBI LIKHA..BAHUT ACHE POOJA
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2007, 08:01:00 PM »
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Pooja

Bahut achche behna ji =D>

Bahut sahi reply di hai tumne khwaish ki post ki !
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2007, 05:45:06 AM »
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Kya baat hai khwaish bahut hi khoob...
pooja behtereen reply...maza aa gaya aap dono ka likha padhke =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2007, 01:18:33 PM »
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Great Reply Didi,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2007, 10:47:52 AM »
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MAIN SAMAJTHA THA KI
KABHI KUCH NA KEH SAKOONGA MAIN..

BAS,HALAAT KE HAATH SE,
MAAT KHAKAR,SIRF CHUP SA REH,
SAKOONGA MAIN..

BAHUT ZAKHM DIYE HAI WAQT NE HUMEIN
AB AUR DARD NA SEH SAKOONGA MAIN

PR AB DIL MEIN EK JUNOON-E-JAZBA,
SA RAKHTA HOON,
TOOFANO KA SAAMNA KAR KE BHI,
SAMBHAL SAKTA HOON,

AB SOCHTA HOON,
ASHKO KO AANKHON MEIN SAMBHAAL KAR,
PHIR SE MUSKURA SAKOONGA MAIN..
PHIR SE JEE SAKOONGA MAIN..
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2015, 03:08:03 PM »
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Very Nice
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