bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil:Miscellaneous Shayri

salil2002

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doston shayad yeh topic aur yeh poem aap sabko ajeeb si lage magar mujhe apna yeh kalaam behad ajeej hai......asha hai aap sabko bhi pasand aayega........isme m,ohabbat ko kuch alag dhang se dikhaya hai maine

do din ka bhooka woh bachcha roti ka tukda oothata hai
toh saamne apne ek pille ko dum hilata hua pata hai
kuch soch kar de deta hai apna nivala usko
khate dekh usko woh zor se taali bajata hai

lachaar beithe hai do maa baap bete akela chhod gaye
peeth k dard se boodi maa ka lete lete hi waqt gujar jaata hai
baba karte hai oonki seva apni peeth ka dard bhool kar
kyunki zindgi kii is dhalti shaam mein sirf oonse hi naata hai

mohabbat hai har kaahin, magar mere liye alag hai iske maayne
mujhe yeh premiyo k rishte se bhi alag kucch dikhata hai
ehsaas hai yeh dard ka , majboori ka, tadap aur khalipan ka
lekin iski bandisho main bhi azaadi ka mazaa aata hai

kehne ko yeh do kahaaniya, bahut mamooli hogi
magar gaur se dekho toh inme mohabbat kii chasni paoge
oos boode ka pyaar apni biwi k liye............
waisi mohabbat kya apni mehbooba se nibha paoge

bhookh khatam kar deti hai har zazbaat ko
magar oos bhooke bachche se kya seekh paoge
bhookh oos chhote pille kii dekh woh apni bhookh bhool gaya
mohabbat mein qurbani ka aisa zazba kahaan se laoge


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: June 10, 2009, 07:59:18 AM »

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achaar beithe hai do maa baap bete akela chhod gaye
peeth k dard se boodi maa ka lete lete hi waqt gujar jaata hai
baba karte hai oonki seva apni peeth ka dard bhool kar
kyunki zindgi kii is dhalti shaam mein sirf oonse hi naata hai

Nahi kuch azeeb sa nahi laga padkar... bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne. Daad kabul kijiyega.


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: June 10, 2009, 08:05:05 AM »

Salil Bhai, Bohat Touching Hai Ye Poetry, Sachchi Ye Hoti Hai Asli Mohabbat, Great Job Yaar, Yunhi LIkhte Rehna, Intezaar ai Hume Aur Bhi Kalaam Pardhne Ke Tumhaare,.


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 08:05:43 AM »

Wow..... Wah Wah wah.. Salil Bhai... Waqai aapki Qalam Me Jaadoo Hai.. har Ek Jumla Apne aap Me Ek Succhaai liye Hue Hai.. Har Lafz Apni ek Kahaani Kaha raha hai.. Applause

Salil Bhai Humesha aapki Nazm padh kar Main Yeh soch me Padh Jata Hoon ki Taareef Me Kya Likhun.. aur Is Baar bhi aisa hi Hua hai..!! tongue3

Lajawab-Behtreen-Khubsoorat-Superb-Shaandaar yeh Lafz Bhi Kam hai Is Rachna ki taareef ke liye Bhai.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: June 10, 2009, 08:33:03 AM »

Wah wah Saahil tumhare is likhe ko Ghayel ka salam hain mere bhai.......tareef ke liye alfaz hi nahi hain mere pass. Khuda tumhe khush rakhe.


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jannatjahan

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 08:47:43 AM »

Salil Bahut achha likha hai Dear...sach mohabbat ka aisa zajba gar sabke dilon me ghar kar jaegi..us din duniya ki tasveer kuch aur hi hogi...Gud job Dear......


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poppoetry

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 09:02:59 AM »

bahut bahut khub likha h aapne Saahil ji.....sahi farmaya aapne ...
kehne ko to dono khaaniyan is sansar ki aam baat h ,lekin inme jo h chupa hua wo dard aur aansuo ka sailaab h

dil ko chu gya har lafj....... Clapping Smiley


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honeyrose

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 10:13:02 AM »

Wonderfull creation Brother dear g88 lines.. Clapping Smiley


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 11:49:26 AM »

Quote from: Roja on June 10, 2009, 07:59:18 AM

Nahi kuch azeeb sa nahi laga padkar... bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne. Daad kabul kijiyega.

shukriya roja dear..aapne pada aur saraha yeh bahut badi baat hai


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 11:50:47 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on June 10, 2009, 08:05:05 AM

Salil Bhai, Bohat Touching Hai Ye Poetry, Sachchi Ye Hoti Hai Asli Mohabbat, Great Job Yaar, Yunhi LIkhte Rehna, Intezaar ai Hume Aur Bhi Kalaam Pardhne Ke Tumhaare,.

shukriya azeem bhai.....mohabbat ek zazba hai oosi ko samajhne kii koshish karta hoon kabhi kabhi aapkopasand aaya shukriya


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 11:52:25 AM »

Quote from: Mann on June 10, 2009, 08:05:43 AM

Wow..... Wah Wah wah.. Salil Bhai... Waqai aapki Qalam Me Jaadoo Hai.. har Ek Jumla Apne aap Me Ek Succhaai liye Hue Hai.. Har Lafz Apni ek Kahaani Kaha raha hai.. Applause

Salil Bhai Humesha aapki Nazm padh kar Main Yeh soch me Padh Jata Hoon ki Taareef Me Kya Likhun.. aur Is Baar bhi aisa hi Hua hai..!! tongue3

Lajawab-Behtreen-Khubsoorat-Superb-Shaandaar yeh Lafz Bhi Kam hai Is Rachna ki taareef ke liye Bhai.. Applause

**~** Mann **~**

shukriya vicky bhai jis kadar aap hausla badate hai dil khush ho jaata hai


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 11:53:51 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 08:33:03 AM

Wah wah Saahil tumhare is likhe ko Ghayel ka salam hain mere bhai.......tareef ke liye alfaz hi nahi hain mere pass. Khuda tumhe khush rakhe.

ghayal bhai...aapke liye toh kya kahoon bas itna hi kahoonga kii aap oon chand logonb mein se hain jinhe apne thread par dekh kar itni khushi hoti hai kii bayaan nahin kar sakta


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 11:55:13 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on June 10, 2009, 08:47:43 AM

Salil Bahut achha likha hai Dear...sach mohabbat ka aisa zajba gar sabke dilon me ghar kar jaegi..us din duniya ki tasveer kuch aur hi hogi...Gud job Dear......

sahi keh rahe ho aap jannat dear magar kya baat hai aajkal aap gayab se ho aur kuch likh bhi nahi rahe hamari thread par


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k.shael

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 11:55:52 AM »

Bahut Khoob Salil, Lines azeeb nahi pyari thi, even aise log aabhi bhi hamare aas-pass moujod hai jo khud se jyada apno se pyaar aur care karte hai..

Shally.


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 12:06:19 PM »

Quote from: honeyrose on June 10, 2009, 10:13:02 AM

Wonderfull creation Brother dear g88 lines.. Clapping Smiley

thanks jaya di


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