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Talat

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«Reply #15 on: March 19, 2008, 10:48:10 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on March 19, 2008, 10:04:37 AM

sach baat to ye hai janab....
ke mai kai baar Harsh ji ki aur talat ji ki post hi padata rah jata hun aur... apani post karana bhool jata hun......

aur aap logon ko padane ke baad to mujhe shaq hone laga hai ke mai shayar bhi hun ya nahi....
aur ek baat gar aap log meri koi post pade to jaroor kuch guide kare .......
aap logon se mujhe kuch sikhna hai...

your admire..........hats up....for both of you....

Bohot bohot shukriya Bekarar....aapne to sharminda kar diya... Thankyou !

for your compliments Usual Smile


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harashmahajan

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Re: Bhookhey NaNgey Shaher maiN harsooN baste haiN khaleefe log

«Reply #16 on: March 20, 2008, 03:17:08 AM »

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Bohot bohot shukriya Harash aapki izzatafzaai ka.....hum aapko kya sikhayenge, hum to khud aapse seekhte hain...bohot bohot shukriya ki aapko humare sher pasand aaye...

Bohot hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne....

Aankh main paani nahin, dil main koi dhadkan nahin
Buton ki dunya main ab pathar ban gaye hain log

Koi apna nahin dikhta, wohi banawati chehre
In chehron ke peeche kyun chup gaye hain log

Dard ko wo kya samjhen, kya jaane dil ki baaton ko
Hum reh gaye peeche bohot, aage badh gaye hain log !!

Bahoot bahoot shukriyaa^h Talat ji.... bohat khoobsorat ashars post kiye haiN huzoor Talat ji aapne... aaj aapne memre dil ke kareeb our sabse pasaNdiida ashars post kiye.... aapko merii jaanib se duaoN ka dher mubarak ho... Our agay se Bekrar sahib ne bhi aisa reply kar ke toh humari pyaari zaban ka haal hi kharab kar diya ...wazeh aap bane our Sehra kutchh is our khisak aya. ..

Aisi ralli ki talash maiN na jaane sanam kahaaN-kahaaN gaye
Kisi gali maiN aisa talabgaar na mila hum JahaaN-jahaaN gaye.

Aapke ashars ke jawaabmaiN ab kya kahooN...our logoN ke baare maiN kehna apne aap maiN hi ek fazool si baat hai....

hum bhi hue dewaane aakhir dewanoN ki basti maiN
Koi toh apna doondne nikle beganoN ki basti maiN.

Chehra per chera laga ker har pal so-so rang bhare
Hum kho baithhe apni haqeekat afsaanoN ki basti maiN.

Jinki khatir khud ko jalaya woh perwane raakh hue,
Shama khadi hai muzrim banker parwanoN ki basti maiN.

Bhoot kaho ya keh do pathher gumrahi dastoor yahaN
'harash' KahaN tak bhatkoge tum veeranoN ki basti maiN

Harash


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harashmahajan

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Re: Bhookhey NaNgey Shaher maiN harsooN baste haiN khaleefe log

«Reply #17 on: March 20, 2008, 03:38:53 AM »

Bekrar wrote:-

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bekerar sahab ashars kii pasaNdagii ke liye maiN aapka shukr_guzaar hooN ......our janaab aapkii iss inaayat ke liye dil se mamnoon bhi hooN....maiN apne dostoN ki hausalaa_afzaaii aour aapki our unkii shirkat ka dil se shukr_guzaar hooN aour ummiid rakhtaa hooN kii aaiNdaa bhii apne jazbaat se iss bazm ki raunkeN baRhaate raheNge....khudaa aap ko salaamat rakhe...

Ye hamare lafz-e-andaaz nahiN jinhone rujha kiya tumko
Ye tumhara pyaar hi hai jo hamaare lafzoN ne paya hai

sadaa khush rahiye..

Harash


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Talat

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Re: Bhookhey NaNgey Shaher maiN harsooN baste haiN khaleefe log

«Reply #18 on: March 20, 2008, 03:39:34 PM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 20, 2008, 03:17:08 AM

Aisi ralli ki talash maiN na jaane sanam kahaaN-kahaaN gaye
Kisi gali maiN aisa talabgaar na mila hum JahaaN-jahaaN gaye.

Aapke ashars ke jawaabmaiN ab kya kahooN...our logoN ke baare maiN kehna apne aap maiN hi ek fazool si baat hai....

Bohot bohot shukriya...Harash..aapki izzatafzaai ka, hauslaafzaai ka.....Hume bohot khushi hai ki aapne humara likhna pasand kiya..tah-e-dil se shukriya Thankyou !

Bohot hi umda likha hai aapne... Applause

Ye shahar hai veeraan sa
Dikhta nahin koi insaan sa

Dikhte hain afsurda chehre
Uthaye kaandho pe saamaan sa

Tanha kabhi aise na the
Milta nahin koi humzubaan sa

Chath aur deewaaron ke saaye
Ghar nahin, bas ek makaan sa


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #19 on: March 20, 2008, 06:27:05 PM »

Bahoot bahoot shukriya....Talat ji merii jaanib se aapko bhi aapki tehreer per dher saarii mubaarak_baad haazir hai....Allaah aapko apnii parchhaayioN maiN rakkhe...

Talat wrote:-

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JahaaN cactus bhi nahi kabil jeene ke
wahaN mmaiNe khwaboN ka bageecha lagaya hai
Jarra-jarra zindagi ki aahat se mehfooz rahe
Mout ke is sheher maiN Fatwa badalwaya hai.

Harash


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punam

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«Reply #20 on: March 20, 2008, 06:42:48 PM »

Main toh yehan kuch kehene ki kabil bhi nahi hun...Harsh ji and Talat di...aap bahot khoob likhte ho...


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #21 on: March 21, 2008, 03:43:41 AM »

Shukrriyaa Punam ji.....Jo insaan is plateform per aa gaya...woh kaabil hi kabil hai punamm ji


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Re: Bhookhey NaNgey Shaher maiN harsooN baste haiN khaleefe log

«Reply #22 on: March 21, 2008, 05:14:23 AM »

Thanks harsh ji.....
and the thing is ..
ke apaki urdu pe pakad bahoot hi achchi hai...
lekin mai apase guzarish karunga ke aap sirf six / chah alfaz me yani ke ek line me sirf chah alfaz hon aisi koi nazm a gazal likhen.....
aisa mujhe kisi aur ne karane ke liye kaha hai aur mai isame apaki madad chahunga balki sabhi yo indian se kahunga...
haa jab mai use ye sunaunga to harsh ji aapka naam jarur bataunga...


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«Reply #23 on: March 21, 2008, 06:27:53 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on March 21, 2008, 05:14:23 AM

bekerar ji maiN aapka intahayii mashkoor hooN..ke aapko hamari zubaaN maiN urdu zubaaN ki mithhas nazer aayii..ye sab ap logoN ka diya ilm hai dost..Verna hmare maiN kya mazaal ke hum ise poorri tarah pakad sakeiN....Be-hadd shukria bekerar jee
Mujhe acha laga ye jaan kar k atleast kisi k to dil ki aawaaz hui meri shaairy,keep visiting.

Ab aapke swaal per Gour kerooNga ke aap kehna kya chahte haiN mere zehen maiN utra nahiN.....aapka six/chah se kya matlab hai....lafz chaar ya six ya...chag...jo hindi maiN hota hai....aap ise tafseel se samjhayeiN......

Bohat sa khush rahiye

Harash


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Re: Bhookhey NaNgey Shaher maiN harsooN baste haiN khaleefe log

«Reply #24 on: March 21, 2008, 08:09:06 AM »

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 21, 2008, 06:27:53 AM

Quote from: bekarar on March 21, 2008, 05:14:23 AM

imean to say only six words in one line +/- one may allowed.
for ex.
mere dard ke afsane kya sunaun..
tere julmon ke fasane kya sunaun.
meri badnaseebi mashhoor hai jamane me.
kyonkar ye kahani tum sabko sunaun


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harashmahajan

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«Reply #25 on: March 21, 2008, 08:29:50 AM »

Adaab bekrar ji.......bohat hi haseen andaz hai aapka bhai,Ek achha our pu-asar ashar... ....isi tarah khubsoorat ashar likhte rahain aur is forum ko pur-ronak rakhain, best wishes.....

ShartoN per yuiN hi amal maangte haiN....
humari kalam se hi kalaam maangte haiN...bai waah....

Leejiye janaaB koshish kerte haiN ki alfaaz six ki hud tak baspa raheiN.....

Uthha jo aitbaar apne yaar ka,
bas hua hai silsila Intzaar ka.

Kumlah gaye haiN phool mere bag ke
Dafn ho gaya hai mousamm karar ka.

Chhero na koi sur,abhi meri iltaza
Waise bhi nahiN hai, mousam bahar ka.

Achhi nahiN lagti mujhe ab koi sada,
Kya karooN maiN 'Harsh' apne ikhtiyaar ka.

Harash


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«Reply #26 on: March 21, 2008, 01:55:46 PM »

Very Touching Harsh Ji,.
nice One,.


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«Reply #27 on: March 23, 2008, 01:16:51 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on March 21, 2008, 08:09:06 AM

Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 21, 2008, 06:27:53 AM

Quote from: bekarar on March 21, 2008, 05:14:23 AM

Bohat hi khoob likha hai Harash ji aur bekarar ji .. Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #28 on: March 24, 2008, 03:29:41 AM »

bahoot bahoot shukriyaa^h jaanasheen ji our honey ji...khush raheiN....Harash


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«Reply #29 on: March 24, 2008, 02:23:00 PM »

U Are Welcome Ji,.


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