bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

salil2002

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«Reply #15 on: June 10, 2009, 12:07:26 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 10, 2009, 11:55:52 AM

Bahut Khoob Salil, Lines azeeb nahi pyari thi, even aise log aabhi bhi hamare aas-pass moujod hai jo khud se jyada apno se pyaar aur care karte hai..

Shally.

thanks shally .........


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #16 on: June 16, 2009, 10:09:33 AM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on June 10, 2009, 07:54:05 AM

doston shayad yeh topic aur yeh poem aap sabko ajeeb si lage magar mujhe apna yeh kalaam behad ajeej hai......asha hai aap sabko bhi pasand aayega........isme m,ohabbat ko kuch alag dhang se dikhaya hai maine

do din ka bhooka woh bachcha roti ka tukda oothata hai
toh saamne apne ek pille ko dum hilata hua pata hai
kuch soch kar de deta hai apna nivala usko
khate dekh usko woh zor se taali bajata hai

lachaar beithe hai do maa baap bete akela chhod gaye
peeth k dard se boodi maa ka lete lete hi waqt gujar jaata hai
baba karte hai oonki seva apni peeth ka dard bhool kar
kyunki zindgi kii is dhalti shaam mein sirf oonse hi naata hai

mohabbat hai har kaahin, magar mere liye alag hai iske maayne
mujhe yeh premiyo k rishte se bhi alag kucch dikhata hai
ehsaas hai yeh dard ka , majboori ka, tadap aur khalipan ka
lekin iski bandisho main bhi azaadi ka mazaa aata hai

kehne ko yeh do kahaaniya, bahut mamooli hogi
magar gaur se dekho toh inme mohabbat kii chasni paoge
oos boode ka pyaar apni biwi k liye............
waisi mohabbat kya apni mehbooba se nibha paoge

bhookh khatam kar deti hai har zazbaat ko
magar oos bhooke bachche se kya seekh paoge
bhookh oos chhote pille kii dekh woh apni bhookh bhool gaya
mohabbat mein qurbani ka aisa zazba kahaan se laoge

Bohot Khoob Salil Clapping Smiley

In maamooli kahaniyon main bohot gehri baatain, insaan ke sachche aur masoom jazbaat chupe hain.....bohot khoobsurti se tumne in ko lafzon main piroya hai...!!

Bohot Khoob dear !


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #17 on: June 16, 2009, 10:24:03 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 10:09:33 AM

Bohot Khoob Salil Clapping Smiley

In maamooli kahaniyon main bohot gehri baatain, insaan ke sachche aur masoom jazbaat chupe hain.....bohot khoobsurti se tumne in ko lafzon main piroya hai...!!

Bohot Khoob dear !

thank u di .....i was desperately waitin for ur comments


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madhuwesh

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #18 on: June 16, 2009, 10:25:10 AM »

:icon_salut:Wah wah Saahil ji,kitna dard hai,dil ko chu gayee aapke
poem ne,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #19 on: June 16, 2009, 10:28:02 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 16, 2009, 10:25:10 AM

:icon_salut:Wah wah Saahil ji,kitna dard hai,dil ko chu gayee aapke
poem ne,excellent,very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley

thnks madhuu dear


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #20 on: June 17, 2009, 07:33:07 PM »

Sry for the late reply...Bahaut acha likha hai apne Sahil bhaijan...Bahaut hi acha..


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2009, 07:57:42 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on June 17, 2009, 07:33:07 PM

Sry for the late reply...Bahaut acha likha hai apne Sahil bhaijan...Bahaut hi acha..

late reply wali koi baat hi nahin bhai ..aapko achcha lagayahi bahut hai mere liye


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #22 on: June 18, 2009, 08:20:07 AM »

bahut bahut khoob salil bhai..aapne dil ko chuu jane wali baatein kahin hai iss nazm mein,aapne jis tareeke se apni soch ko lafzo mein dhaala hai,padhkar iss baat ka yakeen hone lagta hai ke vaakai mohabbat ke kitne rang hote hai..bahut bahut ache salil..


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #23 on: June 18, 2009, 08:34:12 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 18, 2009, 08:20:07 AM

bahut bahut shukriya khwahish bhai....aap jaisa shayar tareef kare toh khud par fakhra hota hai


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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #24 on: June 18, 2009, 08:43:21 AM »

WAAH WAAH SAAHIL JI,BAHUT DARD CHHUPA HAI EK EK LAFZ ME JI,
BADIYA EHSAAS HAI BAHUT UMDA


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #25 on: June 18, 2009, 08:45:52 AM »

thnks shabana dear,,,,,,,,,,,,


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Pooja

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 06:08:19 AM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on June 10, 2009, 07:54:05 AM

Saahil, apko jitna parr rahi hu, utani he apki likhne ki gahraai ka andaza hota ja raha hai...

Apki is kavita ko kai baar parra.... ek ek shabd dil ki gahrai se utra hua, dard ain lipta hua.. her ek parne wale ki chetna ko jagata hua... wah wah wah... bahoot khoob.. jitni bhi parshansa karu.. utani he kam... Good work Dear,,, wonderful creation...
God Bless you!!
You make me Proud again!!


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salil2002

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Re: bhookh , dard aur mohabbat ~~~ Saahil

«Reply #27 on: July 11, 2009, 05:45:21 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 06:08:19 AM

thanks a lot di ......
meri wajah se aapko khushi huyi yeh mere liye bahut badi baat hai aapne meri poem ko pada iska maayna samjha ... bahut baar maine logonm ko comment karte dekha hai aur bahut baar yeh mehsoos kiya kii log meri poori poem nahin padte.....magar aap jaise chand kadardaan yahan par hai jo na sirf abhi bhi mujhe padte hain balki sarahte bhi hain .....shukriya didi


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