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manzil-e-ishq
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chalo manzilo ko bhulaya jaye
aaj raaho se dil ko bahlaya jaye
wo dil me base hai khayalo ki manind
to kyu na unhe fir sataya jaye
agar kal mile to na ruswaiya ho
kuch yun shikwo ko mitaya jaye
bahut aazmaya hai isne humko
chalo zindagi ko aazmaya jaye
chalo manzilo ko bhulaya jaye
aaj raaho se dil ko bahlaya jaye
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2010, 09:19:45 AM » |
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bahut badhiya..3rd one i like d most~
bahut khoob manzil ji..
dher saari daad...
likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2010, 09:27:34 AM » |
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wow Priya ji...
mast likha hai or haan 3rd line to dil ko sukoon de gai:)
bahut khoob..
likhte rahiye or bhi
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2010, 10:01:22 AM » |
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shukria abhi ji.... 3rd one is my favourate also.... bahut badhiya..3rd one i like d most~
bahut khoob manzil ji..
dher saari daad...
likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2010, 02:27:57 PM » |
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wahh
janab wah
kya baat hai aap ki peshkash to rahi bhai ko sunni thi suna denge ham pakkaaa
bhut hi badhiya likha hai aap ne
hamen bhi likhna aap logon se sikhna padega
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2010, 02:38:04 PM » |
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bahoot bahoot khoob priya ji...
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 08:11:49 AM » |
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thanx alot kb ji wow Priya ji...
mast likha hai or haan 3rd line to dil ko sukoon de gai:)
bahut khoob..
likhte rahiye or bhi
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2010, 08:13:06 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2010, 08:13:43 AM » |
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shukrai tkd ji.... wahh
janab wah
kya baat hai aap ki peshkash to rahi bhai ko sunni thi suna denge ham pakkaaa
bhut hi badhiya likha hai aap ne
hamen bhi likhna aap logon se sikhna padega
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2010, 08:14:43 AM » |
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thanx alot sophi ji...... bahoot bahoot khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2010, 08:17:18 AM » |
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ishq ko manzil mil jaye
ufante saagar ko ik kasti mil jaye
***(o.¤)***
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2010, 08:19:19 AM » |
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ufnate saagar me to kashti doob jayegi... nahi kb ji... ishq ko manzil mil jaye
ufante saagar ko ik kasti mil jaye
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2010, 08:55:52 AM » |
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ye lo humne aisi wesi nhi pyar ki ishq ki kasti ki baat kri thi...aapne chapakk se dubo dia usko ekdum se
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2010, 08:49:27 AM » |
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bahaut acchey aashaar hain manzil-e-ishq ji. ek sukoon aur thehraav ka ehsaas karaatey hain. andaaz e bayaan bhi umda hai.
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